Douluo: Hang up and Become a God

If you don't know how to create conflicts, don't force yourself. The conflict between the protagonist and the master, and the series of conflicts in Shrek Academy are simply rubbish. The portrayal of the protagonist is not done well. I saw some of the protagonists before it was put on the shelves, which gave me a very bad impression. If it is better, it should be about creating self-made soul skills and improving soul rings. This aspect can be exciting but also quite poisonous. The protagonist's power of thinking directly throws off a large amount of the master's years of research. Readers can make their own choices in this aspect.

I have read more than 250 chapters, so I can barely comment on this book. Later readers, please don't read this, if you really want to read the free chapters. If the content is simply adapted and edited randomly, and the chapter count is too low, I can accept it. However, the author completely disrespects his own profession and completely plagiarizes his fan fiction without caring that the original text he plagiarized does not match or even contradict the content he adapted. I can't bear it at all. Oh, you write three chapters a day, but they are three original chapters. I can accept the situation of being a bastard. If you just copy the original text without reading it, I can only think that you think the readers are who they are. It's so confusing. If I were you and ordered those chapters alone, I would feel that the subscription money is dirty.

It's rubbish, record it so you don't have to confirm it every time you read it.

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Can I have a harem? But not stallions, not many, just two or three, okay? The author is great

To be honest, if you go to Shrek to really poison someone, you said it yourself, just go, why do you have to join a gang as soon as you go, and you say Oscar sausage is disgusting, kid? I really can't imagine that modern people would find summons disgusting. I really can't find anyone I know, especially those that are good for eating. Some people are snatching them up. Just say that a team doesn't need two assistants, okay? Suppressing Dai Mubai and Oscar, just to grab two women who didn't come, haha, there is a way, this cheat can become a god and ancestor at will, is this the pattern? The most important thing is that the character design is really bad. Is Oscar this kind of person? For the sake of Ning Rongrong who has not come yet, he just doesn't follow logic... He doesn't even have the confidence to defeat others in competition, and just makes Oscar appear as a villain. Tsk tsk tsk, it's really embarrassing and conspicuous

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In the original work, Dai Mubai, Ma Hongjun, and Oscar are not liked. Dai Mubai won't mention it. He is a prostitute even if he has a fiancée. Ma Hongjun is a bit unmotivated. Although Oscar doesn't show it, it is a custom in Douluo Continent that the other half of an auxiliary soul master cannot be an auxiliary soul master. He must not know that, so he still provokes Ning Rongrong. Although he has fighting ability in the later stage, if he is not from the protagonist group, it is not interesting enough. Miss Ning Rongrong has a normal temper. She is the eldest daughter. Zhu Zhuqing has no choice, so let's not talk about it. After all, Xiao Wu is a rabbit and has different values. As a protagonist, Tang San is pretty good. I think the master is relatively cowardly, but he is not bad at all. He must have his own unique charm to make a queen become obsessed with her.

Speechless, he goes to blackmail others in order to steal women. Oscar is the only one among the protagonists who has no dark history. Double dog. Bye-Bye.

Kneel down and lick Tang San, licking to a new height. In order not to take up Tang San's creation, soul rings, and soul bones, he just created a hang-up system. Since the soul rings and soul bones of lower vintages can be upgraded on-the-fly, why do you need to find higher vintage soul rings for your seventh soul ring? Wouldn't it be enough to just find all soul rings of lower vintages and hang them up? Since your cultivation level can be improved by hanging up, and coupled with the hundred-fold cultivation speed of the hundred thousand-year soul skill, wouldn't hiding in a ravine and coming out of the mountain at the age of 20 make you instantly invincible? Why are you still running around? Providing so many people with carrots that can cultivate ten times the speed of their cultivation can make them worth ten years in one year. Not to mention whether they will be exposed, have you ever considered whether the other party will turn against you once the supply is stopped?

