Something's Wrong with This Knight

This is my impression as of the latest chapter. Even if the protagonist has the knight system but still has to abide by the rules of this world to take the assessment, I can imagine that he will be discriminated against and make things difficult for him. "So what if you have the knight system, you still have to bow your head and ask me to pass the test for you." This is my feeling about the current novel. What I wanted to see was Kamen Rider in another world, and now I got the Kamen Rider system in another world. There is a bridge on the road that requires XX certificate to cross. I said that I don't need a certificate as a Kamen Rider. Did you see my fist ✊? Or just watch me fly over, but now it's good that I have the ability of Kamen Rider, so it's easy for me to get a certificate. The main body is wrong. Now the different world is the main body. The knight system is just a plug-in. It makes no difference if you change it to any other plug-in. I was attracted by Kamen Rider, not by swords and magic. Now the protagonist's knight profession requires passing the assessment before he can learn skills? Then use your Kamen Rider abilities to steal, rob, and deceive. You have other abilities. Why should you follow the rules of the nobility?

It's hard to comment. I can't fault you for changing your game to add points for upgrades. But if you use Kamen Rider's game or the game that adds points for upgrades, I can only say that you just tricked Knight fans into scolding me.

It's really shocking, it doesn't feel like a fantasy adventure, it's all conspiracy, and everything you read is either the protagonist plotting against others or the enemy plotting against the protagonist. The author can't write an interesting adventure for the protagonist at all. In terms of supporting roles, the protagonist is weakened and the proportion of supporting roles is emphasized. The author should stop writing the protagonist and write a male supporting role. The description of the female supporting role is not amazing enough. Except for the 15-year-old guild receptionist, the new teammate female and male supporting characters have a harmonious relationship, and the written protagonist is like a passerby.

The early stage is too ink-filled, and the author's writing style can't keep up, and the flavor of the road adventure is not written at all. It is recommended to add a large number of storylines in which the Kamen Rider beats the medieval aristocrats. Most of the medieval aristocrats are no longer ordinary weirdos, and they must strike hard.

You mean, the protagonist in the knight novel doesn't transform? After transforming, his combat power remains unchanged, he just wears a layer of exaggerated armor. . . For example, can you use the Drive function without a car? For example, can you use Master's magical abilities without using a ring? For example, when he transformed into the newly born Kuuga and exerted the power of Enchan Tokio? Is this still a knight story? All I can say is to keep working hard 😅

The dialogue is a bit nervous, the author should be a newbie, the writing is too poor

Lacking common sense, how can a thief introduce himself as a thief?

Let's talk first before discussing. There is no condescension or malice. It's good that the author has his own ideas. I believe you all saw the Home of Civilian Knights at the beginning. What did you think of? How do these two things, civilians and knights, come together? The first argument, the possibility between knights and commoners? ! According to the author's explanation, civilian knights refer to knights who are promoted from civilians and are not knights of noble origin. (As for this, some people may ask, what about knights of royal blood? Are they also noble knights? Nobility here refers to the privileged class, and the royal family itself is the largest noble, that is, the greatest privilege) What feeling does the author give people when he uses the word civilian knight? Boldly guess, the brave behavior of ordinary people or people who break class, does it look much better this way? But a problem also arises. Knights themselves are the product of the feudal system. Land, oaths, and military obligations constitute the existence of knights. These points have nothing to do with civilians, or civilians have no say in these items. The argument from the first point of view ends, that is, the knights themselves belong to the aristocratic class, and there is a fundamental difference between the civilians. The second argument, the position of the civilian knight From the perspective of the role of the civilian knight, such as function, economy and status. During war, due to the need for bloodline leadership and combat effectiveness, it is possible for heroic civilian warriors to be canonized. But what does a knight need? Just obtaining horses and armor is already difficult for civilians to do. The subsequent maintenance may be simpler, but the materials that can be maintained are also controlled items. As for status, civilian knights show that the class is not absolutely solid, but the status is very embarrassing. They have the status of knights who belong to the aristocratic class, but there is a high probability that they will be regarded as "nouveau riche" or "marginal people" by traditional nobles, that is, nouveau riche. A chain of contempt for traditional aristocrats who valued their heritage was formed. After talking about the bad things, let's talk about the good things. Knights from civilian backgrounds are more likely to be portrayed as "counterattacking with virtue and courage", which is a good way to inspire. The second argument ends. The civilian knights are separated from the civilians. Although they are despised by the traditional nobles, they are still the superiors of the civilians. Finally, back to this book. What I want to see is that the combination of Don Quixote's optimism and the power of the Kamen Rider breaks through the noble blockade and rises to the top, becoming a knight free from restraint and gaze. On this point, readers and friends at the back can tell me whether it is as expected. Of course, this is not to say that the author's writing is not good. I can't compare to him for being able to write, let alone comments and suggestions. This article is just a personal experience. I hope the author can write better and get more votes. Let's encourage everyone!

