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I think this book by the author is good in every way. It doesn't matter whether he charges or not. The plot is also good. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist is too fake and too serious. He is an ordinary diaosi time traveler who has no special reaction when he sees any beautiful woman. On the contrary, all beautiful women are just a cloud to him. , It is not in line with the character design of a time traveler. The protagonist obviously has perfect appearance, perfect strength, and perfect family background. Why does she have to be made into that kind of extremely cold character? It is not a romance novel. There are so many beautiful female characters in the setting. If she has to make her into Liu Xiahui, it will only make the audience feel more boring the more they read.

The author's mixing method: When the male protagonist goes to a new place, he must write hundreds of words to say he is handsome, repeating the cycle n times. The male protagonist meets a passerby, a few hundred words of admiration plot, and the cycle is repeated several times. When a new supporting actress appears, she must be told how beautiful she is in 200 words, a cycle. The passer-by woman also mixed a few crosses to describe it, and it was a cycle. In case of love conflict, add a few hundred words of cannon fodder and hatred plot. When it comes to background forces, add a few words of nonsense. In the fight, let's start with a chapter about the strength and moves of both sides. Start by talking loudly, and then the fight will be level for a second. Every time the protagonist uses a skill, he must blow it once, and the audience can memorize it. To be honest, you can watch the matryoshka dolls based on the strength of the boss plot. If you add more fighting scenes, it would be too much if you add water to it again and again. Most readers can memorize it by memorizing it.

How should I put it? I can only say that this book is barely acceptable for new book friends, but for us old bookworms, it can only be a trick. Others can read the backstage, the story line of the matryoshka doll, the one-punch Superman-like invincible immortal, and the villain's IQ line less than zero. This is not how Shuangwen is written. The various techniques are at full level, five small realms at a time, and the body and shape are destroyed with one punch. It is a bit too "low-end". This also shows that the author can only be said to be a fledgling. Readers are advised to subscribe with caution. The above opinions only represent personal opinions. Do not criticize if you don't like it.

I'm not saying that the only shortcoming of this book is the emotional line. It doesn't matter if you can open a harem or not, but forget it if you don't. What the hell are you doing with so many emotional lines, pretending to be high-definition? What a prude. What you write will only make people feel chilled and then you will pass it off in one stroke. You will vomit after reading this. If you don't accept it, come and criticize me.

I followed this book in the second grade of junior high school and read it every day. It is not an exaggeration to say that I stayed up late to read it at night. The plot was exciting and attractive, but somehow the author became more and more famous. I used to read more than 2,900 chapters. Now that I think of this book, I want to see if it is finished. Let me give you a bath! More than three thousand and nine hundred chapters, what do you want?

Author, if you can post 100 more pictures, I will directly reward you with 100 yuan! ! ! !

The author just changed a routine and changed places. It was like this in the Immortal Realm before, with people constantly provoking and slapping them in the face. This is still the case in foreign lands. First there are the Ten Heavenly Kings, and then there are the Seven Little Emperors. This is boring. Aren't foreign lands supposed to be very united? Nothing else. Why shouldn't we be very happy when the Six World-Destroying Kings appear in our domain? Well. Have no choice. The author does everything the same.

When I saw Chapter 1130, my defense was broken. You must be such a boring author. I really laughed to death. I am invincible in the fairyland. I went to a foreign land and developed into invincible. Although the word count was too obvious before, it was still bearable. I finally had a climax and killed the disaster. Boss, when you return to the Immortal Realm, shouldn't you be reunited with your relatives, give an explanation to Shengyi, and then slowly explain the other three bosses and the black shadow, and then reveal some things about the bloodline of the Jun Family Immortal, and finally start the plot of the protagonist and the final boss? If you keep writing like this, you can still read it, right? The result? ? ? ? After digging so many pits, drawing such a big pie, and the protagonist is so awesome, he returns to the Immortal Realm and still tramples on people? Can you please stop being so low-level? Anyway, I can't stand it anymore, so I'll say goodbye! For other book friends who want to continue reading, please continue.

Warm reminder: After attracting so many bees and attracting so many butterflies, Jun Xiaoyao is still a virgin. It is not difficult for us to wonder: Did he serve the emperor before?

