Trainer's Fighting Path

I have been reading it for so long, and I have all ordered it now 🙂 So I want to say something from my heart. The author is planning to work on the daily Shura field and the elf training battle in parallel. So far, it seems to be okay, and I am relatively accepting of the interweaving of both sides. However, the progress in combat training is indeed slow, and the author himself said that it is being revised, so I wish the author success. 😁 As for daily emotions, I know that the author wants to write about Qiao and Nazhi's Shura field, but currently, I feel that the progress of their relationship is quite abrupt, that is, they suddenly fall in love with the protagonist and start to be jealous of each other. I can't feel where their emotional trigger points are at all. 😅 As for fighting, I really hope that Chinese martial arts can appear in the system, and it doesn't have to be very professional. As long as some related martial arts appear, and the protagonist can be taught his own fighting spirit, and let them use it as a skill and use it in combat (or it is okay to use our country's martial arts concepts as a progressive idea to guide the protagonist's spirit training). After all, I don't actually understand martial arts myself. I just saw some karate and the like and knew that this is a popular martial art in the country. It is very powerful, but it still feels better to see the martial arts in my own country being promoted. 😡

It feels good, but it's a bit lacking. Keep it in your collection.

Hey, Jiangjiang has settled in this elf article.

The author is great, I have read more than 100 chapters and found that the excitement is not enough... The progress is too slow.

I feel that the prices are a bit confusing. Arceus is 10 million, Rayquaza is 9 million (this is already a big problem), but the Flame Bird actually costs 5 million. Does this mean that the two Flame Birds are worth the same as Arceus to some extent? It's outrageous, okay, then it costs 4000 to split tiles, 3000 to kick the bottom plate, only 2000 for bodybuilding, and only 1000 for super practical defense. I really feel that the price is quite unreasonable.

Is this picture okay?

Because Joey is a surname, Qiao Kui's full name is Qiao Kui Joy, and you can also call her Qiao Qiao, which is jojo.

There are two heroines with Nazi. The normal situation is that the male protagonist cheats and is turned into a doll to accompany him for the rest of his life.

To be honest, given the starting conditions of the protagonist, he must have been a big bastard before time travel. He relied on his master's obsession with fighting to steal gym funds to get around. The prison cell is where the pig's feet belong.

Nazi

To be honest, if this relationship is not handled well, I have no desire to continue watching it. Either I will accept it all decisively, or I will let the other person give up. I am really convinced by this urban bloody drama.

Why does it feel like it has become an urban love affair at eight o'clock?

It's okay🙂

Now that I've finished chasing it, let's briefly share my personal opinions 1. The first few chapters are a bit dissuasive. It's a bit embarrassing to be abused by a novice after traveling for so long. If it's about time traveling in the past few days, readers can accept it 2. The writing is much better later. The biggest problem at the moment is that elf novels only focus on the protagonist and two heroines. Many people who read elf novels mainly want to see the elf become stronger. , There are really few elves appearing now, and it feels dispensable to me. If it were not for the need to upgrade the gym, I think all the elves can be released 3. The number of elves appearing in the back of the system is too small. I think the system can change a few elves. After all, people who have traveled through the past cannot not want to change to powerful elves 4. The protagonist's mentality is a bit weak, a normal fighter

At first, I thought the writing was really good, and the early writing was really good. Then I continued to read it, but I couldn't stand it anymore. Your leveling up speed is like a turtle, and there are too many emotional scenes. The more I read, the more I can't stand it. I'll give it a first order and leave.

Essentially speaking, I read this book to read about the theme of elves. But now there are so many emotional dramas. And there are a lot of Shura field plots. I just want to simply watch the elves

Is the protagonist a waste without a system? Two months, level 3? ? If you say you don't know how to train, won't you find a way on your own? It's such a big gym, but there isn't even a book? You are still a freshman in high school, your school teacher, and the library are just decorations? Speechless😓

Don't call it fighting. I've read about 40 chapters, most of which are daily routines. The elves are nothing like that.

I don't even know if this is an elf novel or an urban reincarnation novel. . . Don't wear Pokémon skins

The writing is more to my taste. This kind of slow-paced and relaxed writing is very comfortable to read. I hope it won't get too complicated later. Good luck to the author.

If the elf novel is a novel, I think the elf skill pool cannot be limited to the game. For example, super skills, to put it bluntly, are the use of super powers. There is no reason to have skill barriers. For example, fighting skills, as long as they are related to fists and kicks, there is no reason that the fighting skills that only involve fists and kicks cannot be learned. I think these skills are like the secrets of fantasy novels. Since their essence remains unchanged, they can be learned naturally. It is just a matter of time. The above is just a personal opinion.

I finished coding the Alola chapter late at night. I estimated that there are about 50,000 to 100,000 words left, and the total is 850,000 to 900,000 words. I have something to say. I realized very late in the book that my writing style and writing rhythm were not suitable for elf writing. Good elf novels generally have a fast pace and a refreshing nature. The protagonist's elf becomes stronger almost every few chapters. I can't write. As some readers said, why do you see that in chapters 200 and 300, the elves are only over 20 levels? I didn't do anything either... Some readers also said that we came to see the elves, why are half of them falling in love? I didn't do anything either... Some readers said that the elves are so unpopular and they don't even have a mythical beast. Isn't it cool enough? I have no idea... I can only say that I tried my best to restore a rigorous and realistic world of elves... The real world is indeed quite difficult to enjoy. This world is a world where if a trainer does not reach a high level, he will be invited to tea if he brings a mythical beast. If you resist, the Four Heavenly Kings and the Champions will come directly and besiege a world with 30 elves... That's it for this book. It can't be changed. The theme of the next book will definitely be changed... That's it.

It doesn't feel good, I don't like it

Call me whenever Nazi comes back. If she never comes back, then we'll see each other again.

Brother author, please don't finish it in such a hurry. Even if you open a new book, you can update it every few days. Leave me a thought. There are so few elf novels that are mature in writing, good at telling stories and have unique characteristics. I really can't bear to finish them.

Oh yeah! 😀 Take a break... If you start a book again, you will most likely slip away to write original works.

When will you publish a new book? Do you dare to write another Pokémon book?

These recent pictures. The pace has obviously sped up. . . Does the author want to finish it?

Except for the Chinese-styled name, the plot feels okay. Is there any reference to the original plot later? If not, it feels like a shell.

The writing is not impressive, I look forward to the next original one