Elf: I Was Reincarnated into a Variety of Monsters

I also get some that have to have watermarks and it's very annoying

It's tied. Let's give some suggestions and understanding on the current content. It's for reference only. If it conflicts with the author's outline, it's recommended that the author focus on the outline. Don't repeatedly revise the outline because of readers' comments, causing the two sides to fail. As far as the current storyline is concerned. One is that the protagonist, as a versatile monster, can transform into any elves collected in the illustrations, giving him more choices in battle and more flexibility in tactics. And compared to the traditional method of collecting elves and then fixing them on the established team. Due to the implicit rule that "the protagonist cannot use elves as tools", he cannot capture the elves to achieve the achievement of the complete illustrated book. The protagonist who can change at will obviously does not have this restriction, and has the possibility of achieving the achievement of collecting the complete illustrated book - a 10,000 percent possibility. With Su Qian in hand, I have the world. One is that the protagonist is an elf. Compared with the protagonist who is a human, he has a natural advantage in driving other elves. When faced with beings stronger than himself, he can "you fight a group of us alone, and we beat you in a group." It can be seen that - if the author intends to write it this way - after the protagonist can turn into a mythical beast in the later stage, just like the sea god Lugia driving thousands of sea elves, the protagonist has the possibility of causing such a spectacular scene. Then let's talk about suggestions and speculations. I won't go through them one by one, it's too troublesome. Just write whatever comes to mind. At most, give it a serial number and make a layout. 1. The system adds points. Judging from the format of the system, this bonus point should be based on the game settings. Maybe the author didn't mention it in detail, or maybe I didn't look carefully. I'm not sure yet whether this bonus point involves attributes such as effort value. According to the system, it should only be racial value. I suggest the author explain it in detail later. However, as far as settings are concerned. I checked the information and found that the current number of complete illustrations is 898. If you include the different shapes in different regions, the number will be 900. Then—— [Arceus] Race value: HP: 120 Attack: 120 Defense: 120 Special attack: 120 Special defense: 120 Speed: 120 Total: 720 [Su Qian] Race value: HP: 48 Attack: 48 Defense: 48 Special Attack: 48 Special Defense: 48 Speed: 48 Total: 288 Then, even after adding points on average, in the case of a hexagonal warrior, the protagonist's racial value will look like this after the sum is 288+898=1186. [Su Qian] Race value: HP: 198 Attack: 198 Defense: 198 Special attack: 198 Special defense: 197 Speed: 197 Total: 1182 Arceus was crushed. Of course, the above premise is only on the premise that attributes such as effort value are not involved. However, it can be seen that it seems inevitable that Su Qian will become stronger and even become a super god. As long as he actually does [Su Qian is here for a visit] in every place and sneaks around every elf, the super god will be stable. However, here are the suggestions. There doesn't seem to be much data mentioned in the book. There is no sharp contrast in the data, there is no obvious feeling of becoming stronger before and after adding points, and there is no sense of crushing after a horizontal comparison between the specialness given by the system and other elves (only the system race value data). In this regard, it is recommended that the author add a small amount of data comparison later to visually show the gap before and after adding points, and the difference in data when Su Qian transforms into various elf forms. Once the text cannot be clearly reflected for readers to understand and the author needs to explain what is going on outside the text, it is a failure. Personally, it is recommended that when Su Qian has an elf form with a basically formed combat system (after transformation), data comparison should be included - but not too much. 2. Regarding Su Qian being captured and taken back I vote in favor. On the one hand, after the elf world is no longer an anime but becomes a reality, it will inevitably become complicated due to the complexity of human hearts and the dangers of society. Well, in this regard, as an escaped elf, the probability of Su Qian being captured is extremely high and reasonable. On the one hand, Su Qian needs to collect elven illustrations to become stronger. When he was weak, it was obviously a better choice to rely on trainers and human society as a springboard to quickly become stronger than wandering around in the forest and being beaten by society at any time. At present, I can accept the author's treatment, but to be honest, it is not good enough. The portrayal of Larulas is not good enough. The process of Su Qian's return to the nursery seems to be very passive, without any ease, which can easily cause readers' disgust. Su Qian did not consider that compared to the forest, he could grow quickly with humans as a springboard, but he repeatedly tried to test Larulas and always thought about escaping, which would inevitably lead to him being inferior. And this also involves the shaping of Su Qian, which will be discussed later. Secondly, although the characters and characteristics of Xu Hua and Xu Chengping have been shaped, firstly, Xu Hua is holding back and has to be Su Qian's trainer. Secondly, Xu Chengping seems to have a tighter waist. The second one is actually not very important. Most readers probably won't care, so I won't mention it and will just mention Xu Hua. Xu Hua obviously relies on Su Qian's strength. In this regard, to put it simply, the younger brother relies on the older brother, but the older brother is restrained by the younger brother. If the younger brother is a female character, it will obviously not cause too much resentment in the readers, but Xu Hua is obviously not a girl, so this character can only try his best to please, try his best to be Su Qian's help, become Su Qian's springboard instead of resistance, and not a condescending and self-righteous commanding Su Qian. In this aspect, we can actually see the author's choice. ——Xu Hua did not enter a trainer school, but a ranger school. Then this is obviously Su Qian's stage. Xu Hua is purely a tool to accompany Su Qian when needed. He plays the role of a tool that Su Qian needs to communicate with human society. But even tool people need to be lovable and capable of growth. This point, when I was reading the comments, I seemed to see someone saying that the author wanted to write Xu Hua to death. So I guess the author should have figured out how to deal with it. I won't say it anymore and will go directly to the next point. 