Tycoonhood Begins with a System Lottery

If you could only choose three, which three would you choose? 1: IQ increases by 100% 2: Rejuvenation Technique 3: Can freely become invisible, pass through walls, burrow underground, fly, possess god-level teleportation, travel through portals, perform god-level healing spells, god-level telekinesis, god-level mental blocking spells, and god-level gene blocking spells.

Revise the first few chapters of this book. Make it less drawn-out and more exciting. The results will be much better. I was about to give up on it after the first few chapters. There wasn't much else to read, so I forced myself to keep going. I found the later chapters surprisingly good. What I'm trying to say is that if the beginning is bad, no matter how good the later chapters are, it's useless. Because if you've already given up on the beginning, you won't be able to enjoy the rest.

Maybe I'm too poor, not up to the same social class. Even a single bar visit by Wang Sicong, costing four or five hundred thousand yuan, makes people in China exclaim how rich people really know how to have fun. But the characters in the author's novel spend millions on drinks with their colleagues at bars—what kind of family does that?

Still making a fuss over whether to be promoted to supervisor or department head? The protagonist previously spent 6 million on dinner for his colleagues—even the chairman wouldn't do that!

It's been two years since I finished reading "Struggling in the Dream of the Red Chamber," and I've been waiting for you to write your own version, but you just won't. I thought you'd finally learned your lesson after hitting a wall twice, but you still won't. Maybe you want to push your boundaries, but sometimes it's really unnecessary. What's wrong with developing your own niche?

Here's a suggestion: after you finish this book, go back to writing historical fiction. Don't stick to fictional settings; write about well-known historical periods like *Dream of the Red Chamber*, the Tang, Song, Ming, Qing, or Three Kingdoms periods. Having multiple female leads and romantic storylines is your strength, and it's normal for historical novels to have many female characters; I think it would be more engaging.

To say that a 30-year-old office worker who suddenly has money and immediately thinks of women shows how desperate he is. I'm sick and tired of this tactic.

I read the comments first, then looked for the problematic points. Chapter 20 Summary (Personal Opinion): It's not a mindless, simplistic novel. The protagonist is experienced and understands human nature, and the supporting characters are intelligent. It should be considered one of the few high-quality works among novels about wealthy characters.

To be honest, it seemed pretty good at first, but I lost interest once I started working again. You could stay for three more days and then leave, but you're still developing software for them? Is it worth it to be a sucker? All for that 20 million… That's really ruthless. It would have been so much better if you just left. Speechless.

In reality, for a "super-rich" novel to attract readers, it needs to start with a career, or a clear focus on that career, or have a powerful father. Enjoying life comes later; simply focusing on shopping makes the reader seem foolish and unsophisticated.