The author should be a short-lived person, and it is terribly short-lived. One chapter is about 400 words, and there are currently more than 2,000 chapters. Compared with other works by this author, his more than 2,000 chapters are only the 300 to 400 chapters of others. Some people use word count to make up chapters, but this person uses chapters to make up updates. There are three major unfilial piety in life: it is unfilial to cram together chapters to update, it is disloyal to cram chapters into chapters based on the number of words, it is righteous to appeal to readers' taste, and it is short-lived for the author to monopolize the other three.

Only those that have appeared so far (those who have died are not counted, such as the Emperor Huang, and those whose true form has never taken action, such as the Ghost-faced Empress, the ranking is based on the original text, and actual combat performance plus or minus points) 28. Xuanyuan Qingyou 10,000 (I am too young to enter the mythology. The first action in the book is in Chapter 2630, against the Yaozi Spirit Dharma Body. The second action is against the Mother Queen of the Devouring Clan and the five-person siege of Black Disaster in Chapter 2694. The third time is against the foreign natural disaster-level immortal in Chapter 2812. I have not succeeded in several attempts. It can be considered as an elementary myth) 27. Jun Wuhui blessed by the Four Swords of Zhu Xian 13,000 (I won't go into detail about Father Jun's defiance of the heavens. He can be said to be the peerless god of war in this book. He gets stronger when he encounters the strong. In Chapter 1577, he only relied on immortal weapons to hurt the Lord of the End of the World just after he became enlightened. Although there were bonuses from the Four Swords of Killing Immortals, the immortal weapons Wu Ending Bell and Xuanyuan Sword were also used later when Emperor Wu Zhong and Emperor Xuanyuan fought against the Four Heavens.) 25-26. Mother Emperor of the Devouring Clan and Evil Demon King of the Devouring Sky 15,000 (Originally, these two should be on the same level as Xuanyuan Qingyou, but after Qingyou recovered from the emperor's daughter, she lost the blessing of the black disaster power) 23-24. The body of the Pluto blessed by the power of the Yaozi God's God of War and the God of War of the E tribe 17000 (The combat power of the Divine Law Body and Pluto Body here is the strength that can be displayed in most cases. The strength of occasionally launching a big move is not included. For example, the four sects are united into one. The main deduction is that the next five people can't break through the defense of the disaster source priest. The ancestor broke it with one move, so the combat power value of the Divine Law Body and Pluto Body cannot be given too high.) 16-22. The five major natural disaster-level immortals in foreign lands, the fairy tale, and the Cang tribe myth. 18000 (Basically the existence of a passerby) 14-15. Xuanyuan Huang, Yun Zhongzi 20000 (The oldest existence of the Yunsheng Imperial Palace and the Xuanyuan clan, but several times in the book, they can only match this combat power, and they are indisputable against the Mother Queen of the Devouring Clan and the Heaven-Devouring Evil Demon King) 13. Sansheng Emperor 21000 (Compared to Yun Zhongzi, it is increased by 1000, just because of the bonus of Destiny Void Body and Hongmeng Dao Body. If there is no actual combat subtraction item, this force has a combat power of 30000+ at least. He was scared away by Yun Zhongzi and Xuanyuan Huang, and he did not gain the upper hand in the subsequent battle against Xuanyuan Huang) 12. Asura King 25000 (He appeared with residual health, was injured by the ancestors of the Jun family, and was later sealed by the Kunpeng Yuanzu. However, he still needed the power of Chaos + the power of the Holy Body and Taoism + the power of Hongmeng + the power of Hades. It can be seen that the strength of King Asura at his peak is definitely not inferior to that of the Three Lives Emperor, and the book said that King Asura is the strongest among the seventy-two kings of the Dark Realm. The ranking should be similar) 11. The Immortal Emperor 30000 (Mainly for bonus points in actual combat. The 3000 rule is only short of the law of fate, otherwise he would become an immortal. Facing the martial arts blessed by the remaining bloodless body + waist god dharma body + the near-god-level Dream Emperor + the Huangdi dharma body, one person still has the upper hand in the battle, and the remaining blood has no end. He must have mythical strength after all. Calculating