The New Spore Age

If you invest, don't chase it, because you can't get your money back at all. Currently, I am the only one pursuing the investment. It seems that everyone is very sane and understands the status of this book. It is good, good, and sane and book-friendly.

Every great person should implement his own will and not be affected by external things. Don't do anything wrong. He should add various factors and impossible things to everything he does. Don't come up with solutions at critical moments or at the last moment. I hope that the later system will be analyzed by the protagonist and become a part of him. After all, the essence of greatness cannot accommodate things that do not belong to him.

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The idea is very good and the front is also good. But the rest of it feels uninteresting, the writing is very messy, and there is no main line. What on earth is the protagonist going to do? It's about assimilating parasitic humans and various creatures. It's quite unpleasant to watch. All creatures in the world have become clones of the protagonist. What's the point of not having the ability to be autonomous? Even the possibility of conflicts is gone. If it doesn't work, just go to the stars and the sea. Given the current abilities of the protagonist, I don't quite understand why he is still holding on.

The pig's feet were displayed in front of Dr. Yang. Dr. Yang and his daughter's expressions were not frightened, but calm? ? ? Ms. Wen also had the same problem. She was not scared at all, and she just said whatever she asked. The feeling of a broken worldview was not expressed in the writing. As a scientist and scholar, Dr. Yang does not use unknown intelligent life forms to describe the other party, but uses "god" to refer to him? It is not in line with the temperament of a scholar at all. "The greatest weapon of mankind is nuclear energy" is a bit awkward. The world in the article is called the Earth, and the ocean it is located in is called the Imperial Sea. Readers all know where the Imperial Sea refers to, but the country it belongs to (everyone knows the reference to China) actually found a "priest" to negotiate with the pig's feet? Shouldn't it be monks and Taoist priests? The priest claimed that he was a native of the earth - a human being, which embarrassed me again. If I remember correctly, the word aboriginal was mainly used to refer to the derogatory name used by foreign colonists (white Europeans) to the local people. Earth's indigenous people, Earth's native intelligent life sounds better Because the pig's feet did not respond, this move made the top human beings a little angry? It is planned to use weapons to test, and the excerpted plot does not have the cautious behavioral logic of our country at all. I feel very young.

Glacial Human

Once the contract is signed, everyone can invest. What if... What if I become popular? 😰

After reading Chapter 96. Personally, I can't read on, maybe because the protagonist's soul is no longer human. I think novels are worthwhile if they have a flash of humanity, but this novel describes the protagonist's gradual disillusionment of the glory of humanity, and allows the supporting characters to bloom, so the story is even more uncomfortable.

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To be honest, I really can't understand the author's bad taste. There are not many novels about evolution from cells at the beginning. The first ten chapters or so are actually quite good. However, starting from Wen Jiaqi's episode, it begins to enter an inexplicable entanglement. The author seems to want to express that the protagonist is an independent species, different from humans, and has its own independent interests and values; but he does not want the protagonist to be too ruthless and have too much conflict with humans. At the same time, as for Wen Jiaqi and Dr. Yang, I wonder if the author is a graduate student in real life. The two people in the article correspond to the author's two enemies, two human beings, who were caught by the protagonist to dig holes and dance with rubber bands? Creatures have evolved for so many years, and there are so many creatures that are good at digging holes. In the end, the author chose to let people dig holes, or in a forced way, while saying that he was not ruthless, while doing things to enslave others. If these two characters are very important in the later stage, they can be put into hibernation first and then released when they need to be used to advance the plot, instead of always explaining how the protagonist can find a way to "take care" of the two. So I think if the author really doesn't know how to arrange the development of characters and plot, he can look at the 4.6 Billion Reprise of Evolution. If there are no necessary characters or plot, there is no need to write it. A deliberately arranged plot can only be superfluous.