Deyun’s Top Star

The writing was good at the beginning, and I had the desire to continue reading. But after the emotional scenes were added, it was so awkward that I couldn't stand it anymore. I was so nervous that I couldn't stand it. Come on, author.

Man, to be honest, what I wrote is really good. Keep writing, don't be impatient, more and more people will definitely read it.

Can I say something? What kind of stuff are you writing about?

You deserve to die if you fall to death while playing such extreme sports.

For urban entertainment, don't write about martial arts or anything like that. It's embarrassing.

Updates cannot be interrupted, and writing must be done well and don't be unreliable. Slow work produces fine work. Come on😊

The writing is too poor and the thinking is immature. After years of hard work, I can only make it to Chapter 5.

The beginning is too serious. The subsequent paragraphs are not funny at all. The sense of immersion is too low. The protagonist is too calm at the beginning.

I think it's generally good, but later I wrote that he was so awesome that he became a capital tycoon, and that being in the entertainment industry was only delaying the development of the country, and I couldn't stand it anymore.

Why do I feel like this was written by a gunman hired by Deyun Society?