I Stopped Being Human in Tokyo

When does the protagonist buy a road roller?

It's okay, please don't have a harem, don't have a heroine, you can have women, "DIO" won't fall in love with anyone.

Brothers, do you think this picture of mine is too far off?

Pictures of Diao Ye

Self-pleasure articles that deviate from the taste of normal people will probably only be read by readers who are as excited as the author. As an ordinary reader, what I hate the most is self-pleasure articles.

I'll take some pictures too

Please don't add too many Japanese onomatopoeia! ! ! ! ! ! ! I read the main line of the synopsis posted in the comment area, and I thought it was a bit interesting, but do you know what it feels like to have a group of characters using Japanese onomatopoeia throughout the whole story? ! Doce Daddy, Dior Lansan, Mossi Mossi, Arigado, I feel like I am not watching Dior, but a group of two-dimensional actors acting. You said my mentality is broken, and my mentality is also broken. I don't know what I am watching? What kind of person you want to portray should be reflected in the logical way of speaking in your writing. You talk a lot throughout the text, with a lot of onomatopoeia, and the writing seems even more obscure. Think carefully about how people talk to each other, and the various descriptions are too muddled. I suggest you read the book "Story" by Robert McKee. I believe it will help your writing skills.

Don't want a harem, don't want a harem, don't want a harem (The little devil on the head of the rice caterpillar is crawling around)

Can you please stop making so many Japanese noises? Use it appropriately, but if you abuse it, it won't have that taste. Instead, it will be disgusting.

Cleopatra