3. Su Qian's understanding of elves To expand, it is Su Qian's understanding of Pokemon, Pokémon, Pokmon, and the IP of Pokémon. At first glance, it seemed that Su Qian knew a lot. Looking at it again, I don't even know the classic scene when Xiao Zhiba and Odie left the team. This immediately made me confused and confused. You say he doesn't know, but he knows everything that I or someone who has a certain understanding of this IP doesn't know. You think he knows, but as someone like me who hasn't done much research on this IP and hasn't watched many animes and played many games, he doesn't know anything about it. I feel that maybe the author wanted to write about Badadie, so he forced Su Qian not to know about it. But if this is not necessary for the plot, then it is over. It has to be reasonable and the reason must be explained in detail. All in all, this is more difficult for me to accept. On the contrary, I completely accept Su Qian's arrest. In the former case, I couldn't stop bleeding, because it was reasonable for Su Qian to be arrested, but this one is obviously not very reasonable. Let me follow Su Qian's understanding of elves. As far as the Variety Monster is concerned, it is obviously more suitable for the tactical flow than the power crushing, and tactics are based on knowledge. Since Su Qian can transform into any elf, he can obviously master the tactics very smoothly by himself, such as Shou Po, Huo Bao, Ice Crystal, Weakness, Weather, Space... There are too many, and there are too many possibilities. To mention here, I won't mention the title of the book. Everyone who has read it will understand that in an elf article, an Eevee used a stand-in to play a trick. One Eevee is my entire Eevee family, and each stand-in is an evolved form of Eevee. Can't Su Qian do it? The Variety Monster can also learn to be a substitute. My Variety Monster has dozens of substitutes. My Variety Monster is all the mythical beasts. My Variety Monster can initiate all tactics and can transform and switch tactics at any time. Not to mention dozens of substitutes, even just six. The author said that Su Qian can turn back into a human in the later stage. Okay then, Su Qian will be his own trainer and direct his own substitutes to fight in the alliance. I will be my own elf team. At this point, it depends on how the author plans to write. In this regard, what I said is obviously contrary to Su Qian's understanding of the barrenness of elves. Either the author adds that Su Qian only plays games and is the king of talking about elf IP, or Su Qian is studying hard in the elf world and making progress every day, studying for his own rise. And here we have to talk about the character's growth. 4. Su Qian's character creation and growth The Su Qian created by the author is an ordinary person from a peaceful modern age. He is relatively salty and content with the status quo. If there is no danger, he is willing to stand up. He does not have a strong desire to fight and is more casual. An, prefers to eat and drink, has his own persistence and view of right and wrong, and has the kindness of ordinary people. He is relatively careless, has no future plans, and is not forward-looking. He is not someone who can discern details and then connect them together to see the whole picture of things. He does not have a strong sense of crisis. So Su Qian will be caught, so Su Qian has no expectations about the collection and prospects of the illustrated book, so Su Qian adds points based on his feelings without considering the total number of points that can be collected and has a development direction. If it were not for the fact that the illustrated book has more than 800 points and Arceus only has more than 700, his number may have been exhausted, so Su Qian did not seriously explore the ability and influence of the illustrated book. I just got there and found that skill upgrades can be superimposed with an experience bar, and that was it, so Su Qian did not consider the skill needs of his own combat system for his own development. He would not fight elves specifically for a certain skill to meet the initial tactical requirements. He would just fight whatever elves he could catch, without any specific goals. This is all Su Qian's character that led him to behave like this, and his choices also reflect his character. But precisely because of this, he has the ability to grow. Whether it is the maturity of his character or the increase in knowledge, this growth is predictable. People with this kind of personality usually need to face a major blow to cause changes in personality and mentality, and this is often an inflection point in the plot, prompting the character to mature, making him pursue strength and knowledge, making him know how to plan, making him cautious, making him strong but also burdening him with something. From my current point of view, if the author plans to write this way, then the point should be that Su Qian is an experimental subject, and he has been constantly laying the groundwork. Let's put this aside, the author may have thought very well, but it is slightly lacking in writing and processing, but this itself is quite difficult. It is not easy to structure a novel and write it out, and this aspect can only be practiced through writing. 5. About Larulus I didn't want to say anything about Larulus at first, but just now I suddenly discovered that Larulus was the heroine, and I was immediately shocked. There is one point here. First, the initial portrayal of Larulas is not very likable. There is no cuteness in her character for the time being, unless there is a twist that makes everyone like her immediately. The other point is that even if the protagonist is dressed as an elf, he is still a human being. And if a person falls in love with an elf, especially if he turns into an elf but can also change into a human later on, Larulas obviously can't change into a human. If he wants to fall in love, it's really... The subject matter is a bit different. This involves a question of priority, a question of what the author wants. Compared with most female romance novels, Qidian male romance novels often focus on issues such as the male protagonist's strength and power development. The love line is often not the main line and is not necessary. For most authors, if they can't write about the romance between the male and female protagonists, then they would rather not write it than have to add it. This will ruin the reading experience. In this regard, judging from what the author has created so far, I suggest not having a female protagonist, keeping the original outline, and not forcing the protagonist to fall in love. After the protagonist develops and becomes a mythical beast in the later stage, his lifespan seems to be no longer limited, and whether the heroine can keep up with him is a very serious problem. A vase character will not be lovable in the heroine position, and if Larulas is a support, then there is no need to force them to fall in love. And if you have to have a love story, and you have to do it on the sidelines, then I suggest that you just don't have a female protagonist. It's not limited to a single female character, and you can just have more romance with multiple characters. Riwei will not fall in love or get married, but don't be like Teddy. If you have to write this kind of thing, it's better to give subtle hints... If the author must decide whether La Rulas is the female protagonist or the single female protagonist, then it is recommended that the relationship be more intimate and pure in the treatment. It is better not to clearly state that they are in a relationship, but the readers know that they are in a relationship... In the end, if you are not lovable, you would rather not be there. Finally, cheers to the author. Finally, I thought about my words again. I really didn't expect that the post was still being reviewed. When I posted it at noon, I suddenly found out that it was still being reviewed and had not been posted at all. I felt numb.

