Do Good Things and Become Stronger

The creativity is very good, the world view is great, and the setting was quite interesting at first. The protagonist's personality was quite distinct in the early stage, but it was not until he established the organization that he couldn't stand it anymore. He was an egoist who insisted on talking about righteousness, and was inconsistent and had a split personality. At one moment, he would judge the evil at all costs, but then he would let the villains go and let them eat dog. Too much double standards, the poison is gone.

Is the author's new picture asking readers to design the characters? If so, then I won't be sleepy (*^▽^*) There are many character settings, and a strong character is more suitable. Of course, if you can create a contrast, it is also okay. For example, in ordinary times, she is a white-haired weak girl wearing glasses. In special circumstances, she will become a black and white big sister image. I don't mention tsundere because the feeling of that picture is really not suitable for tsundere. The girl in the picture is more heroic, and the tsundere feeling is ruined. As for the ability, it can also be the first strong character Fire or one ability for each of the two characters under the dual character. The feeling in the picture is the type that will be very focused in the battle, so it may not be good if you accidentally lose the battle, but it is not impossible. It mainly depends on whether the author has set the new character's perceptual ability to be strong. Finally, there is the personal plot. In the author's world view, if it is set as I mentioned above, it will definitely not be a setting that parents have the right to set, because the young lady and young master who have not been severely beaten are not so vigilant. Of course, it can also be set as a girl who almost becomes a political victim. Anyway, it cannot be With a silly and sweet character, you can also get to know the protagonist by being a clown who happened to pass by when you were helping others, and then get to know each other in the form of a clown. If the author wants to be funny, you can also make a classmate, but it would be good if the two of you cannot recognize him because he took off his glasses, changed his personality, or changed his hair color. In the end, I am just talking about my personal opinion. The final decision on the characters is still in the hands of the author ヾ(^▽^*)))

You can read the book with confidence, the story is quite good, and the three views are correct, but the ending is a bit rushed, but it is really difficult to write.

First of all, this book is food. All the characters are well portrayed But I feel a little uncomfortable about the character Chen Lu. Although I can accept her ending But I still hope it will be happy in the finale.

MMP, while reading the novel, I sat on the subway backwards, Gan

I think I am a master when it comes to writing chapters about Area 51. I have written ordinary urban novels in the surface world. Don't call me venomous, it's just my true feelings.

The early stage was very good, the huge world, the reflection of society, the characters' behaviors were traceable, it was very comfortable to watch, and the "good things" could make people empathize with it. However, it gradually fell apart in the later stage, especially when I changed the map. After changing the map, I had to start over again. The character relationships and social changes that were laid out in the previous chapter were all abandoned. You might as well write another book. The reading experience plummets in the later period. It is recommended that picky readers just wait until the end of Area 51. In this case, it is still a good novel.

The character development of the protagonist is also a bit better. . . Rather than being an idealist, it's better to be an ordinary person. Superheroes are so strong right now. The protagonist is not punishing criminals and eradicating evil for the sake of the people, but more like punishing criminals and eradicating evil in order to complete tasks and obtain rewards. While promoting the noble thoughts of the protagonist (which is not written very clearly), it also says that the protagonist is a mortal. . . Ideal home feels a bit redundant

I've finished reading it, but it's a pity that the latter part is not as well written as the previous one.

The front is really nice, Xiancao, the back is too messy, I can't stand it, it doesn't feel like the front anymore

Exquisite, really good. If you work hard and have quality, you will become popular sooner or later 👍

The chapters in this book that I subscribe to are very good. I have been practicing for six or seven chapters...

I have reached chapter 400, but I have no interest in reading anymore. I have changed to a new map, but the author has not made obvious progress😐 First, I feel that he wants to write about various social problems, but his writing power is not enough and he has not written in depth Second, there is no improvement in the characterization of the characters I hope the author can write better and better in the future😊

I opened this book casually, and I didn't expect it to be quite good. Female readers are always annoyed by the female characters when watching male videos. It's strange that this book is completely acceptable, and they all like these female characters. The writing is very awkward! I watched it one day and saw that there were 100 chapters left at 4 o'clock in the morning. I'll watch it again tomorrow. I hope the follow-up won't be too painful.

，51， As a result, the next volume will be over. Harmful! This book is quite good in the early stage. It refers to the background of the Esoteric Cult simulator, but it is not as desperate as the Esoteric Cult. The protagonist, as a believer of the Night Watchman Tong Zhongfei, has a very upright outlook on the front, but does not know the back.        ，，，， But after leaving Area 51, I started to stretch my hips.        ， Backgrounds such as the Secret Cult and Warhammer are very suitable for writing strange novels, but they are rare.

The author's early ideas feel very good, and there are no major problems with the writing. The protagonist's struggle and growth in this context are also very interesting to watch. From the mid-term, it becomes a bit hard to understand. The collision between ideals, different ideas, and changing society are too difficult to write well. Determining the character's personality through the exchange of words between the protagonists is also less pleasing. I hope the author pays more attention to the actions of the characters. Many times, readers resonate with the character's behavior rather than the character's words. After all, everyone is a good talker. After all, it is more difficult to make people agree with and accept it through speaking through characters. The characters' consistent actions and ending for their own beliefs are even more touching. Don't criticize any small ideas, whether they are suitable or not. Grateful

I feel like it was pulled after it was put on the shelves. It was really okay in the early stage.

I want a peacock, waiting for the first day of the peacock

Don't hesitate, the book is pretty good.

It became difficult to read it with enthusiasm after that, but I ended up finishing it. I hope the author will still write about esoteric Buddhism in his new book, but he won't always write about things like revolution, and he won't make the sense of separation between the maps too great. . .

🌸🌸🌸🌸        ，，，， I really like the way Qi Ping pursues knowledge, that feeling of being a top student - I really hope I can become such a person. The ending is a bit rushed, and many pitfalls are left unexplained - who will be the heroine, and what will happen if the protagonist gets married? Why do Sichen Dharmakaya favor Qi Ping so much... Qi Ping is hot-blooded, kind, calm, cautious, self-disciplined... I like such a friend very much. I look forward to the author's next wonderful novel.

It is very well written, please feel free to read it, the quality is excellent

A ten-year-old bookworm can only read this kind of thing. He can't read anything else. It hurts his eyes to look at other things.

I feel like the updates are really slow. It made me anxious. I just subscribed and added the monthly ticket. How did I become the 40th fan? I really hope I can't be included in the list. Come on, enjoy the good books together. Come and subscribe to Duoduo, so that the author can hurry up.

It's not enough to watch, it's not enough to watch at all. Hurry up and I'll almost book all of The Butlers 😏

The subject matter, writing style and plot of this book are very good and worth reading 🐕 ——Wolf Paw Print

The ending was too hasty, leaving a lot of holes unfilled

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I just finished reading the book Congratulations

The plot was too slow after it was released. I felt that chapter 30 promoted a small plot, and chapter 90 didn't even finish a big plot. It was a bad batch.