Beyond the Avenue

The writing is very good so far, it's my favorite type, keep up the good work!

You can check it out, fellow Taoists, the writing is superb and the plot is definitely not poisonous. Remember to stick to chapters 38 to 40, it is an absolutely high-quality work😁

Run away! Chapter 194 just builds the foundation! In other words, the human world chapter alone will have 1,000 chapters. Books with a slow pace all have one characteristic: they are either entering the palace or having an appendix.

All I can say is that you, the author, can be regarded as a clear stream in the bullshit Golden Finger literature. It is not easy to see a clear spring in this quagmire of "Gold Finger" nonsense. It is not easy to see a clear spring in this quagmire of "Gold Finger". I hope the author will not forget his original intention and that he will reach the top as soon as possible.

This book is the most stupid book I have ever read. In order to take revenge, a foundation builder challenges a large sect. There are several Nascent Souls, golden elixirs, and countless foundations. And it's not sneaky, it's straight-forward to kill. The problem is that the enemy doesn't kill just to injure him badly, and then he gets hurt himself. If he goes there next time, he's got a sick brain.

Because of a woman whom I met by chance, I have just started to practice Qi, and I got into a fight with someone who has a master's background in the middle stage of Qi training. I have no matter how much hatred I have, and if I have to have a life-or-death vendetta, I still take the initiative to join the fight. People who don't cherish their own lives will not go long on the road to immortality. If you fight for your own immortality, I don't think there is a problem, but obviously not, it is all for other people's affairs. After reading chapter 80, they have already killed each other three times because of unrelated things. If the plot is driven by arousing hatred rather than the author's brain, then I'll stop there. Abandoned.

Before reading: Is this book really that bad? The comment section is very violent. After reading: You are a deadbeat, you eat shit.

It's a bit too much. In a large sect, Yuanying is at odds with each other, and the Jindan below actually frame each other openly, and the foundations are fighting each other. . . And Zhu Ji actually dared to rape and then kill Jin Dan's daughter. . . Even if the golden elixir is dead, he still has another golden elixir from the same sect, and the sect can actually tolerate it?

I started reading this novel when I saw that the main character, the junior sister, was raped and murdered. I didn't understand it at all. The same sect was raped and murdered. Even if it was written about being killed, it was not that disgusting. And the most disgusting thing is that there is evidence. With just a few words of justification, it is said that both Jindan and Jindan are prohibited from taking revenge. No. It is said to sharpen the mind of the protagonist. This protagonist is also mentally retarded. He obviously has a golden finger and goes out on adventures every day. At the beginning, he offends people everywhere, and each offends more than the background. This kind of novel about Destiny's Child is really disgusting. The main reason is that he is repeatedly crushed by others. You can read it if you have special habits.

The protagonist was originally a casual cultivator, and he had already reached the late stage of Qi training. He accepted the protagonist and gave him a little guidance. Instead, this master got a lot of benefits from his apprentice. The spiritual milk saved him, and he also made great achievements in opposing the foundation building. Later, he gave gifts to the elders. The foundation building bullet was given to his eldest apprentice, and he also gave the spiritual milk. After seeing that others were trying to win him over, Jin Dan was unwilling to do it, and he was really convinced.

The inexplicable hatred is a bit too much, this is the third time I've seen it.

The old routine is that in the early stage of Qi training, there will be a bunch of enemies in the late stage of Qi training, in the late stage of Qi training, there will be a bunch of enemies in the foundation building stage, and in the late stage of foundation building, there will be a bunch of enemies in the late stage of foundation building. There will definitely be a bunch of enemies in the late stage of foundation building.

You deserve to be thrown into the street and poison everywhere

Inexplicably, he is particularly loyal to his master. Inexplicably, he always puts himself in desperate situations. Inexplicably, his IQ fluctuates up and down. He is sometimes very shrewd but always exposed. His IQ inexplicably decreases, and then he turns disaster into good fortune. The summary is that the protagonist never has a stable personality, and the turning points are particularly split in personality, which is used to create conflicts and extend the plot. I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up.

I finished reading it in one go. It is a rare masterpiece in recent times, no worse than the works of great masters.

