Attribute Conversion, Starting in Konoha

The protagonist's hatred for Konoha. I personally feel that the logic isn't very smooth! Konoha is equivalent to one of the Five Constants of the Ninja Villages, and it is the strongest military organization among them. If the protagonist's cheat ability is very strong, then it's somewhat understandable. After all, if one slap can kill you, why should I tolerate it? But the problem is,

I saw a post from someone saying I was just criticizing for the sake of criticizing. My feelings are complicated, and I am speechless. To be honest, I've already overlooked a lot of plot holes. For example, the protagonist's combat abilities. A person living in a peaceful and stable era transmigrates and suddenly discovers that he has an extraordinary talent for combat.

This book is pure self-indulgence. In the author's setting, the protagonist is an invincible genius whose intelligence is comparable to Zhuge Liang and Pang Tong, and whose talent rivals that of Pineapple Head. Within twenty chapters, the protagonist can already roam freely in the ninja world.

This is the third one. Three consecutive books abandoned; the reputation built up by *Dark Rising* and *The Cat Keeper* is completely ruined. 😅

I suspect this book wasn't written by the author at all; Jinmu probably sold the account. It's written without any logic.

Starting as a local commoner Chunin, and one of the weaker ones at that, how could someone with that level of skill steal the Book of Seals, a weapon of nuclear value, from a ninja village where ninjutsu is extremely precious? Where's the logic in that?

I think it should be revised. The protagonist's hatred for Konoha seems too forced and unfounded. He was only being chased for stealing the Scroll of Seals, something his predecessor did. I don't think that constitutes hatred for Konoha; at most, it just lowers his likeability. It would have been better if the protagonist's predecessor had forced him to agree to avenge him before he would fully accept the body. That might be a cliché, but I think it's much better than the current version.

I feel like you could allow more time for brainstorming between each book. I was actually a little worried about the seamless transition between the elves and the others 😂

You should stick to elf stories; they seem more suitable for you. Don't change genres.

I switched from reading part of the previous book and started following it as soon as it came out. I even invested in it. But now I really can't take it anymore. I'm posting this because the last few chapters have been unbearable. I'm not going to read it anymore, and I won't comment on whether the book is good or bad, or whether it's worth reading.