Sign in at the Beginning and Have Abyss as the Demon God

Just two feelings, the new map in the clouds and the confused Riddler. The setting that you know as the author does not mean that the readers understand it. After reading it, I had the same feeling: What the hell is all this inexplicable?

No, you didn't introduce them when you wrote the article? After reading a few chapters of this book, I don't understand it at all. I only know the name of the protagonist, that there is a golden finger, and that he wants to scare people, and then there is an abyss, which is similar to an administrator. I don't know anything else. How can you let readers read it for you? There is no background introduction, no world view, no training system, and no situation for the protagonist. What does he think?

You should go check out the settings in Demon of the Abyss of Realms. It's pretty good.

I'm just as confused as before, withdraw.

The more I read, the more confused I become 😥 Generally speaking, I feel good. I feel dizzy when I see the power system, and I can't understand what you are writing →_→.

The creativity is okay, but it's too wild and unrestrained. Let yourself go and write in a way that only you can understand. . Don't doubt it, readers are just confused. Either write more carefully and verbosely, or make it more interesting.

Although I haven't read it yet, I hope the author can avoid more minefields, so that someone will definitely be willing to invest. Come on

The opening of the horror world scares myself and scares readers away. Bad review.

I don't want to say whether the writing is good or not. Is this because I haven't read enough books? Why I don't understand a lot of things.

Being able to write so that no one can understand it is also a skill 😅😅😅😅

It's a mess, but after reading a few chapters, I have a good idea and a good atmosphere. Come on, author!

Author, honestly, have you been influenced by Blue and White Society? You wrote more than a hundred chapters, and then you threw out the outline and read the new book in the same way as rising dimensions.

After reading a few chapters, I can't see the background and ability system of the protagonist's world at all, and I feel a little dizzy 😅

It's so confusing and confusing that the author himself probably can't even understand it.

I didn't even watch it, I just quit after reading the introduction. I hate the desire to make the main character's name the same as mine, so I didn't want to continue reading.

After reading more than 10 chapters, I couldn't understand it, so I slipped away.

It's so confusing, I just had to read it and stopped reading it when it was released 😵

Can't read. . . . Write one paragraph, jump to another, and then end the previous one in a hurry.

What this author wrote is really messy. . . . . The writing is messy, what should I say? It's like the kind of book that uses a bunch of lofty words and the author feels it's awesome, but in fact the readers will only feel that it's awesome. I really don't recommend reading it. If you can understand the author's wonderful brain circuits, you can read it, but I think not many people can read it. The plot itself shouldn't be particularly bad (mainly because I didn't understand what he wrote, so I roughly understood the outline), but mainly because of the author's writing style and narrative methods, which simply don't look like they were written by an adult carbon-based creature, which made it particularly uncomfortable to watch.

I've only read a few chapters, but there are too many erroneous sentences. Please take a look at them after you've finished writing. It's a good book but it's incomprehensible.

Cheating and turning into cannon fodder is also a gift.

The author didn't finish it, it's unfinished.