Groudon realized his dream

Shanaido

The author is still very good, but he always likes to make himself and readers uncomfortable in key places. Readers complained about the work's poor performance, and the author felt uncomfortable after reading it. Let me talk about my impressions. If the author is in a bad mood, you don't have to read it, because they only single out the parts that are not handled well and do not praise the parts that are well written. The initial description of the characters made the readers deeply disgusted with the breeding house family. Later, the readers finally had a good impression of them, and Kasa was hacked to death. Many of the characters in the back are also arranged in this way. They were finally shaped and cut off immediately. Once it is touching, if used too much, it will make people uncomfortable. In the first hundred chapters, the protagonist has a 50-50 chance of beating any stronger character. His hard power relies on tactics. Starting from Phoenix King, his strength suddenly increases greatly, but the opponent is replaced by various mega elves and mythical beasts. It still feels strange. Then in the time-travel chapter, the protagonist finally seemed very powerful, but the author arranged a Hupa to force the protagonist to almost non-existence. I can only say that this kind of direct plot killing for the sake of writing the plot is really bad. The master spirit of the gym was injured, and not one of the more than 30 people in the gym had a normal head. The champion said that licking dogs is really licking dogs. The characters and behavior of fantasy beasts and mythical beasts are half like college students who have not gone through puberty. That's not to say it can't be this kind of character, but it feels like it was deliberately written to make everyone's character low, worse than a sidekick who died on the battlefield without any description. As a reader who just reads all the way through, I sometimes feel uncomfortable. It is normal for readers who follow up to complain.

