Global Undead Calamity

I thought there was no female lead, but the author directly stated that there is. Goodbye.

Having a female lead isn't a problem, as long as it's not a harem/womanizer story or mindless plot. Novels without female leads tend to be less engaging. I quite like the strategy and troop-building aspects of this book.

If you cut all the realistic scenes involving your brother and that woman, your book would gain at least half again as many readers. Saying you have no desires isn't just talk; at least the protagonist you wrote isn't like that at all. Frankly, a good premise and framework were ruined because of your lack of ability. This lack of ability manifests in forcibly creating conflict and melodramatic realistic plot points.

To be honest, I don't really like this highly intelligent female lead. Just kill her off, preferably by the male lead. Besides, the male lead doesn't seem to need a girlfriend at all, which doesn't fit the character's established traits. Isn't he practically devoid of emotions? And does this setup mean that once he becomes powerful, he can master multiple laws? Don't tell me one person can master only one law in their lifetime.

Has this author never seen a woman before?

It's no exaggeration to say that if I had control over the dead, Marx could crawl out of the ground and write several more volumes of "Capital".

Name: City of Sighs Occupation: Castle Gender: None Birth: The Condensation of the Laws of Death Treasure: Book of Death and Dark Magic Skill: Summon undead units (requires a certain amount of money and specific resources) Introduction: The castle formed from the rules of death will be further upgraded into a divine kingdom, with the protagonist as the main character. @Reader

Oh, shit, look what you've written! Undead! Unlimited energy, easy reproduction, easy survival, almost no resource consumption afterward! Almost never betrays! And possesses a certain level of intelligence! A mage using the same resources is vastly different from a scientist on a Western fantasy or technological path!

When these kinds of games come out, don't try to depict reality. If you do, you need to provide players with mechanisms to ensure their safety and freedom! For example, system security protection, or the ability to instantly enter your own dimension in real life... There's nothing like that. If you're exposed, it'll leave such a huge flaw.

The author should have revised the first chapter! The trope of a character being dumped by a woman at the beginning is really outdated; it's a ten-year-old trope. After all the ups and downs, this trope has been overused and readers are sick of it. This is really driving readers away.