One Man Swordsman

I haven't read the book yet, but I still want to ask how the author arranges the plot of Zhenhun Street. I feel that if I am defeated by the Ju Ling Qi General, the Eight Magic Skills of the Ju Ling Qi General will be defeated if he is not completely defeated 😁

Is reporting useful? I will continue to post, this is the quality of the author opposite.

The domineering red dress has no intention of leaving or leaving.

I'm here, one person, I love you

In fact, Gao Changgong came from the Southern and Northern Dynasties, not only the ghost-faced Lanling but also loyal to the royal family. Then in the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, Wu Bai Er, Le Yi, Tian Ji, and four generals of the Warring States Period came. From the Han Dynasty came a double-walled empire, and the four generals of the Sui Dynasty... It was like ordering food...

The author sees that you are so pitiful, so I will support you.

Zhuge Liang in "Nine Nine Eighty-One" PS: From

Brother, your writing is too messy. It seems interesting if you write it separately. First of all, the force value is completely collapsed, and the background is completely collapsed. The plot is also collapsed. I can understand it at the beginning, but then it becomes increasingly difficult to understand and my understanding is limited.

This book is highly recommended. The author writes so well (unfortunately, I don't like to read books about mixed worlds). I wish the author's book success.

I want to learn how to play the warlords with beacon fire, but I really need to practice my writing skills.

At first glance, it seems that the author is young and a bit childish. He has started too high and it is difficult to stop. You have started the wedge too high and you can't even read it after thinking about it.

I thought I could watch Sword Fairy, but it ended up being about dead people for nearly a hundred chapters? The hundred chapters on the state of the soul are amazing.

Wang Ye

This book was originally expected to be a pure one-person novel, but now it has become a comprehensive comic. Of course, after all, it is difficult to write a one-person fanfiction, and I can understand the author's difficulties. If you don't change your writing strategy, it's basically impossible for one person to write a fanfic, and it's thankless and thankless. It's not as good as writing a fanfic about Douluo. There are very few authors who purely use their love to generate electricity. Even if there are, the updates are not stable and they are just a hobby. If you want to make money, you really shouldn't write this kind of article. And if you write it purely for Teacher Mi Er's world view from the beginning, you will also find that Teacher Mi Er's settings are close to reality, but if you add settings from other anime... It will inevitably be a bit inconsistent. But I still have dreams in my heart. I just feel sorry for it and offer you a hundred coins. Please don't be offended. I hope that the author can wait for the completion of the comic to consider a one-person fanfic. Please forgive me.

Indiscriminately spraying my book friends with "high quality"!

Thank you for your support. It is expected that the new book will be less popular. The author is very happy if someone can comment 😄 At least two updates a day.

I support you and work hard to finish this book. I hope you can write more.

The author helps me refine it. Although your book is not to my liking, I will order as much as you write, even though I won't read it! A group of keyboard warriors came over to blow up the fish pond, how shameless! Help with refinement.

In the third life, he became a teenager in the second stage of middle school?

In the third life, he was possessed as soon as he opened his eyes! Too bad.

I like it very much, I just want to say goodbye to eunuchs and water 🙏

What is the situation with two male protagonists and two female protagonists?

It was actually good at the beginning, but as it went on, I felt worse and worse. I lost the feeling I had at the beginning. Also, the protagonist was originally a cold and dedicated swordsman. But in the end, he was like a funny guy. He also met a few women who made his heart beat. The character collapsed. The plot was too long and dragged out for more than 200 pictures. Chen Duo's story is not over yet. The author wanted to try his best to set up a huge world, but the text was not good enough, which resulted in a bit of confusion and lost the feeling at the beginning.

The world view in the author's mind is huge and has a good story, but the author's writing style cannot be said to be bad, it can only be said to be average. If you write such a novel with such writing style, you will definitely not be able to write the world in the author's mind, and it will not be fluent for us readers.

I still don't understand why pig's feet are cultivated and what state they are in.

Looking for a fanfic of Under One Person. The protagonist obtains the Heavenly Barrel from Zheng Zibu. He has a good relationship with Lu Jin. He is similar in age to Lu Jin. He is really old and passionate... I only remember this much.

Is this a double-male story? Why are there two male protagonists?

I haven't read the content yet, but this introduction feels like it keeps repeating itself, which is terrible.

The mixed world feels like pearl emerald white jade soup

The author said that Ju Ling sent generals to be unable to deal with Zhenhun Street, so the Eight Magic Skills cannot be called the Eight Magic Skills.