Big Brother Failed Again

I didn't expect that this book would be criticized by so many people. In fact, I didn't feel that way. It felt okay at first, and the Son of Luck was used to let him go to the forbidden place to get things. The method was pretty good. It's really good here. But later I found something was wrong. I used the Son of Luck in the past, but later I became a brother-in-law. I also said that you are willing to have a heart to heart with a person who is willing to talk to you, and immediately arranged a woman for the Son of Luck. I was confused at the time, and I didn't know what the meaning of writing like this was. Then I thought that there was probably nothing interesting to watch later, so I stopped reading.

I've finished reading it. It's been almost a year and a half since I've finished reading a book, although there's a reason why it's so short. To be honest, I originally wanted to discard the first few pictures, but when I thought about the shortage of books, and how could the little "Shen Nong" in Taoism be poisoned to death so quickly, then after seeing more than a dozen pictures, I found that I couldn't stop. Hey, I remember one day a book review said this: The author's writing is very exciting, but it's a pity that not many people bought it. I thought about those chapters carefully, and I think it is a matter of mentality. As mentioned in the article, you think you are on earth, but actually you are in heaven. You think you are in heaven, but in fact you do not exist at all. Look, the mountains are mountains! What should I say, if you are short of books and like fantasy, heavens, emperors, and masters in your style? Well, as a result of the poison test, I have to say this: survive the first few chapters! ! Don't read book reviews! Pretend and don't repeat it, the supporting character will die early. There are a lot of tricks, just drive until you tease the river crab. This is not a dog-licking article, it is not a dog-licking article. This is, um, is there a female protagonist? There seems to be, probably. The early plot of this book seems to be not very rigorous. It only cost 900,000 yuan to complete. It is too short and weak. But it's really fun, the author completely let himself go. I think, therefore I am, tut tut. It's a pity that I was too rushed in the later stage. I quite like this book, and so on. I don't take the money. 🐶I came here after finishing the book. I'm going to take a look at the new book.

If others drive the protagonist away, then go! Why bother playing boring gambling games. This kind of plot development is really boring!

These comments say that Licking has only read a few chapters? Or some kind of navy? . I've read almost 100 chapters, I hope it's well written.

One thing to say, I think the so-called poisonous points in the second chapter are quite reasonable, but the words written are too shameful and do not affect the plot at all. This novel has been my favorite in the past two years. It is relaxed, humorous, and driving. The character design of the protagonist is really good. The character, behavior, and psychological activities can be called a masterpiece. The introduction almost persuaded me to quit. Only later did I discover that the introduction is the real main plot.

Not to mention character dialogue and plot, the system settings are very problematic. You have to challenge the opponent to activate your invincible power. Will you be instantly killed when you are attacked by a sneak attack? And when you meet a girl with a score of 90 or above, the system will be useless. What is called the invincible system? It's more like the dog-licking system... Every author knows how important a good beginning is for a novel. If it is an invincible stream, there should be no such setting as the "dog-licking system". Isn't the invincible system delicious? As for fast food articles, it is impossible to expect them to be deep, so "cool" is enough. Why dig a "dog-licking" pit? How many readers can climb up if they fall down like this? In an impetuous society, reading online novels is all about releasing stress. How can you retain people with someone who looks like a fool (introduction + beginning)?

Although I watch pirated copies There is nothing I can do about it. I am poor recently and look down on genuine copies. When I get rich, I will go back and order them all. This book is a refreshing article, not a dog-licking article, and it is full of shows. Such an author can only wait and see and cherish

What an interesting novel, the first page is invincible

Although the first female character who appeared in the first few chapters simply pressed my head to the ground and rubbed it hard, the book was still good as I continued reading. The protagonist's IQ was online, and she was not a licker.

After hundreds of years, I am no longer used to it. It feels like it is coming to an end

Brother, is this book of yours the same as the previous one, with only one female protagonist? ? ? {"NickName":"Book Friends 20190515211754796","UserId":330925309}

I saw this on Kandian. This recommendation is great.

Just looking at the settings, the protagonist is invincible, right? Then when you face a girl with 90 points of good looks, you will languish, right? If the protagonist launches an AOE on the entire world on a deserted mountain top, then wouldn't there be only the protagonist and the good-looking girls in the world? 😎😎

Farewell, this is too poisonous. I didn't stick to the first chapter. It's too good that the combat power is ineffective against beauties. The author's licking skills are good. Forget about the invincible combat power when the protagonist is challenged. You are too good at writing if it is ineffective against beauties. Don't open it if you're new. It's extremely poisonous! ! !

Ah~ I thought it was an invincible article, but it turned out to be a dog-licking article. No way, this is all the task of Brother System.

The second chapter will dissuade at least 80% of the readers. It's really yours!

Don't tell me I'm slandering, just post it and you can watch the plot for yourself, I'm here to see you.

Is this something a normal person can think of?

I have seen friends who support me ask me to delete negative reviews. First of all, I want to thank you for your concern and support. But I don't plan to delete it. Because I also know that there are indeed some unsatisfactory aspects of this book, which are my shortcomings. When you come out to write a book, you must have a mentality that can accept any evaluation! If I don't even have this kind of tolerance, I don't think I can go far. Many times, we cannot always ask others to be merciful. Reflecting on ourselves is the most important thing. Thank you for your concern! ! If you want to avoid being scolded, you have to write a good book. I learned my lesson and will try to write better in the following books! Thank you very much. Meeting is fate, staying together is love.

This is obviously not a dog-licking article. Why do so many people say it is a dog-licking article?

It is better to set the score of beauty: 50 points for appearance and 50 points for soul. In this way, the number of enemies will be reduced by half, and we will feel much more comfortable. After all, there are very few good women.

I can be considered a regular prostitute of Qiezi. He started having prostitutes for free when the villain was first written. Later, Qiezi announced that he was a eunuch. I was still sad, but I still kept the book, looking forward to the day when he would come back to write a book again! I have nothing to do today, so I clicked on the villain to remember the author, and I was surprised to find that there were two more works by Eggplant! Sure enough, my brother is back writing a book again! Although one of the books has become an eunuch, it's good to be back, so come on, Eggplant! I will continue to read this book for free!

This recommendation is a piece of leather. I have already collected it by 100,000 yuan. Isn't it a high-quality product yet?

After reading novels for so many years, this is the only one that made me quit before finishing the first chapter. I really learned a lot today.

When I saw the latest chapter, I found that it was all the same old routine, with enemies provoking and taunting, slow water chapters, and fighting sessions. Then let the enemy go.

The book reviewer here calls himself Shennong, and I want to scream. He keeps saying that licking a dog will lead to death and looking down on dog-licking. When I look at his other book reviews, they are all about Long Ao Tianwen, and when I see the bad crotch article about a woman who can't walk, I really want to scream to death. Is this Shennong Tasting Hundreds of Herbs?

It's this author again. Last time he was halfway through the novel The Villain's Arrival, he went right to the ending and said he was going to work. Why is he starting to write again? You are halfway through writing this time and you have an appendix. I will block you next time.

The first hundred or so chapters are pretty good and eye-catching, but later on they fall into a rut, alas.

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I don't know why it always feels like the ending is a bit hasty. Maybe it's because I skipped a lot of things in the middle. What should I do with Wuya's two wives? I feel like there are some holes that haven't been filled in. Anyway, it just feels weird. I'll forget about it and still order the next book. I really like novels with the theme of villains recently.