I Gain 100,000 Combat Power Every Day

I feel that driving is a bit too much. You don't have to use driving memes to make memes. You can use other memes, like Dragon King memes: "If I hadn't paid the rent last month, I wouldn't have stayed in this rental house," etc.

This novel is very good, it does make people laugh, but it feels too monotonous, regardless of spiritual practice! Environment! The worldview and so on are not very complete. Let's talk about spiritual practice first. This book is divided into many realms, but it also suffers from the common problem of many systematic novels nowadays, that is, realms have no connotation. For example, many novels practice qi to absorb energy upgrades, and golden elixirs absorb energy to upgrade. In the end, they all become immortals, or they are still simply absorbing energy. How did you condense your golden elixir? What does it look like? What tribulation did you undergo to become an immortal? A disaster that can be overcome with a lightning rod? You are a Dharma practitioner, so your body has not changed? If you are a physical practitioner, you must be as hard as a steel plate? When a man and a woman have sex, should the woman do the steel plate? Cultivation does not cultivate strength! But the transformation of life level! There is also a lack of description of the environment, and many of the jokes are dry without the environment. The worldview is written very roughly. Perhaps the author thought it through in detail, but did not write it out. To sum up, if you remove the protagonist's plot and cheats, you will find that there is almost nothing left. In fact, the novel is too monotonous. The author can try to gradually fill in some details into the novel to make the novel fuller. The authors I mentioned above can consider this. After all, the novel is dry and relies only on the protagonist's mouth to make jokes, which can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue.

It feels like your 100,000 combat power is no different from Dragon Ball's 10 combat power.

The combat power in the book is comparable to that of Zimbabwean currency, both of which are large in denomination, worthless and scary.

One hundred thousand combat power is not as strong as Dragon Ball's 50 combat power.

This super power bureau, especially the director, makes me feel sick. A group of people feel that it is right to kill their whole family after seeing the Hokage. I don't know what they think. The protagonist was almost beaten to death because he didn't register the situation because he didn't know the situation. This director is still seeking immortality under the guise of saving the world. If he is selfless and can barely be considered a figure, then he can only be considered a villain with no lower limit.

Only 100,000 a day? How long do you have to live to defeat Frieza? What a noob!

The combat effectiveness is on the same level as the Zimbabwe dollar

The free chapter was good, but once it got involved with a woman, it suddenly turned into garbage. It was a waste of such a good start and just walked away.

Niutou should be changed to three or four numbers. Shout in the comments, so come check it out. After reading online articles for so many years, the current situation is still the same. Either the subject matter is novel, there are ideas and content, and the writing must be good. There may not be many people in the early stage, but if you persist, you will have a chance to become popular. Either you just come here for the money. There will always be a market for Xiaobai's Shuangwen. There are many people who have read online articles for many years and can't stand Xiaobai's articles. However, there are new people joining the ranks of reading Internet articles every year. Therefore, Xiaobai's Shuangwen is also rich and profitable. Then I want to talk about my current thoughts. Niutou writes books more in the direction of ideas rather than cool writing. So what I mentioned is an idea that is closer to this part. Is it allowed to play tricks while driving? Yes, but the scale and quantity must be measured. Pornographic memes are the same as pornographic jokes in real life. If you don't handle it well, you can easily attract bad feelings. Scale and quantity must be controlled. Vulgar memes are not just pornographic memes, for example, three days and two nights of sleep, but more about shit and peeing. Even so, you won't feel sick and uncomfortable after reading his description. This is the right measure. In fact, you can refer to Guo Degang's cross talk for this aspect. Then, the writing written by Niutou feels a little nonsensical. There is also a scale problem here in the nonsensical. If it is a suitable scale, it will be nonsensical enough. If it is excessively nonsensical, it will feel like a madman will tear apart. I read a paragraph, and the general idea is that although Stephen Chow's movies are nonsensical, Stephen Chow's performance is serious and down-to-earth. This is exaggeration. The reason why I mention the nonsensical scale is because in the recent chapters, the behavior of the characters has changed quite a lot, and the excessive nonsensical descriptions make it impossible to clearly see the core of the characters' behavior. It was a mixed bag at the beginning, and I accepted it directly. This is okay, and it can lead to the main plot later. Hey, there is a sublimation later. The protagonist intends to find a safe world for ordinary people to live in, but the last sentence is "It's quite passionate to think about it." This directly blurs the question. I don't know whether the protagonist wants to do this or not. In the latest chapter, the protagonist is carrying out the same behavior as before, running away after pulling people in. The behavior of the characters is quite consistent, but they just don't have this plan. If you pull it twice like this, the character will be torn apart. Niutou is a person with ideas, but under such a name and writing so many articles, it feels like there is no outline, no main line, no character setting, and it is more like a sketch. I hope you can break through this and write your ideas better. Or you can try to write cool articles for beginners. No matter what, you can perform better if you have clear choices.