Come on, Ollie, code hard for me

Tang San

Collection of Douluo fan questions Nowadays, Douluo anime is very popular, and many Douluo fans have appeared. Let's not talk about the writing ideas of the authors. In many novels, various levels are confusing, and the most basic things are written randomly. Do you think there will be no random writing in other places? Let's talk about a few points First, the level issue After absorbing soul rings, you will be promoted to one or more levels. Unless you are above 60.70 And absorb low-level soul rings such as ten-year soul rings, otherwise, except for the fact that it is difficult to upgrade the title Douluo level, you can usually be promoted to dozens of levels, instead of the original ten levels. Second, upgrading too fast in the early stage leads to over-leveling in the later stage Let's not talk about Tang San in the early stage, but Tang San, Tang San went from level 13 to level 29 in six years, and the second soul ring in the middle was promoted by one level, that is, the cultivation level increased by 15, which is an average of three levels per year. Once the protagonist's aura enters the scene, it doesn't matter if he upgrades a few more levels. I don't think it is excessive, but this is how many more levels he has upgraded in six years. It doesn't matter the level, instead of upgrading several levels over a year. At this stage, I didn't get fairy grass, and I didn't get super doubling. Like the protagonist in this book, there are a lot of accelerations, but if you use it for others, the acceleration is only 10%. Even if you add 20% after the second soul ring, it will only be an overall acceleration of 20%, not double. I can't figure it out. What kind of brain circuit does the author have to allow Tang San to advance to more than seven levels in a year? What happens next? It's time to level up again, otherwise Tang San would be at least level 40 soul sect when he went to Shrek. How would he write it then? 12 Years old and over 40? So in the future, I can only lower the level. I used to have a copy of Wuhun Haihuangya. I was born in Poseidon Island. All the soul rings were gifted by gods. At the age of six, I was born directly at level 20. Two gods gave me 30. I was promoted to level six or seven in one year. I skipped it in the next five years, and then I was promoted to level 13 or 14 in five years (in the middle There is also a god-given soul ring (at least level 4), and then the soul power is over 60, but the level is only over 40. I laughed at it, just abandoned the book and deleted the collection, and then nothing happened Three, martial soul classification Martial spirits are classified according to their functions: strong attack system, agility attack system, control system, and auxiliary system. The food department is one of the auxiliary departments. It is often mentioned separately because it is special. It is not a single major department. Many authors often juxtapose the auxiliary department and the food department. In fact, this is not a problem at all. Martial spirits can be classified according to Martial Spirits: Beast Martial Spirit, Weapon Martial Spirit, Elemental Martial Spirit, Food Martial Spirit, Body Martial Spirit, Special Martial Spirit (such as Ghost Douluo's ghost, the Phantom Martial Spirit that appeared in the early stage), and special God's Martial Spirit (God's Martial Spirit is too special, and each one is different, so it can be listed separately). I have seen people say that coal martial arts are food martial arts, and there are a lot of people washing them there. Others say that this is a mutated food martial spirit, so it is considered a food martial spirit, me? ? ? ? Combine it before and after, most of it is possible, but there are many people who insist on saying that it is not, just like my example above Four, the problem of soul bones When writing about Douluo, it is normal to give soul bones to the protagonist, but he has only reached level 40 or 50. The protagonist has so many soul bones that all seven monsters are fully equipped. Douluo can be made later, not counting the fact that Douluo can be made later. All the soul bones that appear in Dou Yi are only a few dozen, less than three digits, and half of them are inherited. Many of Tang San's bodies are from one hundred thousand years ago. Soul bones must come out, and the authors have all kinds of imaginations. Anyway, they want the protagonist to be fully equipped with soul bones and there are still some soul bones left, and almost few of them can come out within 100,000 years. This explosion rate is unparalleled, and the first soul bone of the protagonist must be an external attachment, which is also drunk Five, the problem of female characters Whether there is no heroine, a single heroine, multiple heroines, or a harem, there will always be problems. When I wrote it, I didn't take the personality of the original female character into consideration at all. The most common problem with harems is that they follow the protagonist wholeheartedly without much affection. This is all hypnotized by the author. There is also the same problem as other harem novels. I focus on the description before starting this one, but it may not appear in the ending later. It is just for the sake of advancement. Some of the stories without a heroine and those with multiple heroines are okay, but I don't know what to think about some of them. If I write a story without a heroine, I rarely interact with female characters, which is normal, but there are always some desperate interactions and flirtations, and I have nothing to say. Some of them didn't say whether there was a female protagonist, but they had various supporting roles. In one movie, there was no connection between the female character and the supporting character at all. She was on the show within two chapters, and they were hugging each other (sisters Ma Hongjun and Shui Binger), huh? ? ? ? The protagonist is flirting back and forth, but in the end he is matching others. Why not become a pig farm breeder? The farm manager must like you very much. If you have a heroine, you can write slowly, but it is best not to be just a flash in the pan. If you don't have a heroine, you should not have all kinds of flirtatious female characters. It is also best to pay attention to each female character in the harem. Once you write it, you will forget about the female character. It is almost enough to be a female sex partner Six... Douluo itself has many bugs and inconsistencies, but writing a fanfic is not to ask you to write more problems, but to write about the author and readers' criticism of Douluo and how to make up for the regrets, or to write about the author's fantasy of his own life in Douluo. I didn't expect to have any more questions at the moment, and everyone is welcome to ask more questions.

