The Self-Disciplined Soul Beast of Douluo

It's pretty good. You can try original work later, but there's no future for fandom.

After reading the introduction, is the title of the protagonist Qingdi? Reminds me of a very poisonous novel. The protagonist is a living being in a fantasy world. When the protagonist was still practicing Qi, the female protagonist climbed onto the bed of a foundation-building warrior in order to become stronger. Then the male protagonist was furious, practiced hard and then killed the man. The heroine was afraid, so she crawled onto the bed of a golden elixir monk, and then the protagonist chased and killed him. The heroine then climbed onto the bed of a person with a higher level of cultivation. Finally, the heroine climbed onto the bed of a powerful emperor. In order to chase and kill the protagonist, he also cultivated to the realm of the emperor. His title is Qingdi.

It's really rare to see someone who doesn't lick the protagonist or abuse the protagonist. The setting of Douluo is quite good. Why do you have to surround the protagonist all the time? It's normal to be involved with the protagonist, but it's boring to hang around him all the time. It's so exciting to develop the soul beast on the big stage!

Before reading: Douluo Dalu fan fiction that changes its skin but not its suit After reading: There is indeed something wrong with my Douluo Dalu love story

I have read a few Douluo fanfics (it seems to be on the homepage of light novels?) Except for this one, the others can't last more than a few chapters, they are not on the same level, those few books are garbage, I can't even stand the book, garbage, bah! This book is really good and worth reading. Except for the concept of love (I am a fan of single or no female protagonists, this book always feels that except for the wife, all the protagonists seem to be better, and there are currently three women) I don't like it, but there are very few emotional scenes in the back, so you can ignore it 🙂🙂

I found that it is very difficult to be an operations officer, hahahaha. The contribution of the book circle is greater than or equal to 500, fixed at 12 per day. If more than ten people comment on me every day, it will be 32. Woohoo.

The works written in Douluo fandoms that I have read are considered to be in the first echelon. The author's imagination is very good. It breaks away from the usual invincible flow of the protagonist awakening his martial soul through time travel. The invincible flow of time traveling into a soul beast goes directly to the God King's unique one. I think the transition of the timeline is smooth. There may still be some bugs in the settings, but after all, it is a fan work, so don't worry too much about the settings that are different from the original text I personally look forward to the plot in the future where the male protagonist will pamper Xiao Wu and follow the protagonist group after he recovers. Come on, come on

The author's writing of these two fan novels is very good. Regardless of the plot connection or the interweaving of the plots of the old protagonists, they are all handled quite appropriately. There is no criticism often made in fan fiction that blindly licks the protagonist, and there is no deliberate targeting. This is the normal state. The old protagonist has lost his golden finger and lacks the personality charm he should have. In fact, readers know very well what he can develop into. This is also the reason why there are so many Douluo fandoms. The protagonist's character flaws, the regrets of the supporting characters, the unreasonable plot, etc. Can be reasonably released here, and this makes him appear excellent.

The author should change the introduction a lot. It's really bad, because on the surface it looks like someone who became Xiao Wu's uncle and then pretended to be cool. I clicked on the introduction several times and then swiped out. If it weren't for various book recommendation groups or recommendations, I probably wouldn't have read it seriously. After reading it, I found out that it was actually a good book. Not only is IQ online, but also interesting and refreshing. So the author should change the introduction a lot. Maybe more people will click in to read it.

The author's writing has gotten better and better recently, and the plot and emotional drama are also well controlled. Keep it up, author! 🙂🙂

The angle is very novel, but there is a question that I think the author should prepare in advance? This is the kind of book that focuses on building power in the middle and late stages. In many books, the protagonist is inevitably stereotyped and reduced to a "tool man", and this situation is rarely seen in the game. Of course, I quite like the story line of Setsuna's beast shifters. If the author planned to create a similar group portrait, I think he would have to put some thought into it.

The biggest failure of this novel is the kindness of the protagonist, the soul beast clan, to the human race.

My mother said that if you play with your mobile phone for 24 hours, you will die suddenly. I have been playing for 23 hours, 59 minutes and 59 seconds. How could I die suddenly?

Personally, I think it's too difficult to lead a spirit beast. Douluo Tang San's era can be seen as an ancient cold weapon. At this time, the soul beast can still resist and even overthrow it as the overlord. Later, during the period of Huo Yuhao, the peerless Tang Sect, there were soul guides, which were modern guns. At this time, the soul beast can only guard three acres of its own land. Unless you fight for your life, both fish will be injured and the net will be broken. Wulin in the Legend of Dragon King era. Soul beasts can be kept as pets. There was no chance to resist. I think that if we really want to develop the soul beast circle, we cannot let humans develop. At least Tang Sect Huo Yuhao had seriously threatened the soul beast at that time. Not to mention the back. After all, if humans have acquired all kinds of modern guns, tanks, and aircraft, will they still be afraid of lions and tigers? You have to kneel down when the dinosaurs come.

Does the protagonist look like this😃

The writing is really good. I like this kind of old monster-style protagonist. Moreover, the linkage between the various works is also written in a decent way. The setting and plot are completely self-consistent, and the characters are integrated well. When I first looked at the catalog, the fox demon and the matchmaker came out, and I thought it was another high-octane work. I didn't expect that it could make up for the regrets of the original work while still being harmonious and exciting. The only shortcoming is that the ending is still rushed. Although the follow-up is narrated at the front, it is still rushed. In summary, I think this one and Survive to the Finale should be the two best Douluo fanfics.

When will you come to the original world God King Tang San (preferably in a weak state), and then meet an acquaintance here, only to be confused by the completely changed plot, such as being beaten by Xiao Wu for three consecutive years, being beaten by a group of soul beasts Ola who knew the original plot, and then being plotted by the protagonist to plot against his original world 😁

I hope A Yin doesn't die, accepts Xiao Wu, accepts A Rou, Zi Ji and Di Tian don't look like a couple, do they? One is more than 700,000 years old, and the other is more than 200,000 years old The gap is a bit too big, right? Ditian, is it enough to be his grandfather?

Overall, you are the most interesting book I have read and written about Douluo. I am not talking nonsense here. Regarding the book about Douluo, after reading the beginning, I just want to say, mmp, it is not interesting at all, and your favorite method is really, it seems to be a lot of fun.

Have you ever considered inheriting the position of Poseidon (I want to see how good you are)

Come on, it's finally time to counterattack the God Realm

I feel like the author's enthusiasm for writing this book has decreased.

One thing to say, I really liked watching the transformation of Dzi beads back then, especially the little white tiger... But now I have basically forgotten all about it. I hope I can recall it from the copy.

Finished reading. I really like to write Douluo fan stories from the perspective of soul beasts. On a year-by-year basis, the changes Soul Beast made to Douluo Continent, and then the original characters experienced various stories different from the original ones in these changed continents, which attracted me very much. There is also a story about the protagonist traveling to other worlds. Although it is a bit abrupt, it is okay and not a special drama. The writing of the emotional scenes is very average, especially the original character Xiaoqing at the beginning. It is like giving away a girl at the beginning, and the emotional foundation is extremely weak. Fortunately, there are not many emotional scenes in the novel, and there is no level of wanting a woman when you see one. Finally, it's a pity that the ending is a bit rushed. Everyone's ending was explained in just a few pages after the battle. I feel that this part is too short. I could write about the changes in people's lives in the mainland after the war and the follow-up of some supporting characters, such as Ah Yin and the new Tang San.

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Quite interesting, but there are too many typos