The Devouring Spirit of Dou Po

Doupo's combat power is high, and the most it can do is explode stars. I remember a certain division with low martial arts to defeat an army alone, medium martial arts to move mountains and reclaim the sea, high martial arts to pick up stars and moons, super martial arts to create and destroy the universe... Dou Po should have the level of high martial arts, right?

Has anyone seen Doupo's Yin Sect wreaking havoc? And dark auction house

It doesn't matter if it's dark or not, the main thing is to have sex with women, there must be a place to vent the darkness.

The first seventy chapters are well written, but the rest becomes a bit more conjectural. Yao Lao used his disciple Han Feng to experiment with Fenjue, and even helped Han Feng find strange fire. Han Feng was afraid of being killed by Yao Lao to obtain the strange fire, so he had no choice but to betray his master. 😵 I haven't read the original novel, so I'm just relying on my imagination.

The first ten chapters have poisoned me. First of all, there are no exercises. How do you practice? If you don't have the skills, even if you can cultivate, the quality and quantity of your fighting spirit will be far weaker than those of the same level. Secondly, what I watched was Dou Po, which is fantasy, not martial arts. The protagonist has learned swordsmanship after a year. Can you beat others with an average A level? Then there is the issue of fighting skills. Fighting skills do not need corresponding attributes. The most important thing is that the author also set the Seven Color Poison Sutra as a wood attribute and the Ziyun Wing as a fire attribute. Have you really read the original work? The second scenario is fine, but these are completely poisonous points. Is it really a god coming and poisoning them to death for you to see?

There are too many secondary assumptions in this book😅

The setting is terrible. At the beginning, the original fighter starved to death because he could eat and gnawed tree bark. This is too outrageous. In the fight, the strength of the broken fighter can already live very coolly. For example, Mu She, the leader of the mercenary group in Qingshan Town, is also a fighting master. He can already become a senior executive, and Wanyao Zhai doesn't even have a Dou Master. After saying that the strongest Dou Master among the three major families of Wu Frank is the Dou Master, Dou Dou already has quite a status. Can you tell me how a talented Dou Dou who is more than ten years old can starve to death in Dou Po and chew tree bark?

The author has always said that the original work is unreasonable, and that the system space of his own book is full of bugs.

The protagonist is a bit stretched, and the Dou Huang is only one star at the top of Dou Huang, but there is no major stage. I almost lost another hand. To be honest, it is very profitable. The weapons are top-notch, the sword skills are top-notch, and there are plug-ins. It's far behind the anti-inflammatory game compared to last year, and the dark flow needs to be written more excitingly. The current protagonist doesn't have the spirit of a big boss, to be honest. What does this mean? ? ? The mini-boss in Dou Po doesn't even have the strength, so why would you trade your life for him? I used to say that Medusa can escape with his life, but now he has been promoted to a higher rank and almost died from beating someone who is not as good as Medusa. To be honest, I am speechless. If you can't fight, you won't run away. If you run away, you can cultivate, or you can recruit people, but you can't recruit people to destroy this country? It's so dishy that I really have nothing to say.

Come on author, you are so careful, it suits my taste very much, I am optimistic about you

Really... I always choose the original cat cake... But there are too many second designs, and there are even more cat cakes... The fighter doesn't even have any skills, so he thinks he can leapfrog the level and slaughter Qingshan Town... There are flying fighting skills but he doesn't learn them. At first, he said they were for exchange. Kung Fu. Later, when there were Kung Fu techniques, I still didn't learn them. It was as if I had forgotten... A batch of bloody plots that were completely divorced from the original works... The original character design was hard and black... Zi Yan turned into a blood-handed butcher. No matter how old He Yao was, Xiao Yan was black... He looked down on others! But at first glance, others are much better than this protagonist... He is just a butcher...

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I finally realized that no one had read this book, it was so rubbish, especially the second design and fighting skills attributes that the author had designed himself. This is completely rubbish. If you write a fanfic well, why do you want to create something second nature?

Give the alien fire to others? You said the alien fire repulses you, laugh to death. The alien fire did not repel Xiao Yan when he absorbed it. The Spirit Devouring Tribe was actually written such a waste by you,

I just watched it, but the second setting of the author's fighting skills is really cool, and I have to complain about it. Many fighting skills do have attributes, but not all fighting skills necessarily have attribute requirements. Quite a number of them actually have no attributes, some have special requirements such as Huang Quan Tian Wrath, which requires the soul realm, and some do not, such as Baji Beng. The author's logic seems to be that if someone is crazy, everyone is crazy. There are indeed fighting skills that require attributes, but you can't just assume that all fighting skills require attributes just because of this. Attribute fighting skills are only a part of fighting skills, just like physics is divided into theoretical physics and applied physics, and there are various subdivisions such as high-energy physics and so on. The same goes for fighting skills. Attribute fighting skills are just a part of fighting skills. Fighting skills also include flying fighting skills, sonic fighting skills, body fighting skills, soul fighting skills, physical training fighting skills, and technical fighting skills (such as Liuhe Traveling Shenqi, and ancient Shura Dutong's Ten Thousand Beasts Spear Technique), physical fighting skills (such as Bajibeng, Lin Xiuya's snake-wrapping hand, Liu Qing's coffin-cleaving claws, etc.), Secret fighting skills (such as Emperor Seal Jue, such as Blood Soul Gu, Amethyst Seal, such as Dark Skeleton King), etc. There is also the Yunlan Sect's Cloud Mist Covering the Sun Formation. This is not classified into the scope of secret fighting skills. Do you still want to use the entire cloud attribute? I think the description in the original work is very clear. Why does the author insist on assigning attributes to fighting skills by name? You divide and divide in a messy manner. When did Huang Quan Tian Wrath become a dark attribute? Although it is too late for me to talk about it now, I still hope that the author will think carefully about it when writing a book in the future, and not just slap his head on it and make a ridiculous move.

Adaptation is not random editing, and random editing is not random editing.

The most annoying thing about reading fan fiction is that the author's second set of things makes me vomit, as if I'm really convinced, as if I'm deliberately trying to suppress the protagonist.

What is slightly dark, where men are killed but women are not killed? , The men in the novel are so miserable, they will be killed just for saying something, and they die inexplicably. No matter how disgusting the women are, no matter how slutty they are, well, they just don't die, they are just slutty.

Is there y power, the ninth-level kind?

Blind 🐔 let me write, more than thirty years old? ? ? ? ? ? ?

I can't stand this second-guessing, bye bye

(So I posted the picture in the discussion area) It was inspired by reading Chapter 211 ()