Chuunibyou's Journey to Infinite Villains

Let me talk about my impression of this book. I have just finished the first part of this book. My feeling is that the writing is a bit green. The author may not be very good at writing suspense novels, but I can see your efforts and changes. To be honest, this book does not have too many poisonous points. The plot is relatively smooth. In my opinion, it is better than those that use poison to persuade people to quit. Is much better, but the plot can be said to be a bit boring. As a suspense novel, there is no climax, as a mystery novel, there is no reasoning, and as a refreshing novel, it is not very enjoyable, and it seems very mediocre. When I saw your recommendation vote and reward, I was honestly stunned for a moment, but I felt it was reasonable. To sum up, there are two points: the ups and downs of the plot as suspense and the excitement of the novel. The two authors can try to use this framework. As for the author, how you operate it is your business. You can start from the protagonist's character, or from the supporting characters, let people feel the essence of the suspense work from the main line, and bring readers a sense of satisfaction from the small storyline. The second point, author, is that you are so miserable because you don't know how to promote yourself. You need to go to the book circle. Every day there are people calling the book shortage, Shennong is dead. You have to show up more, so that others will know about your book and come to test the water. If you have any suggestions, you can refine the details of the first ten chapters. , In case people feel too confused after reading it and leave. There are still many writing errors in the article, which are quite dramatic. If you have time, the author can try to modify them, but don't blindly modify the previous chapters. The subsequent plot is worth looking forward to. You know this, right? Finally, I don't want the author to be more precise here. As long as you feel that my words are helpful to you, please write a better chapter to report on me. The recommendation vote has been voted, and the book has been pinned to the top. If you want to give a reward, I am not a financially well-off person, but I will still subscribe. Damn it! ! !

The writing is very nice I don't know why there are so many recommendation votes Maybe it's because the author is new, and there is no py to recommend the book The writing is very interesting

Author, your opening routine is too cliche. I didn't want to read it when I saw this. Author, you should write the opening quickly. Readers like me don't have that much patience. Come on, author.

One of the heroines? ? ? Co-author of the harem article, see you again in the world. No, never again.

It's incomprehensible why readers don't want the heroine now. Could it be that they say they don't want the heroine because they can't find a girlfriend in real life? If a man doesn't want a woman, what's the point of living? Should he be a eunuch?

Oh, there is a heroine. Farewell, I thought it was a villain without a heroine.

For the first time, I encountered an obstacle when reading at Qidian. . . Let me ask the author, what is your educational background? No malice, just a rant, how do you manage to get close to 30% of your sentences to be bad?

You don't want to be a villain but you still write about it. That's bullshit.

After reading the title and introduction, I thought it was very interesting and suited my taste for chuunibyou. Then I read three chapters, read the comments, and slipped away.

My right arm seals the evil dragon from the ancient Eastern mythology, and my left arm seals the power of dimensional collapse! I inherit the bloodline of the three ancient gods and demons! My family has inherited (picked up) the heaven-cleaving and earth-cleaving battle ax of the ancient Chi You from generation to generation! My childhood sweetheart next door belongs to the Xiong family, which has been passed down from generation to generation. The sword that has accumulated years of dust on the wall of her house is the resounding Xuanyuan Sword~ Is it enough for the second grade~ If not, readers can continue.

I really don't know what to say... The first few pictures have almost no sense of immersion. I thought it was a chuunibyou. It's very disgusting that you gave me such a setting. How to say it specifically? I'm talking about my feelings. I don't know what others think. Anyway, I'll just talk about my feelings. 1. It feels like it's covered in a chuunibyou skin. In fact, it's still written in a way similar to the classic Mugenliu, although you wrote about the changes in the protagonist's personality. It's because the Evil Spirit Soul is loaded, but it feels inexplicably blocked from the front and back, and the sense of immersion is suddenly reduced. 2. Because the title and introduction of your book also include the setting and identity of your first chapter. Come on, the ones I clicked on are all because you added the words "chuunibyouyou" (except those who are looking for books to read in the book shortage). I didn't read the second part of your book because I didn't feel it when I looked at the front. 3. What do you think of the first 10 chapters? I feel a bit overwhelmed and very sudden. Because the readers attracted by your book title and introduction feel that this is not my cup of tea, so they give up the book and quit. 4. The sense of immersion has gone from strong at the beginning to weak to none. I don't know what you will write later. If you are planning to write a classic infinite flow routine, the name of your book... Attracts the wrong readers. Anyway, I think the protagonist you wrote at the beginning is the kind of person who usually sees infinite flow... 5. I estimate that more than half of the people who clicked in are because they saw the title of the book and felt it was novel, and they also prefer reading about this aspect... Ah, the one you wrote at the beginning can wipe out almost all of them. . . . Those readers who like this kind of unlimited flow... When they see this kind of name, they have no desire to click in. 😂 I will just tell you my opinion Don't care.

