I Was Forced to Become a County Magistrate in Ancient Times

In order to write a book, I stopped reading, playing games, and watching videos. Is it worth losing your interest?

It's boring and too unreasonable. The eldest son of the great master is casually sent to death, and the gunpowder weapon is casually handed over to others. The price-performance ratio of silver is even more ridiculous. The author's original message: Isn't iron more expensive than silver? An iron can to hold things costs 2 taels of silver, a sharp sword used by soldiers may cost hundreds or thousands of taels, and raising ten soldiers will cost thousands or even thousands of taels... Isn't this funny?

If we can do so well without seeking hegemony, will the imperial court allow so many troops in one county? This is writing someone else's IQ down to zero. There are so many armies, counties, and cities with such great business interests and the court won't deal with you. Can you leave with an imperial edict or order? If the plot is not changed in the future, it will probably be difficult to become popular. I hope it will become a eunuch.

There are many flaws. One. There is a problem with the narration, and most of the content relies on narration. Two. There is a problem with Pig's Knuckle's character. I wanted to write it more casually, but it didn't highlight the character's characteristics. Three. There is a problem with the data. Tens of thousands or millions of silver taels were stored in ancient times. It is estimated that the author has no idea at all. Four. There is a problem in the family. The eldest son is still alive and an important military officer, but his legitimate son is to be abandoned? Five. He has relationship problems. He treats his wife, the people around him, refugees, officials, and enemies too casually. Six. There is a problem with the income of Journey to the West. How many days can the business operation get the income? Seven. There is a problem with food. How much food can you transport and take care of the refugees like this? Eight. There are problems with development. When you first arrive in a strange place, you don't know the details of intelligence, resources, manpower, and power, and it's child's play to start the industrial production process. Nine. There is a problem with force, even if it is a mob, but people who make a living by hunting all year round will not let you achieve such a battle loss ratio like farmers, especially since there are not many pig's feet equipment. Ten. There is a problem with the handling of death row prisoners. The author really does not understand the clan forces in remote mountainous areas and their way of thinking. It is a huge mistake and we will not allow outsiders to intervene. Direct public execution will only deepen the contradiction. After reading Chapter 58, I thought there was something wrong. Whether it's right or wrong only brings joy to everyone. If you don't like it, please delete the post.

One pound of grain is one tael of silver... Your money is too worthless

After reading the beginning, why is the first contradiction so vicious? A dandy is going to use it to die? Is there such a shortage of food at home? In other words, if the old man and the second wife really kill the eldest son, and the eldest son has no descendants, will the eldest brother come back and live in peace? So what do you think of this poisonous point? Or you can just write that the boss died in the war, and you can still talk about it when you are treated like this

Those who attacked the county government should be regarded as rebellion in ancient times. It's very unreasonable to chop them all down.

To be poisoned to death, it would be better to die without seeing each other

1. Time travel background, in my opinion, is just rubbish. People who were lucky enough to time travel, either with one stroke, starting from an orphanage, or a successful person, your background is very discouraging, 2 After adding this background, you still want to eat and wait to die. This is not one plus one equals two, but equal to n 3 Don't pursue the number of words. If the content is not good, no matter how many words you have, you will not be popular. Pure cool writing is not very popular now. Your writing feels like everyone is drunk and I am a loser. I have only read the first ten chapters and my personal opinion is for reference only. Revise the beginning. Your subject matter is very novel, but the beginning fails immediately. The more you read, the more unpleasant it becomes. Whether a book is popular or not does not depend on the number of words in the book, but on a good beginning to catch the reader's g-spot. At least the book will have a good start.

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