A Swordsmith's Infinity

Suggested name change: An Infinite Life of a Literary Youth

😅😅😅😅 This book is so overpowering! It feels like something a pretentious, self-indulgent author wrote to entertain themselves; they don't care if readers like it, they're just enjoying themselves.

I think this should be published in the short story category; this kind of writing style is usually quite short.

That's very well written. 🙂

That's too pretentious. Forget calling him a swordsmith, he should be called the Paranoid Infinity, or maybe he has autism.

It's hilarious every time I see a villain from some small Japanese family, whose world is turned upside down by a mere Nine-Tails, suddenly talking about cleaning up and destroying the world. The world isn't that small.

To be honest, author, if you wrote this book purely for your own enjoyment, then I have no problem with it. But if you wrote it for a wider readership, I think you really need to change your writing style, otherwise you simply can't write anything substantial.

Honestly, I didn't understand what the protagonist was trying to do. The writing was alright, but what exactly was the protagonist in the Inuyasha arc searching for? Was he rejecting everything because he was a transmigrator? Was he searching for his way home? Just following the plot didn't feel like anything changed. After finishing it, I felt like I hadn't seen anything at all; it was very confusing.

This book is too pretentious! 🥵🥵🥵 My head hurts.

"I" is not a self-reference used by ordinary people. Generally, only people of the daimyo class in Japan can use "I" to refer to themselves; others cannot use it.