
One Piece: Xuanwu Arrives
海贼之玄武降临
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 101k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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64Chapters
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If the protagonist is fighting for hegemony, he must be a hero, and the protagonist's character must be well-characterized! Kuina is not suitable to be the heroine, she is too kind-hearted, and she should not be related to the protagonist Ren Heren. Your start is more Shiro and I feel a little numb. Also, the protagonist is not suitable for using swords. Have you ever seen the animal type who uses swords? The combination of fruit and body is the strongest direction of animal type. Just add physical walking and fruit.
Xuanwu(๑`・ᴗ・´๑)
There are too few words. If you don't update more, no one will read it.
The god's tortoise, the fruit of the phantom beast. This is clearly an animal-type fruit-based phantom beast with a basalt form.
Seriously, don't take the hegemony route, you're not very good at writing! (Of course I won't) The protagonist is too kind, and the domineering power he brought from his previous life can be given to others! You write about the nosy Virgin! Oh no, the Holy Mother is a bit ugly! Just call him Jesus from the pirate world.
Be reasonable. How big is Xuanwu? Is it bigger than the statue owner?
If you want to become a pirate, you must first have your own ship. You can't just ride on it all the time! When was the pirate group formed? To get to Magic Valley Town, it's best to go one by one and pick up a few friends along the way, such as chefs, doctors, snipers, etc. Don't go directly to Magic Valley Town. If the author has his own plans, just pretend I didn't say it
Shouldn't it be the animal fruit-phantom beast species-Xuanwu?
It's hard to imagine what it's like for a tortoise to use a sword
Don't people who write pirate novels have any common sense? The strength of each protagonist is so small: the physical fitness is so poor, either no weight is mentioned or more weight is written. Just one weight is so expensive. The one hundred tons of dumbbells used by Zoro should not be expensive, but Zoro is not. The lowest pirate's strength should start at one ton. Anyone with kilograms is a weakling
What about the updates these days? ? ?
Understand?
Xuanwu, ability: There are five great divine beasts, the first in defense, bigger than the pirate elephant ancestor in terms of size (there is a vassal kingdom on the back of Xuanwu in the legend of the mountain and sea path in China). It is also the first among the five divine beasts in terms of poisoning, invincibility in water, longevity, and super-controlling regional gravity (gravity magical power). Seal (when Xuanwu cannot defeat his opponent, he will use the extra black armor on his back to gravity seal it on Xuanwu's back to deny himself) I hope the author can take a look for reference.