King of Action Movies

The pace is too fast. It's not that fast pace is bad, but that if you only have 160,000 words, if you write at this pace and it reaches 1 million words, you may not have much to write. I find this fast pace very comfortable. But I still hope that the author will pay attention to being a little more watery before it is put on the shelves. Otherwise, it will be finished with not many words after it is put on the shelves. After it is put on the shelves, it will be scolded.

I've read about a hundred chapters and let me know what I think. Brother author, first of all, don't slap someone in the face just for the sake of being slapped in the face. It makes no sense for the coach and the teacher's wife to rebel. We are not short of money and have no hatred. We have to let people betray the protagonist. There is no foreshadowing or logic. Then the part where the protagonist beats someone is handled so poorly. What the hell is that? Mr. Qi, who is a big boss in the background, and the employees in various departments of the company have no solution at all. If the author hadn't made a fool of himself to see how you write it down, he would just gg. And for the heroine, he has to arrange a bad gambling mother, right? There are too many bad tricks like big brother's reversal for the sake of reversal, and slaps in the face for the sake of slaps. Really I'm tired of watching it Writing about entertainment and kung fu movies, I feel free to write. You can write more about the studio, kung fu, popular science about martial arts details, the response before and after the movie, what direction it leads, there are so many things that can be written about, if you don't do it, it's really uncomfortable to be slapped in the face if you don't screw up the routine, I complained about this That's enough. Let's talk about the author's good points. The author is very good at dealing with emotions and daily life. At least he has more than 80 Qidian works. This is your advantage. My personal suggestion is to try the invincible daily novels for your next work. Don't engage in those fancy slap-in-the-face routines. The ones in Qidian are really not popular...

I kind of don't want to read it. Although the female supervisor has money, what's the point of taking away all the money from Sophia so naturally? They are just boyfriend and girlfriend, not a couple, and Sophia is both a director and an actor. Shouldn't he keep some money around?

Chapter 44, Ganmei Digua said, I remember that in the original movie, Aunt Thirteen was played like this. Does this mean that Ganmei is also a time traveler? How else would she know about Rosamund Kwan? Also, I always felt that Gan Mei was also a time traveler, and then the author changed the setting, right? Has the previous article been modified?

The male protagonist traveled through time and copied the director, and the female protagonist traveled through time and copied the song. It was double-traveling. It was uncomfortable to watch.

I vomited! It's all well written before! No pretense or slap in the face! Suddenly there was a scene in the middle of kicking someone's leg off, which made me sick after drinking! Chapter 91: Poison again! And it's highly poisonous! I can't bear it anymore!

It's really embarrassing to the name King of Action Movies, it's too poisonous.

@I am 3 years old this year Advance first and then suppress As a young person and a time traveler, how can I do it without a sense of superiority? And it's not that he knows how to do it, he only knows a little about it. Only such people dare to rush in and do it recklessly. If he doesn't know how to do it at all, or if he really knows how to do it, he will have a lot of worries. Being reckless requires paying a price and receiving education. In the early stage, Ding Baoyi's self-confidence and Gan Mei's blind trust will be backlashed. Starting from the film festival, he will be educated. You seem to have read my manuscript and sent it before I hit you 😢😢😢😢

Hey, a good novel is ruined. It's not interesting to see the part about beating someone. Why don't you sue the protagonist anyway? No matter what mistake he makes, you can't beat him. It doesn't matter if he makes a big mistake and the protagonist beats him. How can you beat someone who molested his girlfriend? If he doesn't pay for the medical expenses, you can beat him. Sibei, you have your own company and your own money. As long as you make a good movie, who cares whether you fight or not? You have made the media godless. As long as the officials don't say anything, they don't care what the media does. Aren't they just dogs? They will be called when they are in use and driven away when they are no longer needed. As long as the rice is delicious, no one cares who grows it. This is an action movie, not a documentary.

After reading a few chapters, it turns out that the protagonist is a trash who helps others do evil! And that Gan Mei is actually the heroine? Such a disgusting woman! As expected, it is rubbish matching rubbish!

