My Senior Brother Has Been Lying in Wait for a Long Time

This book doesn't look like it was written by a newbie. It's quite coherent, and I can see that I still have some basic skills. However, the supporting characters and the plot need to be described in more detail, so don't be afraid of trouble. Blindly emphasizing darkness and calculation is too monotonous, which will lead to the world's shape and senses not being full enough, and it is likely to become a fast food novel later. If it is written a little deeper, the protagonist is not deeply portrayed enough, and the character is clearly portrayed. The dark world and the humorous plot are quite contradictory. It is a bit like Bai Xiaochun in One Thought of Eternity. In fact, some parts of One Thought of Eternity are like fast food novels. I have been reading online articles for 11 years, in all genres. There are a lot of new books, and there are also many that started out well, but many of them were scrapped by the middle. I hope the author can work hard and invest in you!

Is the junior sister the heroine?

Good books are not popular, the whole book is full of details

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The Yin people have no problem with it, the sect that the protagonist joins. Definitely not a demon sect

The author wants to py it, this book is okay 😅

It's pretty, but it's short and weak.

Well, there are no other pictures.

Go and py it with the boss. It's not me. If I hadn't browsed to the end of similar works of a certain book, I wouldn't have seen this book. Well written

As for the update, I recommended it to the people in the group.

I almost ruined the book😢

This book is really good, except for the lack of updates.

The boss is awesome, the writing is so damn good, holy shit! ! ! ! ! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I voted bimonthly. Stop being a eunuch

Good guy, Qidian just pushed this book to me and I saw the latest chapter Eunuch.

Alas, it's a very pleasant book, what a pity

The truth is. . . I added it to the bookshelf after reading the comments before, but I haven't read a chapter yet, and suddenly it was announced that The Eunuch was coming, and I was wondering whether I should read it or not. . . Tangled. . . . .

Brothers, if you want to play a supporting role, you can leave a message with the character name downstairs, and I will arrange it as appropriate.

I haven't read it yet, but after some calculation, it's 2600 per day?

What a great book, it's a pity that it's a eunuch.

It's a pity that I just saw it was on the shelves today and didn't come to support it. ✊🙏

I can update it more, the recommendation from the starting point is still as good as the one I just came here,,, man

Well, actually the book is quite good, except for the first few chapters, which are not perfect, but they are already great.

This book is really to my liking. It's such a pity that the book has been discontinued!

Damn it, is he a eunuch? I've only written a few chapters and I want to be a eunuch.

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