The Beginning of One Piece Swallows the Traveler

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I wanted to watch a pirated version, but guess what? Not found! The author's performance is very poor. . .

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When I saw the introduction Momonosuke Must Die, I knew this book was a sure thing 😁😁😁

I hope you can be as cool as the author inside

The introduction is well received. No matter how long ago the characters were worn, the original plot remains unchanged in the end. Whether he was adopted by Garp or became brothers with Ace, Ace was eventually captured by Blackbeard, and Whitebeard died in the war on top. Such a time traveler has no use. The most ridiculous thing is that I have seen a protagonist written by SB who can kill Kaido, and he is also a vice admiral. He planned the war half a year in advance to kill Blackbeard, but the final result did not change.

I can't keep up with the trend. Chapter 8 says that the overlord's color and domineering energy can only clear the minions, which is useless! Wrong, the advanced usage of Overlord Color Haki can wrap around and attack, which is stronger than Armed Color Haki.

This setting of swallowing the time traveler may attract some people, but at the same time it can also dissuade more people. Otherwise, the setting of traveling into Sauron will definitely be seen by many people. If you don't want to see it, you won't want to click on it.

It's better to write about people who travel directly, and devour the people who travel through time like this. . . . The character is a bit outrageous

Suoda, promise me, stay as far away from Kai as possible😭

There is a Hokage next door who also failed in time travel. Do you think he got cold in the end?🙂

When I saw the main character asked for it, I ordered it completely without even looking at it. Even if I'm over thirty, I'm not short of money. Come on, author.

Well, I won't say anything anymore, author NB! ! ! This "click to view" really impressed me, 🙂

To be honest, I don't think there is any need to change the fruit. Since it is a spoof version of One Piece, the protagonist must have a trump card. He usually uses a sword and can escape when encountering unpredictable situations. Now that you are going to the Grand Line with Kuina, you must encounter an irresistible storm or fight against a strong force. When there is a big enemy, there are many enemies. You can kill several people, but you can't kill everyone. Kuina will be in danger. No one really thinks that Kuina is talented in swordsmanship, so she just learns everything quickly. Kuina is now capable of seeing and hearing, but without weapons, she has not yet reached the realm of swordsman. It would take at least seven or eight years to reach the Great Swordsman, and she had no cheats. If the author lets the protagonist find a partner, a navigator, etc., Then the author needs to create original ideas for those partners. After returning from the voyage, will he recognize Captain Zoro or Luffy? Luffy will also have adventures and make friends with popular partners in One Piece. In addition, the Shining Fruit can reach the speed of light. The protagonist has a system that can improve neural response awareness, etc. It must be deeper than Kizaru's development. Speed ​​is power, isn't it cool? It can also theoretically reach super light speed and transcend space and time. Since Sauron is the protagonist, it is reasonable for him to have the highest combat power. When fighting the World Government, isn't it normal for the government to have people with time and space abilities? Author, if you want to write about bonds and companionship, then Oda must write better. You must have your own characteristics. Moreover, in the previous article, you wrote to inspire other characters to conquer the world government. In the end, my writing was long and reasonable. Solonmi can criticize as much as he wants.

Zangetsu 23333

To be honest, the concept of Devil Fruit like the Slippery Fruit is quite buggy. The mental outlook at the shallow level; the injury status at the mid-level; and the enemy's Devil Fruit at the deep level can all slip away. Maybe it would work if we were a little bolder in time and space...

Author, don't write about the three-sword style. I remember Zoro used the three-sword style for a reason.

This author's anti-piracy awareness is the strongest I have ever seen... Can you believe the system panel and small theater plot in the comment area? ! !

It's very interesting. I invested in it. Good luck to the author!

Dear author, your writing is so good. I really want to keep reading. Please update it soon. I can't wait!

Come on, finish writing as much as possible. After all I invested a lot XD.

I don't know since when did the time traveler become so hopeless?

Is there no one around 🌙

I haven't watched it yet, but the synopsis says that Momonosuke must die, so I want to watch it 😃

Looks good, come on

When will we refresh the Grand Line 🥺?

The green algae head is the protagonist, this is so beautiful, it will make you panic

Are you following the boat? Is it explained in one chapter that he swallowed the time traveler, in the second chapter he becomes invincible, and in the third chapter he becomes Luffy's little brother?

Are there any other novels in which Sauron is the protagonist?

The author can write a book about Sanji 😏