I Don't Want to Be a Human Being in Tokyo Anymore

Please update quickly, please diao sama

When does the protagonist buy a road roller?

It's okay, please don't have a harem, don't have a heroine, you can have women, "DIO" won't fall in love with anyone.

Brothers, do you think this picture of mine is too far off?

Pictures of Diao Ye

Self-pleasure articles that deviate from the taste of normal people will probably only be read by readers who are as excited as the author. As an ordinary reader, what I hate the most is self-pleasure articles.

I'll take some pictures too

Please don't add too many Japanese onomatopoeia! ! ! ! ! ! ! I read the main line of the synopsis posted in the comment area, and I thought it was a bit interesting, but do you know what it feels like to have a group of characters using Japanese onomatopoeia throughout the whole story? ! Doce Daddy, Dior Lansan, Mossi Mossi, Arigado, I feel like I am not watching Dior, but a group of two-dimensional actors acting. You said my mentality is broken, and my mentality is also broken. I don't know what I am watching? What kind of person you want to portray should be reflected in the logical way of speaking in your writing. You talk a lot throughout the text, with a lot of onomatopoeia, and the writing seems even more obscure. Think carefully about how people talk to each other, and the various descriptions are too muddled. I suggest you read the book "Story" by Robert McKee. I believe it will help your writing skills.

Don't want a harem, don't want a harem, don't want a harem (The little devil on the head of the rice caterpillar is crawling around)

Can you please stop making so many Japanese noises? Use it appropriately, but if you abuse it, it won't have that taste. Instead, it will be disgusting.

Cleopatra

Isn't Dior's greatest ability the beauty and cuteness? The protagonist actually has no inheritance, bad review!

It would be nice if the female characters were removed

The writing is quite good, but there are too many empty Japanese words that give me a headache (what Sansan, I always use sticky tape and the like), I suggest that the parts that have nothing to do with the JOJO meme itself should be changed back to normal as much as possible, otherwise it will be a bit embarrassing...

It's quite curious, and those who like it will definitely get high after watching it!

After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist has been "cleansing". As a villain, the savior's description of women is like a scourge, as if he can't avoid it, just like a herbivorous boy ~ I don't know if it will change in the future 😅

Hello fellow buns! I announced that it will be on the shelves tomorrow! The arrangement for listing is as follows: There will be four consecutive updates at 12:30 a. M. On the day it is released on June 1st. If the first 300 orders are reached, one more update will be added. After that, for every 100 more orders, one more update will be added. Every 1,500 tips will allow the author to add one more update.

This kind of protagonist's character is not likeable, it feels like the author is just enjoying himself. There are too many inner dramas. For any supporting character or pet, two or three sentences of inner drama will be focused on, making it seem like we are watching from the perspective of the supporting character.

I became the first helmsman of this book😃

In other words, I have already castrated two books 🙂 and will be entering the palace just around the corner.

Hi, I don't know if there is any reason to reward the author... Then there is no reason! Come on, author!

I haven't seen it yet. Let's check it out on the bookshelf.

Really no one said anything.

Suddenly I thought about the possibility of Dior's substitute evolving into the world *beyond the underworld

I've read it all and now I hope the author won't be a eunuch.

I have been a eunuch for a long time, and my investment has been cut off.

On the treasure

The writing is okay, if you want to be popular, you will be able to eat. It is recommended to fire, now we are all lsp bookworms

Author: Why did you stop updating?

Author, if it doesn't work, please post the outline.