I Pinch the Heroic Spirit Myself

The plot is not very coherent. A fighting plot can be mixed with two chapters of inner activities and memories, which captures the essence of the four battles in the later stages of Naruto.

That year was the day when human psychology was almost destroyed. At that time, I burst into tears when I saw the doctor passing away. At that moment, I thought that if I could become a heroic spirit, I would definitely win everything. Now that the cheat is right in front of me, I have to consider whether this will be my only chance in this life. I believe that human nature can be successfully saved, and doctors are indispensable. It is our duty to rebuild the glory of the Hall of Valor!

I have a question, why didn't the protagonist pull out Minato's hair instead of pulling out Jiraiya's? Minato was the 22-year-old Hokage, and Minato died when he was 24, so he could be summoned directly. Jiraiya lived in Konoha for more than sixty years.

The hydrology skills are terrible. Water for the sake of water, forced addition of modifiers, forced addition of explanatory paragraphs. Certain hydrology techniques seem to be taught by primary school Chinese teachers. Some students always have less than 500 words in their compositions. The teacher will teach a hydrology technique. This is the technique used here 🙂

Are you pinching the heroic spirit here or there? They were all anime characters. I thought they were original heroic spirits.

Blending backgrounds can easily lead to a bunch of unreasonable settings. It is easier to grasp the plot than actually traveling through a new world or connecting two worlds through a time and space tunnel.

I really can't stand this batch of water.

The author wrote too quickly and killed Danzo in one fell swoop, and then had to strengthen the Third Hokage. The third generation asked his ANBU to kidnap Kushina, and sent Uzumaki Mito to the battlefield. The protagonist and Uzumaki Mito were clearly aware of it, but they didn't tell Tsunade and Kushina anything, and they were left to work for the third generation wholeheartedly. It was inexplicable.

There are too many narrative words, which affects the reading and makes the book feel watery.

In the early stage, there were too many settings thrown together, a lot of mess, and a lot of inexplicable things. These things can be disassembled and used in the later plot. There was Akira Uchiha in the front. I skipped three chapters and there were still things that were thrown out of the setting. It affects reading too much. A lot of explanations are completely unnecessary.

The protagonist talks too much and keeps writing about his psychological activities for several chapters. It doesn't advance the plot at all. It's all just in the water.

There are almost no writers who write Naruto, it's too niche.

The cool night makes me miss you like a river

Even if you lose your money, it's still a good Western fantasy.

Author I would like to call you 9 the strongest sea escape master

It's really too watery. I have no desire to continue reading.

Let's just have a final Valkyrie character, or a sword-toting criminal Yujiro, but don't use those little meat-like characters.

Um, are you still writing? Or start a new book?

Can you form yourself into a card? Similar to Red A.

No one will watch the simple Hokage. It's better to write a comprehensive

It seems that there will be no case of injecting female spiritual energy. It's too watery. It's tasteless if you do it. Goodbye (‵□′)

The first few chapters are all settings and there is basically no text.

This book. . How to say it? It looks a bit dizzy. . .

After two hundred chapters, it suddenly felt boring.