My Son, Hurry up and Fight Daddy

The ending was a bit touching. Qin Zi's wish was for Qin Chuan to live forever, so why was Qin Chuan killed by the system again?

I have followed the author's previous books, and I have recently read a new book, so I would like to support it. Although it is not much, it is still a little bit thoughtful. Some suggestions for this book: 1. Regarding the setting of this book, I personally think it is pretty good, but it can easily be written as a background that follows the protagonist and wipes his butt. There are some such worries. My personal suggestion is to separate the protagonist from his son and only come to help when his son encounters a big crisis. In this way, you can write the story of the protagonist and avoid being a nanny behind your son. After all, I believe that no one wants to see the protagonist follow his son as a nanny. 2. Regarding your son's beauty, you can try to hide it as much as possible. After all, most of the people who read books are boys and they are normal people. Few people will think about how good it is to look at other people's wives. Most people bring in the protagonist, so you can write more emotional lines related to the protagonist. If it really doesn't work, just write about how awesome the woman related to the protagonist is! 🤭🤭🤭 (Especially the woman who writes about the Medicine Refining Conference in recent chapters. To be honest, her portrayal is okay, but she looks a little different. After all, the protagonist does not have a heroine, so it would be a bit awkward to have a son first 😅) 3. Regarding the chance of the protagonist, since the son is the template for the protagonist, then He will definitely encounter some opportunities, and whether he will take them or not, according to my personal opinion, most of them will be taken, and a small part will be given to his son (you can divide it 20-80). After all, people are self-interested. At the same time, regarding the protagonists portrayed in the previous photos, he does not have much feelings for his son, or the feelings are not very strong, so in this way, it is impossible to say that he is only for him. (As far as the early stage is concerned, nothing is revealed yet. In the later stage, the protagonist will definitely need a variety of equipment, not just the cultivation level that can be improved through the system. However, if there are no other aspects to set off, it will also look very strange. After all, everyone reads books to enjoy themselves. Without these things, to be honest, the enjoyment level will be reduced a lot) 4. You can also write more descriptions of the psychology of the masses. You can write about how everyone viewed the son before his background was exposed, and then how they viewed the protagonist after he appeared. You can add a little more depth through foil. Now I feel that the writing is a little bit light (I personally feel that the leader should keep a low profile, I am really not a child of luck, and I write very well in this regard) The above are some personal opinions and suggestions, for reference only! Finally, I wish the author a happy New Year and good luck in the Year of the Ox, Ox, Ox, Ox! 🐮🐮🐮🌹🌹🌹

Qin Chuan: My son Qin Zi has the talent of Wang Teng

Compared with the previous book, this book feels like, emmmm The invincible strong man should be the character throughout the whole text, and if you go to the royal family, you should look down on them. It can be said that there is basically no control over how much combat power one needs to be invincible in the same realm. 1. Without considering weapons, if you wear a high-level weapon, you may be able to cross several large realms 2. Without considering the reincarnation of the invincible boss, you may be able to cross several large realms 3. Without considering the divine body combat power of the protagonist's son, you may be able to cross several small realms So there are generally two situations where true invincibility in the same realm is possible: 1. (1) An invincible reincarnated boss, rich in knowledge, combat experience, etc., Mastering various techniques; (2) Possessing an invincible divine body (the first divine body in the upper realm), the physique and Taoism are all the upper limit of that realm; (3) Wearing the strongest weapon that can be used in that realm 2. Modifications in the direct rules, if the realm is lower than or equal to the protagonist, the protagonist has unlimited health, unlimited defense, and unlimited attack. The first kind of invincibility in the same realm is only one-on-one (pseudo-invincible), and the second kind of cheating is the real invincibility in the same realm Since you are cheating, don't worry about cheating too much. The speed of your steps is purely determined by your son. The son determines the strength of the protagonist, so it is useless to give the protagonist a higher strength in a certain realm.

I'm sure this book is genuine, even Jesus can't stop it, I say so!