No one likes to watch this kind of thing nowadays. The protagonist almost dies at every turn. Isn't this pure and does it mean that he doesn't have a long memory? After reading less than forty chapters, I almost died four or five times, relying on (the author's) luck to survive, just once or twice, and they kept coming one after another, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

Chapter 23 saw Xu Wen discovering black pearl rice in the field. Although the rice was owned by someone else, he thought that this opportunity could not be missed, so he stole the black pearl rice and hid it. Later, he was afraid that the owner would find out and destroy the plant, destroying the plant and scattering its bones into ashes. He felt that he had no choice in order to practice the great path. Then next time you find an opportunity and it is in the hands of others, do you want to steal it? Is it because you are afraid of being discovered afterwards, so you kill people and silence them, destroy the corpses and wipe out traces. Is it an opportunity? After all, it is related to the path of spiritual practice. You can't miss it and you have no choice. If this person were good brother Liu Ming, would he be stabbing a knife while crying: "Brother Liu, I'm sorry! I have no choice."? It can only be said that the protagonist has such a three-dimensional view. He can only choose this way. It would be strange not to choose this way. This is probably the starting point of the protagonist who has a despicable personality and has no bottom line.

It starts off as a refreshing mortal flow, but becomes worse and worse as it goes on, turning into a sect dog-training flow, with Pig's Foot being the trained dog. The high-ranking sect member beat the dog and then patted its head and said, "Who is not wronged? You were killed by the sect. The master was hunted by the sect. If the sect didn't kill you, you have to be grateful."

My evaluation is, sb protagonist, I recommend not to watch it

After reading more than 200 chapters, I could have given up the book and walked away, but I would really be sorry for my subscription coins. Reading other people's books will increase my knowledge. Is your book simply annoying? The trivial details are dragged out, the main and branch lines are passed in one sentence, and the IQ is not online! The plot is far-fetched! Doing things without thinking! The preface does not match the postscript!

The first few dozen chapters are okay, but the rest are all about sects' internal strife. A novel about cultivating immortals is all about murder and revenge. The old woman's bound feet are smelly and long.

I can't see it. Earlier, he killed the brother of a monk with a background for a mortal, and then gave 10 spiritual stones to a mortal woman for free. The world of immortality is inherently cruel. The strong survive and the weak are eliminated. The protagonist of the Virgin still pities the mortals and gives her salary to them for free. The protagonist is only on the second level of Qi refining. Don't you know how high the gold content of ten spiritual stones is for a Qi refining monk?

🐶💩. Holy mother bitch. If anyone feels nauseated after watching this, call 120 immediately.

Oh, I forgot because I just started practicing and offended a high-level person because of an unrelated mortal woman, so I was anxious. I just looked through the comments. Although the author explained that this woman has an unusual relationship with the protagonist, you didn't write it out. It's really funny, and several times these things have nothing to do with the protagonist. He always gets involved. Uh-huh

It was so speechless to watch. After practicing Qi and being wronged, the protagonist built his foundation. The title was [Emerging from the cave to become invincible]. I thought that the protagonist was like a fairy, killing people and taking revenge. I was quite looking forward to it. Who knows TMD, the first time to take revenge on enemy A, the enemy was injured and let go, and then disappeared, I was so angry; Okay, the second time immediately, without stopping, went to another place, a single Pick a dozen people, including several who are foundation builders, (I thought they were sneak attacks, but unexpectedly faced a direct battle), Well, the protagonist can't beat him, after a few fights, the enemy was injured but not dead, and he was injured to the point of vomiting blood, and walked away in despair. This is a plot that people can come up with. If you don't have the ability, just go for a sneak attack and kill alone. Watching it makes you angry, but not so good. Whoever watches it will feel aggrieved. (At this time, I felt something was wrong. The author did not understand the rhythm of online articles. When he should be happy, he was unhappy and insisted on creating some annoying plots.)

Why are every protagonist so stupid? Is it because I can't write without being stupid, or the author has a problem with his IQ? I really can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

Chapter 3 has been abandoned, and there are too many plug-ins: 1. Awakening ↑ Lifelong Memory 2. Recognizing treasures with the Sky Eye 3. Replenishing spiritual roots to the full top level

What bullshit are you writing😅😅😅Goldfinger is useless, and it's an old trick of killing your backers as soon as you get started. You can't even write a cool article, and the useless protagonist has no results no matter what he does. The big-sect golden elixir can't catch a useless foundation-building beginner.

The more I read, the more something seems wrong. What the hell are you writing? Everything appears in front of the protagonist, and he can barely explain it with a golden finger, but Not long after the protagonist became a disciple, the Yuanying line collapsed, and the golden elixir master was gone. The foundation-building master was killed by his fellow sect, but it was okay, just because there was a golden elixir master. He was lightly punished, and then the protagonist did not dare to return to the sect to build foundations. Can such a sect still exist? How does a sect treat a disciple like this? Worse than an outsider? Also give guidance to the protagonist to build the foundation? Did you do it the other way around?

I can't stand it anymore when I see the island. It's really tasteless and wastes money. I feel sorry for my money.