The Strongest Lion

Come on, a lion who is reborn as a human must be different. Is it still the same as a human reborn?

I tried hard to read dozens of chapters, but the writing is very childish, and the writing after borrowing is not good. A lion group cannot have only 2 lionesses and 10 cubs. The ratio is completely wrong. 2 Lionesses cannot feed the cubs. Since you have borrowed so much, why didn't you borrow from that book? The lionesses will leave one to look after the house when they go hunting. I wonder why the author didn't give a setting of 4-5 lionesses. But I still have to thank the author and hope that his writing will get better and better.

Do you know why it's so hard to write about ferocious beasts? The beasts in modern society can be dealt with in one shot. If that doesn't work, just take two shots. What if a mutation occurs? That would belong to the strange beast genre. It would be better to just write about dragons, phoenixes and the like.

Snap! One shot to the head! You were poached and beaten to shit! The whole book is finished!

Are there any novels about animals that you can recommend? They don't require spiritual revival, just ordinary animals.

Can't you reincarnate into an animal, work hard to survive, and collect leopards, Siberian tigers, lionesses, wolves, and foxes as harems? You have to cultivate, you have to revive your spiritual energy, and you have to transform. Why not write something novel?

A suggestion for the author: The fundamental difference between humans and animals is human nature and animal nature. Human nature is composed of instinct, conscience, and wisdom, while animal nature is composed of instinct and simple thinking. The simple thinking of animals is just an auxiliary instinct. The dominance of animals is instinct. For example, some animals leave their parents and live alone. Instinct is actually talent. It is innate and does not need to be learned or imitated. Therefore, many behaviors of animals are driven by instinct, which humans cannot understand and do not need to understand. And people often do the wrong things with good intentions. The author writes that people become animals and human nature dominates. 1: Animals have only simple thinking, like a calculator, and human nature is like a computer system. If the calculator is not upgraded, human nature can only hibernate and be dominated by animal nature. 2 Human nature is just right in the human body. When human nature penetrates into the animal body and is dominated by human nature, it will inevitably conflict with animal instincts: the taste and desire of eating raw meat, the lioness ignoring the male lion's fight, the male lion's desire for the throne, the human instinct that two tigers cannot tolerate one mountain... I would like to give the author a small suggestion. Those who read the book are all modern people. The author is not a teacher for modern people, but a storyteller who makes people's hearts beat.

The madness started after more than fifty chapters. What happened to this baboon? Oh, that's right, that's right, that's the way it is, that's the way it is, that's the way he is... And then there's someone copying and pasting the previous paragraph? Is it interesting to write about one thing over and over again? Is the reader Sun Wukong? What about reciting the tightening mantra? The contents of the following chapters are spliced ​​together in a mess, who will buy it if you write it like this!

This author has no common sense at all. Have you ever seen a 300 kilogram male lion? There are very few male lions weighing 200 kilograms in the wild.

This lion protagonist travels through time, always doing it as an afterthought and feeling good about himself. (For example: I've smelled this smell but can't remember who it is?) It's come out many times. Are you such a fool? The main character is just mentally retarded. The author should improve his skills and stop writing such retarded articles. It is not interesting to read at all 😤

The author doesn't know much about lions! I probably wrote it after reading the novel!

It's so verbose, I wrote more than ten lines by changing a few words about a small matter.

It's getting more and more verbose! Too watery

A bit poisonous. The author is not old enough.

It's all written into routines. When you see a mutated creature, you will first be afraid, and then when the lioness dies, you will find the murderer and fight with the mutated creature.

A paragraph is always written repeatedly in different ways 😅

It's okay at the front, but when you look at Man and Nature, there's no logic at the end. Monsters appear one after another. It feels like there's nothing to write about and I have to write it out.

After it was put on the shelves, it was written that the head of the cow is wrong and the tail of the horse is wrong.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the weight of male lions varies a bit. African male lions rarely weigh 25 kilograms. Normally, you would already be the Lion King in your early 200s.

It was copied from another book with exactly the same setting, but the writing was not good, it was too childish.

I can't stand it when I see the author bragging about hyenas and vindicating the hyenas' grievances. So why doesn't the protagonist in your novel wear the body of a hyena instead of a lion? Lions and hyenas are rivals, don't you know?

It is rare to write a novel about animals, but the author's preparation work was too poor and there were too many bugs. A one- or two-month-old cub participated in the lion king's battle, and the protagonist was reborn and suffered a serious intellectual decline.

To be honest, I quite like the protagonist's fart skills, and I hope there will be more of them in later chapters 😆

Why is this in the column of masters, there are mixed good and bad

After reading six chapters, my evaluation is that it is a primary school student's composition hovering on the passing line. Almost poisoned me to death😅

The author is really persistent. This book has not even been pushed, and it was written from 2021 to 2026.

Good guy, did this finally fly out of the solar system?