I was dumbfounded. Lalu Lasi was obviously a foreshadowing. Lalu Lasi came first, and then the protagonist came. In what way does Lalulas's behavior and behavior not match her character? Is it possible that for a strange defecting Variety Monster, La Lulas did not follow the trainer's order to hunt down, but also betrayed the past and became the protagonist's licking dog to satisfy some readers? Because of today's test push, many people came out and thought that the protagonist being captured by La Lulas was a huge poison. Haha, this is considered poisonous, I have nothing to say. All I can say is that I really can't write the cool articles these people expect. Some people also ask why there is no illustrated book of Lalu Lasi... There are so many different things about Xiaolu, can't the author bury some foreshadowing? There's no need to spread out everything and write it, right? A little spoiler, the protagonist's system has a reason, first there is Xiaolu, and then there is the protagonist. The family where the protagonist is born only looks ordinary. In fact, only the rookie trainer Xu Hua is really ordinary. His parents and Xiaolu both have problems. Really... Can't I even write foreshadowing in novels now? Is it true that a book is good only if it is promoted horizontally?

Referring to the Pokémon games and movies, there are scenes where the monsters turn into humans. Therefore, the protagonist will turn into a human form in the future, but his essence is still a changeable monster. The human form is just a form, the same as changing into a cat. For readers who just want to see the protagonist who never changes, you don't have to read it. Qidian also has many novels about people who never change. I like watching "Slime Reincarnation" very much, so I understand the alien beast novel like that. If I have to jump out and say it, the protagonist of the alien beast novel cannot change into a human being. What this says is no different from some religions: We have the final right to interpret God and cannot misinterpret teachings...

I finished reading it last night and found that the author was complaining that the number of subscriptions had been declining, which made me feel inspired. When it was put on the shelves, the author said that he had an outline and could not change the plot. At that time, the author should have realized the current situation of low subscriptions. Why? You have to give readers something to look forward to. Your current plot is like the tragic death of Kogoro Mori's family and Dr. Agasa after 50 episodes of Conan. Conan and Ai Haibara decided to take revenge and worked as detectives to save money. As a result, they solved other cases for 50 episodes. Conan kept thinking about playing games online and arguing with others. The author said that fewer people subscribed to Mo Hen's fast-paced books, and now readers can't accept the slow pace at all. However, the readers who can stay are already very tolerant of the slow pace. After all, the Mohen section is equivalent to the second copy after it was released. The tragic death of the Xu family has not yet been explained (Xiaolu is depressed, and the protagonist has not heartlessly bickered online. In order to portray Xiaolu's maturity, the protagonist is like an imbecile.) Finally, to summarize: the author, you wrote the plot before it was released, and you wrote it like this after it was released. It's just that there are no main supporting characters to write about, so we can only write some new supporting characters. But everyone has feelings, and it also costs time. Why did you write all the main characters in the free chapters to death, and then write new supporting characters in the paid chapters? (Besides, these supporting characters only left the factory once and disappeared) Anyway, what are you doing?

Alas, I can't stand it any longer, so I withdrew first. Originally, I didn't want to deal with the poisonous points in the front, but I really couldn't hold it in anymore. First of all, the Variety Monster's transformation, Doudou Eyes. The Variety Monster in Rocket Group in the anime can prove that Doudou Eyes is not certain, and the transformation is so unskilled. The eyes of the blood-winged dragon he transformed into are normal, but the tail at the back is not perfect, and there is a flame bird elf egg at the back. Originally, I I also wanted to see the protagonist in the future wear six, and suddenly there was an extra elf. I thought about it again, so I don't have to use it as a tool, it's okay, it's over, and it's not over yet. Then I got a transformer, and I had to change later. Where did I go? It's just this transformer. If the future is exposed, it will be troublesome. It's troublesome. It's not a pity. It's too embarrassing. I won't watch the rest. After this series of punches, I really can't stand it.

