Elf Cultivation Trainer Tongmu

Jiangjiang is here, with Samyang turkey noodles, gold and silver steamed buns, crispy oven-roasted duck, and pancakes filled with crispy pretzels and grilled sausages. CALL for this great book, yeah yeah yeah!

As for this book, there seems to be no connection between the beginning and the rest. The protagonist is a Pokémon game lover at the beginning, and then travels through time and space to sacrifice his parents to the gods. However, he is adopted and has a happy family. The character is smart and calm, and is decisive in killing. The protagonist of the story seems to be joining Team Rocket in the end.

I saw that the first order results posted by the author were not very good, so I'd better take my time. The author's writing is quite good, with clear logic and smooth writing in the elf text. The plot and elf strength are based on the settings but have their own unique ideas. There are no inexplicable flaws. Overall, it is quite good. There are indeed not many books on elves that I can read or follow at the moment. I hope this book will get better and better.

Let's build a forum. I saw a writer counting people who read books like this. Haha, I'll deduct 1 from those who are reading. I won't reply to this forum. 😜

Seeing that the author disbanded Junyang, let me tell you, I wrote the wrong way from the Johto area. The impression of the book at the beginning was that it was mainly about travel, training, and cultivation, so this group of people was attracted to read the author's book. Such a big change has lost the original flavor, and the new one is terrible. Fewer and fewer people will read it, especially the sacrifice of the flaming horse is a big failure. This is why I gave up the book. What a shame, I still liked it at the beginning

Nowadays, there are still few elves who can defeat them, and the protagonist's character is sometimes stable and sometimes childish The first thing a trainer must learn is to subdue them. ——Oki Yukinari

Personally, I think Sakaki is the most charismatic and powerful among all versions of the villain boss. 🙂

I felt that after the fierce horse was sacrificed. I just don't want to watch anymore. I don't know why, maybe I like to watch something a little bland. I like to see those adventures, accidents, bonds, and evolution, But I still hope the author can write better. Come on!

There are issues with rhythm control. We reached the eighth gym in more than 100 chapters, but none of the elves on the home team were convinced. There is also the issue of the character of the protagonist. The beginning is about preparation and self-discipline, which gives the protagonist a stable character. Some of his actions in the later period make people think that the protagonist is a little childish. The issue of writing is more like a game style than a TV animation. Of course, the author's writing style is not bad, his knowledge reserve is sufficient, and his settings are also rigorous. In the current era when the system and urban elf literature are overflowing, this pure elf novel is definitely an eye-catching type. What is even more valuable is that the author is a newcomer. The more he writes and the more experience he accumulates, the more promising the future will be. Finally, I hope that the author will get better and better as he writes more, and become a great master soon.

I'll go, have you finished the book? The writing is okay.

Garlic Bastard

Vulcan Moth

In an era when 8 out of 10 Qidian books have systems, it is very rare to have no system, so I pursued this one.

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Could the author write less elf monologues? The key is that your writing style is not very good. Writing a dialogue between the elf and the protagonist feels like the author is enjoying himself. The description of the elf's movements and expression should be enough.

Posts from Game DNA (searched on Du Niang)

I can't stand it anymore after reading about 80 chapters. It's a bit boring and has no highlights. I always meet people with third-rate characters who talk trash and it's annoying

Come on, I like watching it very much. Although it is a bit bland, it is very rigorous. I hope the first order data is better, after all, the first order is quite important.

No, doesn't Banmu like strong people? Tongshu is so weak, why would he recruit Tongshu?

Why do these chapters have a strange smell? It feels so strange.

I ordered it all and read Chapter 192, so I was persuaded to leave. Goodbye 😒😒😒

PM article reviewer is coming hahahaha‼ ️‼ ️‼ ️ First of all, I read the comments and found their poisonous points very confusing The cultivation process and battles are very easy to write. Maybe the author followed the standards of the Sunny Sky team to conquer the elves, so some people think it is ordinary. Running account I have read more than thirty chapters. The look and feel is pretty good I hope the author will work hard, I believe the subsequent results will not be too bad 😚mimi Yes, yes, if you describe more about the personality of each elf, maybe it will be more brilliant 😭😭😭

I think this book is relatively well-written. Trainers will have their own ideas. From some of the details of cultivation and training, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of thought into it. The early style of the elves is more daily and realistic, and the bond with the elves is also very interesting. However, the subsequent issues about the plot may be affected by the cliff-like decline in subscriptions and real life, so I did not spend a lot of energy to conceive. This is why I think it is a pity. I think this book was read by many people in the early stage, and many readers expressed their thoughts and discussed some details with the author. The author also gave some reasonable explanations for the setting. In this way, a lot of people read this book before it was put on the shelves, but there are more than 130 chapters. The cliff-like drop in subscriptions on the shelves may have frightened the author. I can't accept such a big gap in subscriptions. But having said that, in real life, anything is possible. I can only say that more good-looking books should support genuine ones. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Crystal Lamp Fire Spirit

Boom Monster

Will Paulownia be whitewashed in the later stages or at the end?

The Vulcan Moth has the title of a demigod, and can successfully capture and kill ten Vulcan Moths. There is no way he can be just three little elves with him. This adventure part doesn't make sense

Here comes a Lizard King, a seed machine gun, parasitic seeds and crazy plants. Function: The seed machine gun will cause a parasitic effect when hitting the elves. Because there are a lot of seed machine guns, there are also a lot of parasitic seeds, plus the damage of crazy plants.

Author, I would like to ask why the protagonist did not train with the elves

You can let Tongmu play the Qingsha team, so that there are more elves to choose from, and let the strong enemy play the Yubing team, so the confrontation will be better. Then the current elves plus the nine-tailed (sunshine) fire-breathing dragon (power of the sun), a certain super-powered elf, Bangila, Biting Land Shark, and Desert Dragonfly are all suitable for Qingsha Team. (Let Charizard evolve into