I'm a Crew Member on the Rocks Pirates

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It made me laugh. You kissed someone forcibly and didn't say anything. Then you said that you don't have a woman in your heart. You draw your sword to be a god of nature. Then you forcibly cut off other girls' hair. Isn't this just a hooligan? It seemed good and you suddenly did this to me. Aren't you trying to persuade me to quit? Don't be so hypocritical. It feels disgusting.

The first few chapters were originally well written, but in the end, I couldn't walk when I saw women, and I collected all kinds of women to lick.

I spent 7 cents to be fair. This book feels good. But it would be too poisonous to upgrade that woman but not myself. He immediately persuaded me to quit. This is more poisonous than pretending to be 13, at class reunions, etc.

What a show. My aunt already had several children when she was in the Rocks Pirates. What do you do? It's really cheating. You want to persuade the master to quit in the first place.

I think it would be better for the author to put the harem and the heroine a little later. It's so embarrassing that I can't watch it anymore.

I came to see Pirates written well. It's just that the chat group is too prominent and I don't really like it. And it only lasts for a few chapters, so you can read the story directly.

So awesome, even if the leader of the group is not the protagonist, he still has to be her nanny!

It's completely Chinese dialogue, it doesn't feel like One Piece

Bucky and Shanks should still be one or two years old, right?

Even though he was at a disadvantage in the battle, he was still captured alive. Passers-by said that the marshal of the previous generation would die if he wanted to, but in the original novel, the lieutenant general or major general will not die no matter what.

The plot is too speechless. Take people from other worlds to your own world. The writing is not very good either. The plot arrangement makes people feel unclear.

One thing, since you're not the group leader, don't reveal the plot. It's boring.

Poison points: inexplicable two-line plot, fatalism, forced map change, teammates offering sacrifices to heaven

I just read it. The front part of the book is really good, but it seems like there are a lot of critics. I flipped through the table of contents. The author originally wrote four chapters a day, but in the end it became one chapter a day. After all, his grades should have been declining and his mentality was unstable. If possible, you can try to turn on anti-theft. If you are worried about affecting the experience of genuine readers, you can update at night and early in the morning so that genuine readers will not be disturbed.

A good start, but too messy. Why are you not married, aunt?

It's a very good novel, although it's a bit toxic, but it doesn't affect the overall story. The ending prediction, Lovedell's Secret, is a good plot line and the ideas are very good. Come on, author, take good care of you. Also, was the last chapter posted by mistake? . Anyway, keep going 👍

The character timeline looks awkward.

The author pays attention to the body. The body is the capital of revolution. Relax, pay attention to exercise, and maintain a good attitude. Tomorrow will be better.

You are worse than a eunuch, with a hammer written on the back?

The author would like to ask what is the name of your double book? Please

It's too little. The author will try his best to update it. I hope I can update it three times a day.

It's so beautiful. The needle won't poke. The needle won't poke. Come on, the author. When I have money, I'll order all the books 😁

Is there a chapter about the spiritual cage plot? ? ? Which chapter specifically?

Just turn on the anti-theft, remember to change it back, fuck