I found that most readers didn't understand the whole Variety Escape incident. There's no way everyone is reading too fast now. As an author, let me explain it. In the entire incident, from the birth of the Variety Monster to the strange point, the driving force behind it was Liu Ming. In a sense, she shaped the strange Variety Monster now, and the original source of information was La Lulas's "Artificial God" plan. Yu Chu from the Dark Gray City Elf Center guessed right. Lalu Lasi is the semi-finished product of a man-made god, and the protagonist is the finished product. Why did Liu Ming do this? Because her son was a scumbag and couldn't get into college. He had to go home and squat at home. So she had to find a way out for her son. Therefore, she took the risk to create an 'artificial god' to help her son so that the scumbag could stand out. (See Chapter 21, Liu Ming discusses his son's future work, and Chapter 27, Xu Chengping goes to see his old superior.) After several experiments, the Variety Monster was born. The protagonist was just born, isn't he reflecting on life? Liu Ming went to see it once (see Chapter 1), saw a dull guy, and thought it had failed like the past experiments. So I left it alone. Unexpectedly, the protagonist was an old Yinbi and ran away directly. Then, Liu Ming immediately realized that the experiment was successful. According to her husband's request, she sent the semi-finished Lalu Lasi of the Artificial God to hunt down the protagonist. The order was to observe its actions and to hunt it back. After returning from the hunt and listening to La Lulas's report, she knew that the matter was almost done, so she must let Variety Monster become her son's initial elf. There is no other way, this stupid son has no choice but to rely on my mother to help him out. And haven't you noticed that when Liu Ming was talking to Lalu Lasi, she looked at her for a long time. She can talk to Lalu Lasi. She is actually a person with super powers. It's a pity that he didn't inherit it. This son is too cheating. So as long as the protagonist escapes, Liu Ming will chase it back no matter what, and try to make her son accept the Variety Monster. At the same time, she believes that her son's character can make the Variety Monster gradually accept it. But what she was thinking about at this time was that the Variety Monster was a newborn mythical beast, so it was so smart. She didn't know that there was actually a time traveler inside. The above clues, I saw that there are buried clues in Chapter 27 of "The Obscene Fist Stone"... In fact, they can be summarized, so I will explain them now.

This year's readers are really not good, the author has to find the pictures himself

I think you have put down your easy label. . . There's no need to trick people into it with that. . . .

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When I was playing games, I always felt that collecting all kinds of unknown Pokémon illustrations was the happiest thing. But when I was writing the novel, I realized that as a trainer living in the elf world, it was impossible to collect all illustrated books. No matter whether it is financial resources, energy, or emotions, it is impossible to do such a thing. Only those who master the transformation of elves, ever-changing monsters, and dreams can do such a thing. If I could transform into all the elves, it would be like having the entire illustrated book. The original intention of this book is to collect complete illustrations.

White Dragon (Reshiram) Kirulian

First of all, the thirty-one defense test section has been written. As long as the opponent's strength is at least two levels higher than the protagonist's, which is about level 2-30, the defense released by the protagonist is not much different from a piece of paper. For another example, Paras's dry skin properties can make him immune to water damage. In the level 1 Paras battle, Kyogre's root wave will also restore blood if he takes one move. But in the novel, it will just turn into powder and dregs, because it cannot absorb such a huge amount of water energy. For another example, no matter how smoothly the elves on the ground use their lightning fists, if they encounter a flying enemy that can fly in the sky and throw AOE downwards, without terrain assistance and unable to use long-range skills, they will have no choice but to run away. For another example, many moves are actually released with forward swings and intervals. The most obvious one is in Chapter 47, where the one-horned rhino's stomp was directly interrupted by Nidoqueen lifting it up. In the final analysis, the rigid pursuit of the application of combat routines in novels is to carve out a boat and seek a sword. Because I strive to create a realistic world, many battle tactics would be ridiculous if they were realized. The most typical tactic is to set up a double on the ground for poison defense. The opponent's trainer doesn't even think about it, just let the elf throw an AOE, and kill both of them. The double is useless. It is almost standard for high-level elves to master AOE skills. Only by seizing the right opportunity, releasing a substitute to block the opponent's key blow, and killing through the gap yourself, is the standard usage in reality. (Refer to the method of using the stand in Naruto's battle)

Su Qian

This book could have been better and more attractive. But the author doesn't know if it's because of the Wenqing disease. At every stage, he must write down his own people or elves. Some places are really forced to death, such as the Toilet King and the Sex Deer. If you come to read novels, not just to read them for fun, but at the very least, they shouldn't torture the readers all the way to the end. I think the author's writing style and plot are good, but the fact that he's only level 3 so far probably has a lot to do with his literary youth. Obviously with this subject matter, these short stories can all have happy endings, but if you torture the readers all the way, you won't get a good harvest.

