King of Action Movies

I've read about a hundred chapters and let me know what I think. Brother author, first of all, don't slap someone in the face just for the sake of being slapped in the face. It makes no sense for the coach and the teacher's wife to rebel. We are not short of money and have no hatred. We have to let people betray the protagonist. There is no foreshadowing or logic. Then the part where the protagonist beats someone is handled so poorly. What the hell is that? Mr. Qi, who is a big boss in the background, and the employees in various departments of the company have no solution at all. If the author hadn't made a fool of himself to see how you write it down, he would just gg. And for the heroine, he has to arrange a bad gambling mother, right? There are too many bad tricks like big brother's reversal for the sake of reversal, and slaps in the face for the sake of slaps. Really I'm tired of watching it Writing about entertainment and kung fu movies, I feel free to write. You can write more about the studio, kung fu, popular science about martial arts details, the response before and after the movie, what direction it leads, there are so many things that can be written about, if you don't do it, it's really uncomfortable to be slapped in the face if you don't screw up the routine, I complained about this That's enough. Let's talk about the author's good points. The author is very good at dealing with emotions and daily life. At least he has more than 80 Qidian works. This is your advantage. My personal suggestion is to try the invincible daily novels for your next work. Don't engage in those fancy slap-in-the-face routines. The ones in Qidian are really not popular...

I kind of don't want to read it. Although the female supervisor has money, what's the point of taking away all the money from Sophia so naturally? They are just boyfriend and girlfriend, not a couple, and Sophia is both a director and an actor. Shouldn't he keep some money around?

The male protagonist traveled through time and copied the director, and the female protagonist traveled through time and copied the song. It was double-traveling. It was uncomfortable to watch.

Chapter 44, Ganmei Digua said, I remember that in the original movie, Aunt Thirteen was played like this. Does this mean that Ganmei is also a time traveler? How else would she know about Rosamund Kwan? Also, I always felt that Gan Mei was also a time traveler, and then the author changed the setting, right? Has the previous article been modified?

It's really embarrassing to the name King of Action Movies, it's too poisonous.

I vomited! It's all well written before! No pretense or slap in the face! Suddenly there was a scene in the middle of kicking someone's leg off, which made me sick after drinking! Chapter 91: Poison again! And it's highly poisonous! I can't bear it anymore!

@I am 3 years old this year Advance first and then suppress As a young person and a time traveler, how can I do it without a sense of superiority? And it's not that he knows how to do it, he only knows a little about it. Only such people dare to rush in and do it recklessly. If he doesn't know how to do it at all, or if he really knows how to do it, he will have a lot of worries. Being reckless requires paying a price and receiving education. In the early stage, Ding Baoyi's self-confidence and Gan Mei's blind trust will be backlashed. Starting from the film festival, he will be educated. You seem to have read my manuscript and sent it before I hit you 😢😢😢😢

The pace is too fast. It's not that fast pace is bad, but that if you only have 160,000 words, if you write at this pace and it reaches 1 million words, you may not have much to write. I find this fast pace very comfortable. But I still hope that the author will pay attention to being a little more watery before it is put on the shelves. Otherwise, it will be finished with not many words after it is put on the shelves. After it is put on the shelves, it will be scolded.

After reading a few chapters, it turns out that the protagonist is a trash who helps others do evil! And that Gan Mei is actually the heroine? Such a disgusting woman! As expected, it is rubbish matching rubbish!

Hey, a good novel is ruined. It's not interesting to see the part about beating someone. Why don't you sue the protagonist anyway? No matter what mistake he makes, you can't beat him. It doesn't matter if he makes a big mistake and the protagonist beats him. How can you beat someone who molested his girlfriend? If he doesn't pay for the medical expenses, you can beat him. Sibei, you have your own company and your own money. As long as you make a good movie, who cares whether you fight or not? You have made the media godless. As long as the officials don't say anything, they don't care what the media does. Aren't they just dogs? They will be called when they are in use and driven away when they are no longer needed. As long as the rice is delicious, no one cares who grows it. This is an action movie, not a documentary.