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There is no plot, it is pure water, and the protagonist of the cow and horse keeps doing tasks. The main character is very boring and just fights monsters and there is no sense of enjoyment. Except for the Kamen Rider element which is interesting, other aspects are average and too normal. Don't make the protagonist too awesome, okay?

I forgot to mention that the increase provided by the belt should be linked to my own strength, right? Moreover, things like kiva and kiva can be considered integrated into the body and related to the bloodline, and can be considered as growing, and they are even more different.

Is the protagonist transformed into a driver or a cyborg? I think it's better to transform people

Just like the title, the saved manuscripts are exhausted, so I use every opportunity to think about the plot and code words to ensure two updates a day. In order to stabilize the quality and prevent it from declining, we can only update it in two separate times. Please continue to support, thank you!

,,, It's not cool enough, I turned it on, that's it?

When knight props are skilled, some readers will be lost The advanced route should also be a system of its own. Kamen Riders are basically knights errant. They do chivalry, take adventures in the wild, improve themselves, and change the country and the world if they have the ability. 🤫 But according to my opinion, it is probably a new book. The above description can be substituted into Xiao Mingge's template.

The synopsis was about knights, so I read a little bit about it. It's not that there's anything wrong with it. In the words of another book friend, it's mainly about other worlds, not knights, so it doesn't feel like reading about knights. Then the plot description feels relatively bland.

Like the title, I will resign and change jobs tomorrow, and then try to add updates to evolve from the second-shift beast to the third-shift beast 😡 Thank you for your support along the way!

Something is wrong, the world background and training background are set unreasonably, the knight title bought by the original owner seems to be of no use and is actually useless (should write something about this nominal knight🈶what kind of benefits), extraordinary training still needs to be assessed, the system promotion is too vague, the profession is passed down from the gods (it is better to write that you can step into the extraordinary threshold by kneeling three times and nine times before the statue of the god)

The turtle male protagonist was not happy throughout the whole process. As a Kamen Rider, he could only get choked by the nobles from another world and was unable to get angry. The same goes for killing people later. It would be better to write it as Luo Liba, Momo Chi, etc. Let me start with a few words: I have no grievances with you, Kamen Rider doesn't kill people, etc. It's nonsense. Later, he cancels the transformation and kills again. It's a bit baffling. The damn people are pointing their swords at your chest. It's better to take revenge and become a diabolical person.

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There are too many supporting roles, and the more you watch, the more boring you become.

To be honest, writing about knights is not as good as writing about wolves, which is unpopular.

Kamen Rider Knight

Kamen Rider Night Riding

The plot connection is not smooth and looks a bit strange. I always feel like I missed something.

If it's not on the shelves, it's because it's too powerful. Now I've seen more than 250 of them being level 6. I've written about them without having to write them down. Why don't you give me a map set?

Isn't it Shengcoo? It turns out to be Roar?

The dinosaur coin can be integrated into the body, but unfortunately I don't know when the protagonist will be able to integrate it.