I Am a Warrior in the World of Immortals

Because the test results were too poor, and the newly added collections are also low, I am planning to speed up the plot and complete the book. At the same time, I am preparing a new book. The direction and basic settings are ready. When I came up today and took a look... Newcomers are shocked! It turned out that a big boss named "The God of Death" took advantage of me! Thank you so much! ! ! I have read all the new comments, and there are many encouraging ones and some critical ones. Indeed, my book has many problems. Hmm... After thinking about it, there are so many readers who are encouraging me. I will put the new book on the shelf first, and then continue to update this one to see if there is still a chance to put it on the shelves. Finally, thank you! ! !

Come on, there are so few people now probably because the number of words is too small. Personally, I feel that this book is pretty well written. So far, there are not too many bad points. The IQs of the protagonist and supporting characters are quite online. And although it is an invincible style, it does not force the protagonist to think that he is weak. This is great. Come on, come on.

Time traveler? From our perspective on the earth, it is far-fetched to not know how strong the power is. If you insult your IQ and don't fight with others, you are treating Pangu as your enemy. I have never read Chinese novels, so it's okay to compare them with Chinese gods. I don't know how much damage you can cause. You are so awesome. If you punch in vain, the world will be gone. . . . . Control your own power?

I read more than a dozen chapters, and the character of the protagonist is really unpleasant. He talks about being a mortal every day, but looks indifferent every day. Is he really not afraid of provoking hermit monks like beggars or sweeping monks? But it's still okay. It's better than many novels. Come on!

I have seen too many things, and only I think I am a mortal, while others respect me as a god. I'm tired of reading. I just started reading this kind of article, and I think I can do it with my imagination! It's so well written as I continue to read I can't read it now, it's so uncomfortable, I feel like I'm drunk alone when everyone else is awake

There is suspense at all times, there are indexes everywhere, the writing is smooth, there is no poisonous point, and it is fascinating. Come on.

There is a very huge bug. In the first ten chapters of the game, the protagonist does not realize how strong he is at all. It can be said that you have never made a move against others, right? But you will always practice and practice. You will definitely try it sometimes. How powerful is the blow with all your strength, but the protagonist does not know, so this bug is really the suppression of the author's consciousness!

Throw it on the bookshelf. If the two hundred thousand words are not dead, I will be fine.

As a newbie with a new book, there is a high probability that there will be many problems. I hope you can give me some opinions. I will read every message carefully and think about the direction of improvement. Thank you so much!

There is a bug at the beginning, that is, the protagonist does not know how strong he is, and has no idea at all. There are always times when he loses control of his emotions or uses too much force. At this time, whether it is hammering a mountain or smashing the ground, the strength of the protagonist is not too much. Even at this time, Even if the protagonist's IQ is questionable, he knows that he is a strong person in the whole world. However, in the first chapter, the protagonist only knows that he is an ordinary mortal. This problem is also a common problem in this kind of novels. Of course, if there are any settings later, just pretend that I didn't say it. After all, I only read the first few chapters.

The ultimate evolution of Zhou Gengmon! The beast with thousands of characters updated every day!

? ? ? I heard that the author wants to evolve into daily updates?

The book is good, but the fighting descriptions and image creation in this kind of article are too simple. They are basically mentioned in one sentence or even not at all. The content is more vernacular and can only attract a specific audience.

Okay, there aren't any bad points at the beginning and the rest of the rhythm is quite comfortable, please give it a thumbs up, author~! Continue after commenting

Don't be another Pig's Knuckles Invincible novel, it's just a novel about Pig's Knuckles that I don't know about. It makes my head hurt to read it.

It has evolved to daily updates. Come on, author.