Shrouding the Heavens: I Am Little Stone

Brothers, I want to see how many people read this book and see how many of us there are. If you see it, please give me a deduction.

Let's talk about it! Based on the identity and configuration of the protagonist, I wouldn't think it's outrageous even if you write him as the Saint Qian Zhundi, the Great Holy Hammer Supreme. I would just feel that he is worthy of being the son of Huangtian Emperor. That's awesome!

The son of an Immortal Emperor, who is an Immortal King himself, why do all the opportunities come to Ye Fan?

Why are the writings becoming more and more white? This is not an urban novel, this is a fantasy novel, more rigorous, and the protagonist takes too much care of Ye Fan. He has to take Ye Fan with him for everything. I just saw the protagonist go to the ancient forbidden land for the second time, and the desolate tower actually stopped fighting? I'm still afraid that both sides will lose. I wonder if the Emperor-killing War Spear is a living thing? Don't say unnecessary things. What is Huangta's identity? What is the protagonist's identity? Can a ruthless person be worthy of an emperor? The author did not correct the identity of the protagonist, and it seems that the protagonist must be cautious in everything he does. The protagonist is not like Ye Fan, who has no backstage (even if Ye Fan has one, he doesn't know it). He still has to act like a junior when facing the Qing Emperor 😥😥😥 The protagonist can walk sideways in this world now, okay~_~, can he beat the forbidden land of Huangta and Emperor-killing Spear? Has the Great Emperor been able to defeat him? You can just push across the forbidden area.

Not like the Immortal Emperor, not even like the Great Emperor

I have always thought that the Great Emperor of Zhetian was created by fighting. His passion and invincible belief along with sadness run through the entire Zhetian. There is Emperor Ye Tian who can defeat all enemies in the world, there is a ruthless man with eternal talents, there is Wu Shi who is known as the end of the Tao, there is the indomitable Luan Gu, there is the miserable Emperor Void, and the Holy Sun Emperor who has sacrificed everything for the human race... Those emperors are so passionate, and each has his own personality charm. In just a few strokes, the pride and sorrow of a generation of emperors are all told one by one. And what about the protagonist? Forgive me for not being able to represent you, but what is Zhetian fighting for? It's fate, it's the tragedy of one emperor's success and the death of thousands of bones. However, the author did not show the pride of the protagonist as the son of Emperor Huangtian, let alone his predecessor as the Immortal King. Even the author has repeatedly emphasized that he does not rely on external objects, so he has been forcibly weakening it. I can even agree to being coerced into looking into the sea of ​​suffering, please. You have a trump card, just do it when it's your turn! If you are always worried about this and that, then why not stop fighting! To be honest, this protagonist looks very useless. This is just my reflection. Goodbye, I wish you write better and better.

To be honest, Huang's son should be Long Aotian. He was born with unrivaled talent and was accompanied by an imperial weapon and unparalleled resources. How can I say that I can't kill a supreme sacrifice genius to deserve such a start when I debut? However, I read in the comment section that it was a bitter experience to be investigated. This is equivalent to me pressing your head and watching your wife change clothes. How do you think the contrast between before and after makes people appreciate it? Zhetian pays attention to an invincible heart, and I am invincible. The world is centered on me, and everything revolves for me. In the beginning, Long Aotian just wrote the flavor of the break-up-of-engagement style. The starting point of the theme is only very strong. Brother, please refer to the original work more and write with character. You can expect to become a great god with strong character

The emotional line is inexplicable, a saint is directly tied up, and then Stockholm syndrome occurs and she falls in love with the protagonist? What kind of saint is this? Even a passerby can carry it more clearly than this saint. Moreover, why is the main character, a CEO of a company, written and behaved like a ten-year-old child, innocent and childish? Then he starts talking to the Qing Emperor and the Ruthless Emperor to talk about terms and conditions for friendship, holding the Desolate Tower and the Immortal Emperor's War Spear, and then suddenly he can't beat the Saintess and Saint Child level characters in the next second. Isn't this just that he can't beat a three-year-old child with a gun? It makes people think it's a big deal, but the protagonist is quite useless. In short, the imagination is quite novel among Zhetian fans. After all, many people who write about Zhetian are like the reborn Emperor Beidi, but this emmm... Both the writing style and the description are all Long Aotian-style short stories. New readers can read it, and old bookworms should run away.

The son of the Immortal Emperor is still like this. Anyone can step on them. Are those two Immortal Dao weapons just for display? No one can beat them. They are slipping away.

In the original work, the Immortal Emperor is the enemy of Ye Fan, so the protagonist of the novel also has to find trouble with him.