The Magician in the Entertainment Industry

This book is cursed! It's got all the "saintly" elements, not bad at all. Good job getting full attendance bonus! Keep it up! 💪 It can't get any worse, it can only get worse! 💪💪💪

The writing is alright. The protagonist is incredibly busy: working at a radio station, performing in a theater troupe, performing at a bar, writing and singing songs, plus his daily life, making the novel feel disorganized. The plot is melodramatic: divorced with a child, I tolerate that; ex-wife not repaying loans, I tolerate that; initially, she brings her family to beg for reconciliation…

The writing style of this book is fine, but the plot is problematic. Nowadays, novels with a strong sense of "feel-good" or "enjoyable" content are quite popular, and it's best if the logic is sound. This book has already given the protagonist a cheat code; in other novels, he would become a star in just a few dozen chapters.

I think this book is pretty good. Keep it up and keep working hard!

The author's writing is quite good, but the plot is too rushed. A little more slice-of-life content would be helpful. There are too many songs all at once; perhaps some magic tricks could be interspersed throughout. After all, the book's title is "The Magician."

Keep it up! Not bad. As long as the later episodes don't fall apart, it'll still be watchable!

It's well-written, but why doesn't the main character marry the female character?

I've read all the chapters, and apart from the somewhat clichéd plot, there's nothing wrong with them. How come only six or seven comments in total, half of which are telling the author to flop? Author, are you that hated?

She still went to the palace to serve the royal family. 😴😴😴

I just want to ask if there's a "rope to heaven"?