Global Undead Calamity

I thought there was no female protagonist, but the author directly said that there was a female protagonist, so I said goodbye.

It's okay to have a female protagonist, but it's just a harem stallion and brainless. If there is no female protagonist, the novel will be less enjoyable. I quite like this book on strategy and explosives.

If you delete all the real-life scenes between the brother and the girl, your book will gain at least half of the readers. No desire is not just what you say. At least the protagonist you wrote is not who you said. To put it bluntly, the good setting and framework were ruined by your lack of ability. The manifestation of your lack of ability is to forcibly create conflicts and bloody realistic plots.

To be honest, I don't like this highly intelligent female protagonist very much. It's better to kill her by letting the male protagonist kill her. Moreover, the male protagonist doesn't need a girlfriend no matter what. It doesn't fit the setting. Isn't the male protagonist almost emotionless? And if your setting becomes stronger in the future, you can master multiple laws. Don't tell me that a person can master one law in his lifetime.

Has this author never seen a woman? ? ?

It is no exaggeration to say that if I were to control the souls of the dead, Marx would be able to emerge from the earth and write a few more volumes of "Das Kapital"

Name: City of Sighs Occupation: Castle Gender: None Birth: The Law of Death is condensed Treasure: Book of Death and Dark Magic Skills: Summoning undead troops (requires a certain amount of money and specific resources) Introduction: A castle condensed by the Law of Death, Will be further upgraded to the Kingdom of God as the main protagonist {"NickName":"Book Friends 20170530235351359","UserId":302519077}

Oh, Shet, look what you wrote? Undead! Infinite energy, easy to reproduce, easy to survive, and requires almost no resources in the future! Almost no betrayal! And he has some wisdom! There is a big difference between a magician and a scientist using the same resources between taking the western fantasy route and taking the technological route! The former can be shot at most 10, and the latter, as long as there is a breakthrough, immediately split the assembly line to allow the production of skeleton soldiers and let real warriors wear armor. And! ! ! Even if you can't follow science, just by raising animals in captivity, you can still get a large number of corpses, which can definitely be recycled and develop quickly! As for food? Just look at the description of the undead at the beginning and you will understand.

When this type of game comes out, don't write about reality. If you write about reality, you must also provide players with mechanisms to ensure safety and freedom! For example, system security protection, such as being able to enter one's own plane instantly... This is nothing. If it is exposed, it will leave such a big flaw. If you can't compare in the game, I will kill the people I compete with 😃 In the early stage, according to my conditions, I can win over and control a lot of people with the resources in real life, let alone those big consortiums, leaders and the like!

The author changed the first chapter! Being dumped by a woman at the beginning. Really not many people like this routine anymore. It was a routine ten years ago. After 30 years in Hedong and 30 years in Hexi, this routine has been played badly. The readers who played it feel disgusted. You have the strength to persuade readers to quit.