it at 10,000, the waist's divine body must have been at least 5,000+ at that time, so the Immortal Emperor is definitely not high here.) 8-10. Emperor Xuanyuan, Emperor Xianling, Emperor 31000 (Here we can only estimate the Three Emperors in their peak state, because Emperor Xuanyuan and Emperor Xianling were only temporarily freed from the darkness when they took action. However, although Famine was not in its peak state last time, it was also sealed by the Three Emperors. Moreover, Famine said that Emperor Xuanyuan could walk on the path to immortality. Emperor Xianling is probably the emperor of the ancient heaven. The emperor is the incarnation of the will of the world sea, and his strength is sufficient, so this combat value is given) 7. Paper Boat Girl 50000 (The real experience of the paper boat girl's strength was in Chapter 2706. She fought back the famine with one move. This is something that only the first ancestor can do. The previous five people did not succeed in the siege. The original text said that it is difficult to distinguish between myths, but 281 In Chapter 4, when fighting against the five foreign myths, the first ancestor injured the opponent, and the paper boat girl broke the opponent's suit. These two people were obviously superior to the other myths, so they deserved the 50,000 combat power) 6. The ultimate disaster 51000 (Originally, the ultimate acetonomous disaster was suppressed by the divine body of the waist. Many people think that the acephen disaster is the weakest among the four apocalypses, but they are both the four apocalyptic apocalypses. Who is weaker than the other? Kidney has the black blood of the sky + the bronze coffin of the third generation that can completely restrain the acerophe. Moreover, it is also mentioned in the book that the acephen disaster has not fully recovered. The last time he was suppressed by the Tongtian Ancient Emperor, one of the Three Pure Ones of the Jun family. Yes, a power projection is facing Jun Wuhui in the Taichu God King's body + the true spirit of the Qi Tian Emperor + the Mother of the Flower of the Other Side with the power bonus of the Ghost Faced Empress. These three will at least become immortals in the future, so the combat power value of a power projection is at least 10000+, so the complete body of Acenaphtha should also have a combat power of 50000+) 5. Wu Ending Emperor 52000 (When Wu Zhong fought against the Immortal Emperor, he was in a semi-disabled state. When he was forced to return to his peak state, he almost suppressed the Doomsday Lord and returned to the Immortal Sect. Moreover, the Doomsday Lord also said that Wu Jing was no weaker than the Huang Emperor at his peak. Unfortunately, Wu Jing fell completely after the battle at the peak.) 4. The Doomsday Lord 53,000 (The strength of the Doomsday Lord has no end, and it can basically be regarded as the ceiling of myth, and half of its feet have already stepped into the threshold of immortality) 3. The First Ancestor 55000 (If there was no actual battle against Black Disaster, many people would probably rank the First Ancestor at the level of the Sansheng Emperor at most, but the First Ancestor really blinded many people's eyes with his move. In Chapter 2697, one move killed tens of billions of Black Disaster creatures, and nearly god-level people vomited blood. This is the strength that only Black Disaster can show. In Chapter 2699, one sword knocked back the Black Disaster Breaker. Opening up his defense is something that the previous combination of Divine Law Body + Pluto Body + Xuanyuan Qingyou + Xuanyuan Emperor + Xianling Emperor could not do. Let Heihui say the words that the first ancestor took that step, which shows the true strength of the first ancestor. As for the following chapter 2812, one person can only be said to be a routine operation against five natural disaster-level immortals) 2. Famine 120000 (Five people working together can't break the defense of the source of disaster priest. After the first ancestor joined, the priest of disaster source still did not fall behind, but after the crying girl joined later, Xuanyuan Qingyou + the spirit body + the body of Hades + the first ancestor + the crying girl, then the priest of disaster source really fell behind) 1. Abandoned Emperor 300000+ (The true strength of the Qi Tian Emperor can only be estimated. His true form only took 1580 chapters. He slapped the Doomsday Lord away with a palm across hundreds of millions of voids. It was basically equivalent to an instant kill, similar to how the Disaster Source Priestess instantly killed the Heaven-Zhancing Emperor.)

