I Really Just Want to Take Some Time

I read the first few chapters very carefully, and my temporary feelings were written down in the chapter and paragraph reviews. First of all, the setting is not bad, time becomes currency. But, what's more, like Yan from the R&D department, how can a person with such a high profile and IQ hold a high position? It seems that there is really no one left in the end of the world... (Per capita novice IQ) Then... I have a huge question. The hero's colleagues suddenly turned into deserts, and there was no warning! Logically speaking, this is like, in a safe zone similar to the end of the world, a person suddenly turned into a zombie, and this person is still around many core figures such as the director of the R&D department! ! ! (In the part I read, the author did not give the reason why he turned into a desert, and there was no foreshadowing before. He was just cannon fodder for the novice protagonist to show off.) Are there any control measures? Then they are still living together. Maybe that night, one or two people turned into sand and killed the entire city in the middle of the night. This is a bug, I don't know if the author will fix it later. If there are any other poisonous points, please post them in the short comments. Then... After reading a few chapters of character description, the male protagonist is not very likable. I still can't forget the phrase "very smooth". Is oral sex good? Not good! Imitating the "lay people who add money" like me in Yiwei Zhou is even seeking death. Who is the Buddhist layman who adds money! One of the most popular characters in Xiuchundao Yi, he has extremely high martial arts value, is arrogant and domineering. This kind of person says "very moist", which really makes me angry! (Moreover, the layman who added money was just to stimulate his junior brother, and did not do anything to the girl?) And the male protagonist is simply teasing women. I read part of it and felt that the male protagonist described by the author has no shining points... It is very poisonous... It feels like the result of constant revisions by Mengxin under the designation of the editor. It is full of routines pointed out by the editor, but the application is extremely rigid. (It's like taking a bunch of dark food that you already know what it is, but not caring about you, and stuffing it into your mouth in one breath.) Finally, you shouldn't blindly find faults, after all, it's not easy for new writers. Well written, it's pretty good. (Of course, it is not attractive to an old fritter like me.) The poison test is over, call it a day! If you suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder later, let's look at the follow-up...

This setting is impossible. If the world becomes a basic currency used for transactions, there are only two extreme results. 1. Everyone will enjoy all the time directly, and then die directly. There will be no capitalists. Because no one will work for you. Finally, everyone just disappears. 2. Apart from the basic issues of eating and keeping warm, no one cares about anything else in life. We have returned to the era of exchanging things for things. Finally, new exchange items of equal value reappear. And then develop again. But wars will break out again and again.

Looking at the introduction, how come it looks similar to the Movie Time Planning Bureau?

It feels very good! The setting feels like it has great potential, and if used well, many plots can be very interesting. It's a pity that the setting is too one-sided, and it feels like five chapters are missing from the beginning. Although it has a role for time now, it is less. If it is just used as currency, it feels like something is missing. Hopefully more uses will be developed. Also, let's talk about the system. I feel like I haven't made good use of the system. The system now has no features at all and is like a robot that sends tasks to the protagonist. I hope I can draw a picture for the protagonist or something. Currently, the only thing that seems to have no IQ is the ghost thing at the beginning that turns into time or something. It has emotional fluctuations like a baby. It's either not good or it doesn't like it. Anyway, it has great potential and is on the bookshelf. I hope it's a single female protagonist (cross out) Oh, it's Ye Qiu again (cross out)

Chapter 23 I don't know how to explain it. I don't understand the mentality of the protagonist who pretends to be so miserable that he harms himself. Anyway, I can't understand it... Especially at the cost of one month, it's very poisonous...

There is a bug in the time bank. The current period is 1%, and the basis is one year, which is 8760 hours. If you deposit the interest generated every day for these 8760 hours, you will get 330982 hours after one year. The death period seems to be 4% per day, but it is 21535 hours after one year. I hope the author can modify it.

There is an American movie like this. The people at the bottom can only survive as long as they work every day. People in the upper class will always exist. The fertility rate is pitiful and they are just a pool of stagnant water.

It is very bold that there are three masters in one village and two li who do not know the Four Books, Five Classics and Six Arts. They dare to teach seven or eight or nine people.

It's really a late-night melon. There are already three VIP chapters. Why did it fail to be put on the shelves?

It's a very interesting setting, but the details are not perfect yet. There is nothing special about it yet. Come on, author.

If this were the world, capitalists would live forever

Then have children, and then educate the children to give all their time to their parents. It is a matter of course. If the children are not exposed to the outside world, wouldn't everyone have endless time?

I saw a movie that seemed similar.

Exist? Why not create a fan group

You dare to open a bank if you don't have the strength. This is a poisonous point. It's a shameful development.