Unlimited Running Group Starts with Eating

Chapter 12 is revised. You claim to be a descendant of the late Tang Dynasty, but you call Li Ju by his first name. Even idiots know that you are lying. In ancient times, calling others by their names was a form of contemptuous address from top to bottom. Calling the emperor by his first name is even more of a crime of disrespect.

Compared with dnd, the infinite trpg rules are actually not suitable for writing novels with this kind of data flow. Because the data on this thing is a mess...

The emperor asked Long Geer to feel that the problem was bigger. His indecisive character will definitely lead the dynasty completely astray. Especially since this is still the fifth generation! It would be fine if it were in other periods. It's not impossible to forcibly support Adou. But in the Five Dynasties, this was an era where everyone was Lu Bu and there were many lunatics. If you want to be the king of this era, you don't have to be a benevolent person, but you must be a strong one! As for Long Geer's mother-in-law's character, can she control these lunatics?

A sentence is repeated over and over again, the feeling of something, something, when, something, or something. Try not to use the same descriptive words in a paragraph, otherwise it will only give people the impression of being long-winded.

There is too much explanation in front of it, and half a chapter of explanation was inserted inexplicably, which made my veins pop out.

Let me give the author an idea. After you finish writing, feed it to AI and let AI rewrite it. Listening to your novel is really torture. When a passage feels like xx, it feels like xx, as if it feels like xx, it simply feels like xx. Then this sentence pattern appeared in large paragraphs. This is not how elementary school students write their essays. Why do they contain so many idiosyncratic words? Don't you read the essay yourself when you write it?

I like this subject, but I don't like this book

The whole article is full of data, you are suitable for writing a team battle report

When I saw Chapter 8, I really couldn't stand it anymore, so I skipped through the battle chapters and found that after more than 60 chapters, I started adding and subtracting as soon as I started fighting. The data calculation was originally used for fighting deductions, and the final fighting scenes still had to be described in words. The author inserts a lot of data and calculations into the battle, cutting the rhythm of the fight into pieces. Even the data stream will not insert data like this and destroy the rhythm of the writing. You can refer to how the data is processed by the wind, and make reasonable adjustments. Now the battle report does not look like a battle report, and the novel does not look like a novel. Is this book just written for a small group of runners?

To be honest, there are so many calculations that I have to pay later. I don't dare to pay to watch them. I'm afraid that once the fighting scene comes, the whole picture will be filled with calculations. It will be like not watching it, and it will feel like a waste of money.

There is a great sense of separation between the various formula values ​​and the various activities of the protagonist, especially the various qualities and formulas that are suddenly inserted during the protagonist's battle. It gives me the feeling that the protagonist is actually from a God's perspective, and everything about the enemy is known roughly. The numerical descriptions that appear give me a feeling that it is not a narration, but the voice of the protagonist. The final effect is to give people a feeling of water and drag. These can actually be described through side descriptions. It's completed, and it's not like it's just a variety of numerical values interspersed, giving me the feeling that the protagonist is not traveling to other worlds to complete tasks, but playing games. This kind of sense of fragmentation is really strong. If the set values ​​have to be explained, they can also be written in separate chapters in other places. This is how I felt after reading the first few chapters. I hope there will be improvement in the future, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to read if the sense of fragmentation is too strong. After all, this subject matter is still very interesting.

Is this a record of someone else's group running and then written into a book? Also, I always find it weird that real-person running groups use a bunch of dice values ​​to display. The character attributes are okay, which is proof of the character's growth, but if you use dice for everything, wouldn't it become a running group record? (There was a section in the middle where all the cooking was done with dice, which made me feel something was wrong) Originally, a bunch of settings in the running group are designed to restore reality as much as possible. If you are already running a real group and still use these settings, it feels a bit contrary to Tiangang, and you use it just for the sake of use.

It's not so much a novel as it is a guide to unlimited group running It feels like it's a polished version of the running group's records In many places, long paragraphs are just descriptions of a test It's for experts to know without reading it, and for laymen who are too lazy to read it, skipping a chapter doesn't matter.

I watched the beginning of the first world and found it a bit difficult. The new protagonist only had a few enhancements to run around the set of Tianzi Wu. It felt like giving a new recruit a revolver and letting him go to the battlefield. The enemy was an armored army or even a Gundam (super series).

This author is also a genius. The comment sections of the three books are basically full of criticism, but he can still write it, and he will not change it even if others make suggestions. All I can say is that he is either a stubborn donkey or an ultimate jerk.

Can't we just use normal unlimited streaming? The writing and plot were originally good, but when the running group data was inserted, it became awkward and dramatic.

Why do I always think that unlimited running groups start with "getting to eat" 😥

Digging, the dice in the front were fine, but I vomited when I added Xiong Daiyu in the middle. A smell of the second dimension came to my face, and I had to take the initiative to borrow points. Is this a virtual game? He didn't think of ways to strengthen himself, even if it wasn't much, but just buying one more bullet or one more bucket of instant noodles, he was doing good to himself. Even though it was useless, it was his own life. It was really enough.

I can't stand it! The writing is so bad up to the Bleach chapter.

I still love running in groups, but I don't dare to play with the pig version of the rule book, because there are too many demon-level people, and some transfer methods only require B-level resources to get S-level things. It's too outrageous. When I ran in S groups before, I was just a spectator, watching a few guys who could theoretically reach infinity with their combat attributes. By the way, I helped the author push the book in several groups.

Mr. Zhan Kuang, should I go back and update those two books or open another one? Didn't Zhengyi still write the book when he was angry? ?

Is the author planning to write Bodoku III? I haven't read many books from Qidian.

Have you finished the book?