First of all, let me explain my point of view. One word means poison, two words means disgusting. I saw the group fight with Canghui Academy and was so poisoned that I couldn't bear it. What made the protagonist change from a submissive waste with only level 2 innate soul power to a Sapi who no one recognized but thought she was the boss? Other Douluo fans either consider themselves sinister, have never done anything good from the beginning, are always selfish and decisive in killing, or are sunny and upright, get along well with the protagonist group, and lead the way. It is this novel. The protagonist thinks that he is the boss (no one admits it), sinister and stingy, but thinks he is sunshine. He is submissive to Tang Hao and Ming Ming, nodding and bowing, just like a dog; he punches his teammates hard, engages in internal divisions, forms cliques, and has no personality charm. To be honest, since he doesn't like the master and Flanders, why not just leave Shrek? If you can't bear to part with the fairy grass, why don't you just write a story that can't affect the direction of the story no matter what? It has to be poisonous all the time. If you look at the catalog, I'm sorry Xiao San, I'm sorry Tang San, I'm sorry Eight Spider Soul Bones, you have a system. Tang San and you have a grudge, forget it. In your novel, you said that you treat Tang San as a brother. If you robbed his woman of his opportunity, do you treat him as a brother? Can't you add a lottery function temporarily? You are attracted by the personality charm of the mistress, and you treat the mistress as a gunman. You really have a protagonist who is two-faced and has a human face and a beast heart. Others are boring, this one is pure poison, it smoked me to death

What does Chapter 218 mean? Make a clone and marry Xiao Wu and the other Zhu Qing? Want to poison someone? If you write it like this, almost no one will read it. What's the difference between this and a green hat?

When I first saw Shrek, it was fine in the beginning, but when I got to Shrek, I felt that the author was deliberately creating conflicts. He knew Dai Mubai's situation clearly. In the original book, he was a madman when he first met him, but once they got to know each other, it became less of a problem, and he didn't take his status as a prince seriously. . The second Oscar, to be honest, before I fell in love with Ning Rongrong, there was nothing outstanding about this character. His personality was similar to soft on the outside but tough on the inside, with nothing calculated. And currently, Oscar's soul skills do not conflict with the protagonist's soul skills. One is that the main function is to restore soul power on a regular basis, and the protagonist's can let others use their own soul skills. Wouldn't teleportation and the speed of the phoenix-tailed crested snake be good? If you have no soul power, you can eat sausages, but if you usually practice eating radishes, there won't be that many problems at all, right? This contradiction is strange. Geniuses are arrogant, but they cannot be arrogant towards people who are more talented. How could they think of dividing the group to make Dai Mubai and the protagonist, a genius who is basically destined to be banned, completely unreasonable?

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Personally, if you don't like it, don't spray it. The book was very good in the early stages. I thought I had discovered another good book. It was not until the plot developed to Shrek that I discovered that it was extremely poisonous, and I felt like it had been written by a different author. The mentality of the protagonist changed directly, and the relationships and emotions between various plot characters were handled poorly. Anyone who has read too many Douluo fandoms will know that there will be a plot where the protagonist eats Oscar's sausage. The protagonist simply drifts away and refuses to eat. You can give any good reason for not eating, but the protagonist is better and just ignores Frank. Then I want to say, what is the use of doing this besides joining the tour group? You can level up by hanging up on your own, and Xiao Wu can level up without having to fight. If you want a soul ring, wouldn't it be better to have two tool men, the Ming Dynasty and the Ming Dynasty? You can all just play your own. As a result, we are here to watch your Shrek Palace fighting drama?

After reading the original novel and a bunch of fanfics, I really can't figure out what's so good about Xiao Wu.

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Starting from Shrek, the protagonist's entire person has changed. Either the protagonist changes slowly in the beginning. Now I feel like my personality has changed immediately.

Douluo Dalu fans are really in a daze. Or just lick the Wuhun Palace. Or just lick Tang San. The novels written are of poor quality. It's a mess, I don't know what it means. What are you looking at? Going to see Liu Bei will still make your blood boil. What about you? ? ? Are you pretending to be stupid?

No titled Douluo's father would dare to accept Xiao Wu.

The martial arts is not good enough, the plot is thin, and it is completely a stand-alone game for the protagonist. The first soul ring was ten years old, and later it became a hundred years. Everyone is as if they are blind. Aren't you curious, or do you think it's a trivial matter? The various plots that follow are even more difficult to complain about

The poison has been tested, so you can safely discard the book.

You dare to make Xiao Wu the heroine without a title Douluo background. Are you insulting the readers' intelligence?

I'm really curious how the protagonist dares to accept Xiao Wu without any background.

It's so disgusting to watch. Shrek's side is extremely poisonous. If nothing else is said, let's talk about the matchmaker. You give Tang San a fringe character. It's okay. After all, you've already licked him. Why is Ma Hongjun? Is it because he looks wretched? This has nothing to do with giving away a girl, but you said that the matchmaker doesn't make the protagonist incompetent.

Gou Ba started to get sick a few chapters before it was released and slipped away.

It's more convenient than buying fresh ramen if you want to order it now. I am looking for power to dominate the soul master world. As soon as you think about it, it comes out. The second skill is deformation. Anyway, being able to deform is also a matter of controlling the body. I directly control the muscles of the body and return life.