He copied most of the settings from famous fantasy web novels, including Covering the Sky, Perfection, Emperor Domination, Futian Clan, Dou Po, Panlong,...

The book is good, but the overall system is a bit imitative of a perfect world. Although his combat power was much higher than that of Perfect World at the same level back then, you could tell by looking at how many immortal energy he had. So I can't become a god. What I appreciate most is that the protagonist dares to kill! Kill any woman who makes other people drool. Looks great. There are very few authors like Qidian. If the description is more macroscopic, many book friends may actually prefer your style to Chen Dong's. A protagonist is mainly cunning, and a hero is decisive in killing. No one would choose the latter. I don't like to watch movies with female protagonists. After all, if I want to watch romance, why would I watch fantasy? Because there is one thing. 99% Of books with female protagonists will lower the IQ of the overall book, making the rationalization unreasonable. Write your own system in the next book, maintain this style, and you will definitely become a god. Your book lacks its own meaning, so your income won't be too low. It's up to you to make a breakthrough. Any author must have his own style to break through and readers will remember it. Have your own label! Decisive to kill? A grand worldview? No heroine? .... Tag yourself a few reader favorites. You can go!

Updates are too slow! Can you update twenty or thirty pictures a day? Let us spend money happily🪖🪖

I've seen the latest place. It's my first time to post. I'm helping newcomers test the poison. The water is real water. I update two or three chapters every day. It's just a little bit of substantive content. It's purely word count. Those who want to read it can wait until it's finished. There's no need to chase the book. Chasing for more will consume your patience. I've run out of patience. Let's go. It's a waste of my starting coins.

Wow! Since it has been shown that the protagonist is not interested in women and wants to be Liu Xiahui, why do we still have to arrange so many supporting female characters in it? And almost every time I meet a female supporting character, she will emphasize words like "I am not an animal that thinks with my lower body" and "Although I look okay, it has nothing to do with me." Are you afraid that we can't remember it? Are you afraid that we don't know that the protagonist is not interested in women? With so many female supporting characters, I suggest it be more interesting to arrange a few more male supporting characters to act as stumbling blocks for the protagonist. Also, every time I meet a female supporting character, I almost always secretly have a crush on her. What do you want to do to prepare for a reversal later and accept them all? I personally like the other ones very much, but the main character really can't stand women. Just accept it. If you don't accept it, don't give so many scenes to the female supporting role and don't write so many female supporting characters. If you have the time, why don't you have more plots where the main character abuses his wife? That would be nice. 🙂 (Personal opinion haha, I just want to say it, it's too uncomfortable to hold it in 🙏)

I can probably guess the ending, which is similar to the ending of the perfect world. Everyone sacrifices, Jun Yaozi is beaten to death, and then he perfects his transformation technique, and then the emperor's blood from all time and space returns to become the invincible Jun Yaozi. With one move, he transforms into several people. Jun Xiaoyao destroyed the last BSOO in one go. In the finale, as for the system, the protagonist's previous life was the reincarnation of a certain universe boss. Before the reincarnation, he got a cheat for himself 😃😃😃

Again, I became a saint in 480, and now I have more than 2,000 chapters. I am a god, but I am a waste. Calculating, the average level of a small realm is more than 250 chapters.

I gave up at this point and looked at myself. How many words are there in one chapter? How many words do others charge for a chapter? Don't read it, withdraw it, pull it down, there is no pattern at all.

He is worthy of being the King of Extraordinary Numbers, Eternal Unparalleled. Using his Nine Tribulations Quasi-Emperor to kill an ordinary emperor with low health, he can make J Divine Water for more than ten chapters. His talent is truly invincible. I have been bragging about it all. I really admire it. My rating is: 6

I have given up on this book. I read it after more than a month. After reading the table of contents, I basically know what it is about! It feels so good to abandon the pit

This is going to be the second generation of Fisherman's journey.

I started reading it after the author wrote dozens of chapters. I have been a bookworm for many years. I thought it could become a masterpiece, but it turned out that it started to mess up Qian Shuiwen halfway. Now it is flooded with water, and a book with great potential has been completely ruined. Fortunately, it has been abandoned for several months 😤😤😤

Goodbye fellow Taoists, the author is writing with his butt every day, and I will wait until it is finished to read it. It's really not worth the time to watch the commercials. This is the truth, leave one word: water

The female characters in it are either enemies or love brains. The author is really amazing. He also likes to quote the number of characters in the character's name, which is very 6

I'm convinced by this. A supporting character who is a hundred years away can write ten chapters. This level is good. Come on, if you keep writing at this pace, you won't be able to see the ending in more than ten years.

I gave up. I read other novels and the difference was too great. Death by water 😅

Extraordinary! The evil cultivator Xiaoyao actually hooked up with the Emperor of the Soul-Eating Clan. He completely ignored the grievances between the two clans. In order to win the favor of the Emperor of the Soul-Eating Clan, he killed people and mutilated the genius of the Liu family.

The article is as incompetent as the author, just make up the word count

Since there are so many living ancient stars in this world, how can there be no blue stars? For example, there is a hidden planet called Blue Star somewhere. Only this planet is developing technology. After all, there are Blue Stars in the sky.