Back When I Was Young

There is no doubt that the author's writing style is able to depict the poetic and picturesque Dream of Red Mansions. However, it may be that the author is too impatient. This book is in great contrast with the previous one. They are completely different. I strongly recommend that the author start a new book. For example, the fictional "Water Margin" is well-known, has a grand background, and has many outstanding characters. (Other historical farming genres are also acceptable) Let me briefly talk about the poisonous points of this book: Reborn in 10,000 years, traveling across the Southern Territory, the starting point of the protagonist is too high. Traveling across the earth for hundreds of years, the Southern Territory adventure is reborn (it not only enhances the reader's sense of immersion but also retains readers' expectations for the Southern Territory) 2 It's too fake to become a public enemy of the whole school by shouting the school belle's name while sleeping in class. It would be better to be ridiculed by the whole class for forgetting high school knowledge and getting a historically low score because of rebirth, and the class teacher's criticism is reasonable. 3 The plot advances too fast. It clearly chooses the time of rebirth in high school, but there is no description of daily life. There are only one or two forced pretending to be slapped in the face, and rocket upgrades (you can refer to the similar article "I'm Really Not a God") 4 The supporting characters have too many psychological activities, and they all look down on the protagonist first and then get slapped in the face, all the same. 5 The fighting plot has no novelty and lack of enthusiasm. It is an old routine of upgrading first and then crushing it. (Warriors are like warriors, they control their bodies to fight close to each other. Monks are like mage, they have high attack and weak health, and their methods are weird and changeable. Based on the advantages and disadvantages of the two and the protagonist's rebirth experience, the weak can defeat the strong or win by surprise.) 6 For rural ecology, relatives get along, and the only way to forcefully pretend to be X is to slap someone in the face, which is so poisonous that it makes you want to die. I sincerely hope that the author will regain his strength after waking up and achieve greater success again. To paraphrase "The New King of Comedy": As long as you don't surrender, you are successful.

Jiu Wu's writing style is naturally very high. Whether it's The Descendants of an Aristocratic Family or The Struggle for the Red Mansion, they are all beautiful articles. However, the harem phenomenon is serious. The protagonist in "The Family" has a double-digit harem, and the "Red Mansions" has a double-digit harem. The author of this book has made it clear that he will not be able to live in a harem. Of course, we also believe in the author's integrity. It is estimated that the two unofficial heroines of Mingyue and Shennu will not be exceeded. More than five, but when I saw Chapter 66, I suddenly thought that the author only said that he would not open a harem, but he did not say that he would not accept female apprentices 😃. Look, I dare say that the protagonist's female apprentices must have double digits. I will post it as proof 😃😃

Please, eunuch! Let's switch to historical texts

I can't stand it anymore The more I look at the world, the more dizzy I become. Background: Modern cities before the revival of spiritual energy? A foreign city dominated by aristocratic families that have regained their aura? Organizational form: Anarchy? Small government? Big government? What is the organizational form of national society? (It seems that Qidian is not allowed to mention this), since it has been emptied out, let it be emptied out completely. How are cultivators recognized by the world? Are cultivators everywhere? Or Are cultivators extremely rare? Plot characters are too templated Constantly pretending to be cool, where is the soul of the character? It feels like I've figured out the main plot and then pushed it forward with blunt details. There are no ups and downs, no ups and downs, all the way forward, no suspense. Hurry up and kill everyone who is blocking your way to see your bright moon. At the beginning, I thought that 95 was going to be about an old monster reliving his high school days. It was the beginning of an urban cultivator genre. He pretended to be a pig and ate a tiger in modern society, and accumulated silently in the mysterious world of cultivation. Then his aura revived, and he transformed into a dragon when encountering a storm. Now... I don't know what story 95 wants to write. I have come all the way from the Red Mansion and now I have no choice but to leave. I look forward to your next carefully thought-out book.

Let's write historical novels. I feel that historical novels are more suitable for the author.

I deleted it and stopped reading. It was obvious that the writer had changed. Mentally retarded.

Come back and write Red Mansions quickly, Red Mansions We need you. The first echelon of Red Mansions writers are the concubines who are romantic, struggling in the Red Mansions, conquering the world, and countless romantic figures.

There has been no update for many days. . . So annoying

This author ID has definitely been replaced! The depth of thinking in the previous book "Red Mansions" is absolutely impossible to write such an urban and novice novel! Looking at the introduction, it feels like a junior high school Chinese level.

Already fully booked, stick with it✊