I have ordered it so far. Don't worry about the minor logical problems in the middle. The essence of the novel is that it is enjoyable. However, there are two things that are not well written. 1. The two pictures about killing pigs make a lot of sense and the plot is not coherent. 2. The protagonist's fights are sometimes poorly written. It's better to write invincible scenes that are thoroughly enjoyable. Instead of relying on martial arts-like fighting scenes to support the word count, it's better to write more repetitive pretentious plots. This book is still very good, I hope the author can maintain the quality and update it more often.

Potential new book, this potential is more or less lasting.

There are so few updates, who are you looking down on! If you have enough coins, you can fill a hundred chapters a day!

It stopped again. It was really uncomfortable. It felt like the climax was suddenly cut off.

Updates are so slow. It looks good, but not enough.

Isn't it a holiday on May Day? Why do the updates seem to be getting slower and slower? In the past, there was basically one update at noon, but now it's getting slower and slower. I'm prone to death.

Everything is fine, but updates are slow

It was quite enjoyable to watch in the early stages, but it fell apart in the later stages. The protagonist has incorrect views and will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals without any lower limit. In short, this is an extreme egoist who will do whatever it takes to become stronger, cheating his son, the monsters, the beasts, and the humans. For example, in order to let the human masters from this world hunt down his son, he falsely accuses his son of being a spy from the human race from another world. Then when his son is being hunted, he uses a plug-in to become stronger and kills the human masters from his own world. Finally, he kills all the senior human race officials and forces the human temple to obey his orders. This is the human temple that almost went to the brink of extinction in order to compete with the alien races for luck! There is no lower limit, the author also said in the article, rejecting moral kidnapping. This is not moral kidnapping, it is just the basic conscience and bottom line of being a human being!

Thank you for your support. I was afraid of being criticized last time. I have to set it up this time. I hope you can understand. Mmm~

Cheap son, he is here, he is here with a piece of grass in his mouth.

The loving father who deceived his son was tall and straight, with a slight evil streak.

The format is as follows: Name: Gender: Characteristics: Talent and cultivation: Power background : The design should not be too dramatic, be more reasonable, and there is a chance of leaving the country (ps: In addition, this floor is not the protagonist building ~ it is the supporting building~)

Blonde woman, I originally wanted to take a picture of Ellie that you are familiar with, but after thinking about it, I decided not to do it until the monks ordered ~ Amitabha.

Why can't I hate my own children? Isn't it beautiful to step on the right foot with your left foot and fly directly to immortality?

Please read the contents of the two pictures before deciding whether to read this book. Thank you

Okay. Suddenly other time travelers were created. I was speechless.

In the later period, the book became more and more sluggish, and it was so unfinished. I really felt that the money I spent on this book was not worth it.

I have read almost a hundred chapters, and the book is still readable, but it contains a lot of jokes that make girls uncomfortable, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. Not all jokes are suitable for joking. If the author can read this post, I hope that there will be fewer insulting jokes in the book in the future (I didn't say that I was not allowed to write, don't bully me, you are the right one to bully me)

This book is the one with the highest frequency of wry smiles that I have ever read. The wry smiles make people shake their heads and laugh bitterly, and they can't help but smile! Call out: So scary! ! !

There is no need to pretend, it is a bit poisonous. Really, it is recommended that the property be returned to its original owner. It's a bit disgusting for Qin Xiaozhu to call someone else's mother. You are playing with someone's mother's token like this. Inappropriate

My son = my son, why do you want my son to fight dad quickly, because he can't fight with himself, implying that Uzi can't?

The more I watched, the more disappointed I became. Forget about the delay and the water, the descriptions of the supporting characters were simply hard to read. Earlier, I mentioned that the God-King giant valued his face. Later, others directly took advantage of his face. He ran to your world and asked you to hand over the protagonist. As a giant in this world, he remained silent, especially since the protagonist is the apparent lord of the world. Is this still an eternal giant, or an eternal bastard? Others stood in your face and shit, and there was no movement at all.

The ideal author

I feel that it is a miracle that there are so many people alive in this world. One is more irritable than the other, and they will kill someone with just two words. From the weak to the strong, they all have the same temperament. I don't know how they can survive for so long. Of course, this is also the normal routine of Xiaobai's writing. It's just a bit regretful. The subject matter is still very interesting, but the content is a bit too insulting to IQ.

My son is so miserable, he doesn't even have a character label