The Era of National Lords: I Can Sign in and Clock In

Come on, author! If you can't write emotional scenes well, write less of them.

I am a new author, and the plot development is just like that. According to my own ideas and wishes, it may be bad, slow, or not good. You can bring it up, but don't just say you don't want to read it anymore. Just let the author speak directly. I deleted it immediately when I saw it. I write based on my personal interests. I post it online in the hope that there will be a sense of recognition and that someone can support the author instead of coming here to cause trouble. If you feel bad, you can write the bad points here. If you don't want to read it, just leave silently. I thank you all in advance.

What lord talent did you awaken? Wouldn't it be possible to awaken by fusing the heart of the lord? Now, after you fused the Lord's Heart, I still only found one talent that was given by the system. Didn't I have the awakening talent? ? ? ? ?

As in the title, please give me the name of the character and the name of the tribe. If possible, you can also try to add personality and other settings to the character, crowdfunding and writing a book.

After reading the introduction, I felt a little bit silly. Wouldn't he be killed if he surrendered directly? Or slice it. Aren't you worried about being sliced?

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Chapter 25 says that later the lord will have to travel by himself. Isn't this book a territorial conquest type? Why do Lords' stories always describe the protagonist's personal combat power? I want to read this kind of thing. Isn't it good for me to watch fantasy? I only watch the lords to watch the development of the territory, just to watch the farmers, not to watch the lords personally go into battle and fight!

It makes me speechless to go to school after becoming a lord. What's the use of pig's feet except to show off?

This book is quite good. I think it would be more attractive if the author changed the name. For example, how about "I Surrendered to the Gold Finger"? Change the content of Chapter 13 to Chapter 1

One day in the main world is one year in the wilderness, three years in high school and four years in college. Half of the time spent in the wilderness is more than a thousand years. This experience may make everyone feel like a monster.

It's not that the golden fingers are bad, it's just that you don't use them. The power of pig's feet depends entirely on the author making them up out of thin air. The fault of pig's feet is not the golden fingers but the author.

It feels a bit headline-grabbing, and Goldfinger has no sense of existence.

I don't know why, I can't comment in this chapter, but it doesn't matter. It's the same here. There are a few problems. First, the system is invisible. When you need it, you can use it to open it. When you don't need it, there will be no trace. Either rationalize your own capabilities and not write the system, or just stream the system directly. Second, I personally feel that a lord should look like a lord. Here, I don't see the majesty that a leader should have. The author seems to believe in a harmonious, friendly and loving family? Third, since it is absolute loyalty, it has become a belief. Some of the bells and whistles seem to me to be just words, which makes me feel embarrassed. I have already said that the interests of the lord are the priority, and collective cohesion is not something that should be there? (I didn't say there's anything wrong with raising the national flag, I just put it here. I can't get it started at all. I'm just embarrassed. Don't complain.) Fourth, I haven't seen it on the shelves, but from what I feel, you are so unreasonable as a lord. After working hard for a long time, the strength improvement is all for the people, and I can only incidentally. And the improvement of the people actually depends on the altar. It feels that it is not as fast as my own cultivation. Moreover, aren't there many cultivation systems? Why don't you practice it yourself?

I don't know if you changed your mind later, but from the chapters I read, you seem to have misunderstood the scope of technology. Technology: Science and technology are essentially the extension and related practices of various categories of scientific research, and scientific research is only divided into disciplines and not sides. There are many categories of science, such as materials science, physics, etc., Psychic energy or energy is just one of the categories, and occult science is also a category. Modern science and technology mainly focuses on mechanization, electrification and intelligence with electromagnetic force and machinery as the core. It is generally mistakenly called the science and technology side. It should be correctly said that it is the modern science and technology side. Throughout the journey of the protagonist in the early stage, it has been emphasized that only steam engines can be developed. The question is, does mechanical gunpowder technology really need steam engines? Hydraulic machinery, wind machinery, muskets, artillery, explosives, bed crossbows, heavy repeating crossbows, crossbows, airships and other available technologies are selectively ignored... Above

Personally, I feel that there are too many time-travel plots, and I hope the author can skip them quickly! After all, pig's feet are mainly used to develop civilization and protect the main world.

I don't know what the author thinks. I wonder if these recent chapters have anything to do with the lord article you wrote before? When writing about lords, just write about lords, and add time travel. It feels like lords don't look like lords, and time travel doesn't feel like time travel.

I keep joining organizations and so on, I am really speechless😓,

This book would be boring without a female protagonist. At that time, the two territories will be merged. That's interesting.

Write well and keep it up. There are monthly recommendations and tickets.

What if you surrender and they don't send you back to Blue Star, but just confiscate the plug-in?

Author, is it a single female protagonist? I hope it will be a single female protagonist.

One to see what schools, universities, colleges, virtual. I deleted them directly.

As the title says, current readers should also know that the author is still studying, and is facing more and more semester projects, and is gradually becoming overwhelmed. At the same time, I need to complete the project assignments before August, prepare for exams in August, and the final exam is at the end of August, and I will be busy with internship work after that. I originally wanted to pause or cut this novel directly, but it was indeed a bit poor. At the same time, it is really bad for you readers and those who have invested in it. Therefore, I will keep updating once a day or once every two days. After I finish these things in a month, I should be able to keep updating for two months, and then I have to face the internship again. I hope you can forgive me. Anyway, I don't care about my grades. My current goal is to write one million words and then finish this book.

It looks too bland

Let me talk about some of the shortcomings of my book. The first is the emotional scene. Readers can just skip it. It was a failed attempt. The author has never been in love, so the emotional scene is not well written. You can just skip it. What follows is the first time traveling to the gun battle, so skip it. The author's level of writing fan fiction is a bit poor and he didn't write the gun battle well. Others personally think it's okay.

Is this really a lord article? It feels like taking a group through time

Insert an eye. I've opened a new book. Please kick me.

Not later. . Too bland. . Not to mention the territory has developed. . After a few words, it's rubbish and a waste of my money.

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