When I saw Chapter 166, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. There were too many typos and too many grammatical errors. The plot and details were too vague and too stream-of-consciousness. It was indeed the ability produced by Chuunibyou. It felt like I was watching a set of Chuunibyou. There were no details about the ability. I gave you a name for the ability and let you make up your own mind. The battle-related plot was also blurred out in a few sentences. When I saw Chapter 166 I still feel unclear about the first template of the protagonist, and I can't understand the other two templates even more. The protagonist's plans seem to be very powerful, but until the end, I still can't figure out what the protagonist did and why he did it. It just seems that he has gained a lot inexplicably. The author's writing is not good, the description is unclear, the setting is interesting, and the writing is flawed. It will probably be difficult for people who are not good at understanding the radio waves to watch it.

Why do people hate having female protagonists? The answer is obvious I have also read novels with female protagonists that everyone applauded With the forced separation of the female protagonist, the female protagonist allows the male protagonist to encourage and persevere when he is at a low point, and allows the male protagonist to get up. The sacrifice of the female protagonist , to the final rescue, to experience everything with the heroine, bit by bit, to grow old hand in hand in the end, people can't help but wish that they had a wife like this, what more could a husband ask for The whole book is rich in emotions, passionate, touching, indignant, excited, warm, etc. Various emotions The whole novel is perfectly integrated The main line is clear, and the appearance of the heroine is a finishing touch, which makes the protagonist's character fuller So it's not that there can't be a heroine It's that most authors can't control the plot, so it's better not to write it Emotional writing is not good, the progress is too fast, or it takes too much drama and is inconsistent with the theme The personality is difficult to deal with, the attitude is bad, or the setting is just a passerby, etc. Either the personality is too soft and it does not help the main line It is better not to write a vase It distracts the author from the main line, resulting in unclear meaning In summary, not writing a heroine is to support the author and does not want to write badly, or maybe I just want to see a good story and hope not to waste energy writing something.

Nowadays, part of the reason why we don't want female protagonists is mainly because some authors don't write well, so we simply don't want them. If you write well, we have nothing to say, right? Those without a heroine may not be poisonous, but those with a heroine must be a little bit poisonous.

The Stallion Story has slipped away, the Stallion Story is disgusting and human nature has slipped away

The most embarrassing thing about reading the novel is the section describing the eyes. It's three parts longing, three parts pain, three parts hatred and one part relief. I wondered how this could be seen. Are they all mind-reading experts? ? ?

Is there anything more middle-class than this?

Nowadays, there are a lot of romantic plots that fall apart, so it's better to write a plot that makes people want to stop. After all, if you want to watch the emotional line, there are a lot of romance and color things that you can watch without having to watch them in the plot flow. If the author wants to write a pure plot without a female protagonist and no CP, it's absolutely fine. Come on. After all, it seems to me now that there are many stories about female protagonists that were written in the later stage but the descriptions were not good, and finally fell apart and collapsed and had to be abandoned. Stop pretending that no cp doesn't make people happy, as if they can find true love through sex. Come on, author. I hope there is no cp and stick to it. After all, the harem story is too poisonous, and the emotional line is not easy to grasp. If female characters are not written well, they can easily become cumbersome or annoying.

The title of the book is seriously inconsistent with the character of the protagonist. The language is unclear in large sections and the word order is not smooth. It makes people think that a few chapters have been cut off and the whole book is just written by the author. It is disappointing😞

It's enough to defeat the enemy countless times and then let him go, it feels like he's just asking for trouble! ! ! ! ! ! !

It feels weird when I look at it. I always feel discontinuous. What's going on?

If you want a female protagonist, please go to urban novels.

The author wasted an hour of my life. What he wrote is somewhat NT. Please don't let me see this name again in the future.

Your introduction and harem will offend both people at the same time?

The levels are not clearly defined, and there is no heroine, but the protagonist cannot be a virgin! ! ! ! ! ! ! Also, the protagonist is a villain, so why does he always show mercy to those who are hostile to him? It's okay to be merciful once, isn't it pleasant? But if you are merciful almost every time, it's like being poisoned!

There's nothing wrong with the writing style or the subject matter, but I just don't have the desire to read on.

Highly recommended, a rare good book 🙂

Mainly because of the lack of writing power, other things, including its settings, are quite interesting and interesting, but there is no logic in the front and back. It lacks something that makes people's hearts move. Come on, I hope to bring us more surprises

I will give you all the recommendation votes tomorrow. Although there are some areas in front of you that are not good, the book frame is good and it will probably be okay. Now the book 87 is basically the same. The monthly pass is given to you. Come on, author.

Emm, after reading a few chapters, I feel confused. I can't connect and feel like there are a lot of missing parts in the middle. Things happen out of nowhere. We are still confused. It feels like we have missed something.