I’m Really Not a Proper Young Hero Across the Heavens

In the first chapter, the protagonist is a waste with a heart as high as the sky and a life as thin as paper. He only thinks about the Dugu Nine Swords. He even has the so-called hard work on other Huashan martial arts. He makes it seem as if he can easily learn the Dugu Nine Swords when he encounters them. Moreover, he can become invincible by just using the Dugu Nine Swords without relying on internal strength. He is really not even as good as Linghu Chong, his talent is not as good as Linghu Chong's, and his efforts are even worse than Linghu Chong's. What's the point of watching such a garbage protagonist? Even if you can get the Dugu Nine Swords, you will not live long, and you will just rely on the Dugu Nine Swords to show your prestige in a low-martial world like Xiaoao. In the subsequent world, there will be no protagonist who can do any swordsmanship and does not work hard on martial arts.

I can't take it any longer. He's a useless protagonist. He's lazy in practicing. He has a good eye but a weak hand. He wants to enter the martial arts world but doesn't want to endure the hardships of practicing. He started earlier than Linghu Chong and doesn't practice as much as Linghu Chong. He keeps making excuses. He can't even hold the sword stably. He only wants to practice the Dugu Nine Swords. He doesn't care about other things. He relies solely on his golden finger. Even if he tries hard, he feels like he's at a disadvantage.

In the first three chapters, Pig's Knuckle's character is very vivid and vivid. It is easy to understand at a glance that he is lazy, unwilling to make progress, complains about others, and daydreams. He knows that the world is dangerous, but he just doesn't work hard and continues to be lazy. Well, it can only be said that the author knows how to persuade people to quit, and a pig's foot with this kind of character can only say goodbye.

I didn't get past the first chapter. . . He is lazy, lazy, ambitious, impulsive and irritable, this is what I talk about every day. There were no cheats at the beginning, but in the world of Swordsman, if you don't practice your internal skills, it's too low-level, and if you don't practice your swordsmanship, it's too bad, so you just lie down and wait for the author to give you cheats? The author's creation of such a protagonist is too pure for the readers, right?

Leaning against the mottled wall was a girl who was full of decadence. Her originally gentle and shining eyes were now like a pool of stagnant water, as if she could no longer make any waves. She looked at the sky desperately and sadly, her thin crimson lips lightly opened: "Update soon."

I think the writing is quite good. The plot can be funny or serious when it needs to be. The sudden emotional line is acceptable even though it is a bit forced. Compared with other books, I think this book is very good. There is no brainless harem stud, and there is no villain to make the protagonist hold his breath. He will be killed when he needs to be killed. The plot is coherent and good, and the protagonist is really mean as his name suggests. Hahaha. Except for the writing style and the sudden emotional line, there is really nothing wrong with it. It is easy and funny to watch. I don't understand those who criticize the writing style, combat power, and world setting. Isn't this book just to make you happy? Why is it so serious? It is much more comfortable to watch than some books that force people to subjugate their wits and open a harem. 👍

I think the first two worlds should not be smiling, they are all worn out, unless you can write flowers

I can't stand it anymore, and it's not because the writing is bad. I don't know if it's good or not. I looked at the catalog and they all wrote about worlds that couldn't get any worse. For Gu Long Jinyong's martial arts worlds, just write one or two to ground the protagonist. Is it necessary to write so many? I feel that the world of the universe cannot escape those martial arts worlds. Is it because the world is small or the author has a small imagination? With so many movies and TV series, you have to play in The Swordsman and the Condor Heroes of the Tang Dynasty? Are you not tired of it?

The author does not intend to write a female protagonist, but in every world there are female characters who like the protagonist. If there is no female protagonist, there are women in every world who are ambiguous with the protagonist. If there is a female protagonist, it can only be said that they favor the protagonist and do not agree.

To be honest, if you win the girl's heart and give her so many scenes, and then refuse to accept her in the end, it would be better not to give her any scenes in the first place. A half-scumbag is worse than a scumbag! It's not pleasant to watch at all…