
Perfect World: Becoming King with Ten Crowns
完美世界之十冠成王
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- Completed
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- 1.9M Words
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- Xuanhuan
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- 11mo ago
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- Qidian
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The Dragon Walks and the Tiger Steps on the World Tree My name is Emperor, please remember
Some suggestions
1. The image of the protagonist is not three-dimensional enough. Take the most successful fan of Perfect World, Double Undercover, as an example. I remember that the protagonist seems to be wearing a white robe, which matches his own time and space very well, so it is easy to imagine in the mind. I think the protagonist of this book is the Emperor after all. Many people read the Zhetian and Perfect World fanfics to see if the character is high enough and cool enough. The bishop's current external image is basically the same as in the original work. If the description is changed to someone wearing a black gold robe with a dragon pattern, and some more visual changes are made, the character's external image will be established. By focusing on describing some of the oppression in the aura, the character will also be established. 2. The description of a good perfect fan Chen Dong's style must account for a high enough proportion. I think the term "ex master" is quite inappropriate. It is more suitable to describe it as a peerless genius, monster, tyrant or other giant. 3. Because the protagonist is an indigenous non-traveler, if the plot of the original novel is followed, it will be at a huge disadvantage compared to a novel in which the protagonist is a time traveler. After all, they are all indigenous and most of the plots are original. So what is the difference from the original? Therefore, I suggest that if it is an event in the original work, you should not delay it too long. Unless it is a very exciting plot, such as the overpass battle between Nine Heavens and Ten Earths and a foreign land, you can slow down when writing some self-created plots. After all, the emperor does not appear too often in the original work.
No, how could the Emperor, with such a powerful background, still be made things difficult for him at the Imperial Pass? Aren't you just pretending to be cool in this city? Why is this fantasy? It's not fucking worth the money to renew.
Yuanhai, Shengong, Tianji, Tenglong
In the later stages of writing, the author gradually hid the World Tree. Why? It's just that the author couldn't think of what the protagonist said at the beginning, "On the basis of the ancient immortal method, find a way to explore the small universe of the human body", so he could only reproduce it with perfection in mind. Author, please see for yourself, what are the differences between these four secret realms and the original work? It's just a change of name. Oh, no, the magical power was changed from the original five internal organs to the five internal organs plus one pair of eyes. Everything else remains unchanged. Author, have you forgotten that when you first started writing about the Secret Realm of the Origin Sea, there was a sapling of the World Tree in the secret realm? As a result, what use is he now? It didn't show any use at all. I guess the author, the fifth secret realm, will change the name of Sendai, such as Shentai or Soul Platform? In fact, in this novel, the name of the emperor is replaced by Huang, which is basically the same as in Perfect. What I want to read is the fanfic, not the original work.
It's a waste of money. With the same plot as the original work, it's better to watch the original work.
Create your own training system, completely copy No. 10, Write a chicken
Diguan is being made difficult for me, but I just give in. The more I write, the more rubbish I get. It's a waste of my money.
The character of the Ten Crown Champion.
The image and character of the Ten-Crown Emperor are not distinctive enough. Judging from the original work, he should be a relatively taciturn and domineering but extremely reliable person. But I didn't see this in the article. Did you confuse him with No. 10? I think No. 10 May behave like you did before, which is a bit inconsistent with the emperor's character.
The emperor with the title of "Ten Crowns" is so domineering. It would be very funny to come up with such a bad name.
I'm speechless. The Immortal Sutra is innate and is derived from the world itself, not created by humans at all.