After reading Chapter 106, I felt bored. You obviously have a plug-in that makes you stronger in battle, but you refuse to fight to become stronger. You play detective games hard and waste time playing adventure commissions. Being weak is the original sin. How dare you be so extravagant as to waste time! ? Even if it is "to make money", it is much more efficient to buy some Poké Balls and catch Pokémon/egg groups in the wild to sell than to be a detective... On the other hand, the author wrote 400,000 words and it seemed that he only wrote the plot in 23 days (15 days after birth, 3 days with Xu Zheng in the exam, 5 days after the family was wiped out). At this pace, the full 2 ​​million words would only take three months to write the novel, which is awesome...

Don't ask me again why the elf can't just break free after the elf ball captures it. This is obviously me adding complete settings to the elf world. It is set so that a certain amount of strength is required to actively break away from the Poké Ball. Let's talk about a very simple truth. If you encounter an elf in the wild and want to capture it, it must be in a hostile state. After successfully capturing it, it will still be hostile to you. Well, you treat it, and when you go to bed at night, it breaks away from the Poké Ball and runs away. How can trainers in this world deal with wild elves? Never sleep for 24 hours, staring at the elves? Or does the Poké Ball have a brainwashing function, so that it will automatically obey the trainer after being successfully captured? Or maybe your talk can brainwash it, and once you talk it through, it will follow you? Readers who say that level 1 Rattata can also break free from Poké Balls, please think about which setting is more reasonable. I said in the first chapter of the book, don't fight the setting...

After reading it, the ending was a bit hasty... A lot of holes were left unfilled, and a lot of things that could be expanded were left unfinished. The two dragons of space and time and the ghost dragon only appeared in the form of phantoms, and there was no plot for them... The same goes for the three dragons of Hezhu... The same goes for the three fools of Fengyuan... Only Groudon appeared, Kyogre and Rayquaza were silent. Chaomeng, who had been preparing for a long time, stopped talking after a lot of discussions... Xiaolu still hasn't mastered super evolution in the finale, not even the final evolution... The above are the most important ones, as for the smaller ones, various secondary gods of fantasy beasts, such as three mushrooms, steel insects, Deoxys, etc...

Is this the end? It's so sudden, there is obviously a lot to write about, what is the future of Alola, what will happen to Su Qian and Xiaolu in the future, and there is no news at all about the escaped Chaomeng, etc. I understand the author. He has many things to be busy with in his life. Writing this book is just a hobby and he has no intention of making money from it. Therefore, I support the author to deal with practical problems first and live his own life well first. However, I think the book here should not be finished in such a hurry. Maybe, in a few months or a few years, when the author's life is on the right track and he has extra time and energy, or when he has new inspiration, or when he encounters setbacks and confusion in life, you can come here and have a look. Don't forget that you have written stories that attracted many people. 😢😢😢 If, forget it. Finally, I wish the author good health, academic success, smooth work, prosperity, a happy family, an early son, a full house of children and grandchildren, and a happy family. 🙏🙏🙏

Hey, here I go again

This author likes to endorse the character's behavior in the chapter comments or at the end of the chapter, which is very funny.

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I hope the author will publish more extras 🥺 This Variety Monster really whetted my appetite. When I was chasing this book, the book happened to be written when Xiaolu's parents died. At that time, it seemed that there were two chapters a day, but later it was one chapter a day. I read it every day, and when I don't have time to read it, I save it for a week at most, and I will read it all. This book by the author of Pokémon is my favorite, no one. Alas 😟, in fact, I don't understand why so few people have read this book. I hope you, the author, can add more extras to fill in the missing holes.

Alas, I was thinking, how could it be over after I just finished reading 526 chapters and raised "100 million" books? Finished spreading flowers! I wish the author a new book as soon as possible.

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Who said that? ! The ending didn't mention laying eggs at all! My anticipation was in vain! Who is it!