I finally know why I can't continue writing this novel. I've read about a hundred chapters and I'll tell you my thoughts. I skipped it, the number of words was too white and watery, I skipped it, and after reading the plot, I felt that the plot was dragging, and it was not interesting enough. I took it when I needed to show off, and 90% of it was narration. Why should I read online articles with so many narrations? Let me go and see how good the text is, and how much more literary heritage it can provide. This is a dry waste of time.

After seeing Chapter 155, I was already poisoned. Goodbye.

Death due to poisoning, the first part was good, the subject matter was good, but the later part became more and more witty, the coach and Cao Hao were poached by the opponent for no apparent reason, and it was half-understood, and the behavior at the airport was found out, at least it was accessible to the entire network. What kind of situation should I report? I have to at least clean it up. I didn't expect that the male lead would be so useless, and he would be seen as such, and in terms of remuneration, he has already filmed three movies, and the male lead has a total box office of 2 billion. How many millions are the salary? Nowadays, a little fresh meat can charge tens of millions even if he has no works at all? You, a male actor who still has works or writes, directs and stars in your own films, only have a few million? Nowadays, actors' remuneration accounts for at least 50%-70% of the cost of a domestic film. Do you know how to calculate it? And you said that the cost of costume movies is low, on the contrary, the cost of costume movies is the highest, and it's very mind-blowing to watch. Forget it, I won't complain anymore, it's boring.

It doesn't mean that you can become a superstar just by possessing martial arts skills. A good martial artist can design a routine and anyone can play the role. I don't see anything special about the protagonist. Is it easy to get started just because he is the protagonist?

Those who write entertainment articles like to arrange CP for the protagonist before his career is on track🙄

Occasionally, I read The Magician in one day. I won't talk about the shortcomings. After all, you said it was the first time you wrote it. The advantage is that I have added your book to my bookshelf, which is enough. There are still few words, so I'll keep my recommendation votes for you every day. I'm writing this to let the author know that someone will read your book and stop being cool.

I can't even stand the fictional entertainment articles.

This is the first novel that starts with the filming of my favorite Tai Chi Zhang Sanfeng. Unfortunately, the process of filming the martial arts scenes is very unsatisfactory. Only relatively simple movements can be used to complete a single shot of a martial arts scene. Overly complex movements are impossible. The final fight of Tai Chi Zhang Sanfeng cannot be completed in one shot unless the original actions are re-modified. As the pioneering work of the new martial arts genre, the box office in this world is only 400 million. If you ask me to add another zero, it is not much. The box office in this world is very high. Think about the martial arts movements of Zhang Sanfeng in Tai Chi compared to the movements of Huo Yuanjia and Chu Liuxiang in the early days when they were fighting and shouting "hahahahahaha". It is completely a comparison of World War II weapons and spears and bows. This is a change in the times. Under normal circumstances, there is online publicity. As long as the promotional video is posted online, it can cause a sensation.

It's poisonous, this heroine, well, this is going to be cool

I feel like there is something wrong with the author's plot design. Although it is a traditional story of suppressing first and then developing, the suppressing part is too protracted, and sometimes it takes several chapters to resolve some frustrating plots. This can be done for long paving, but some unnecessary bumps should be dealt with as quickly as possible. The other is that the author is also talented in writing. Instead of writing about god-like opponents, I always write about pig-like teammates. You won't be beaten again and again, you won't listen after you talk, and they'll just stay there and make you feel disgusted. Even if I win, there is no sense of accomplishment, which is really frustrating. I kind of understand why there are so many orphans in the starting point. Finally, Yang's part was handled too blandly. It just went by like a normal plot progression, and the book seemed to have no climax or exciting explosion.

If you really can't find a job, go to the Wing Chun Hall to teach elementary school students some kung fu.

Please collect and comment on the new book, thank you all "The Resurrection of Uchiha Class at the Beginning"

Congratulations on finishing the book! The masterpiece is finished! 🌹🌹🌹

Is this how you play it from the beginning? Really, money comes first and I do whatever I say.

Look at it! How many people came through it?

Isn't it okay to write the protagonist well and make a kung fu movie? ?

I didn't see any action, I just saw a bunch of bloody drama.

The protagonist is so frustrated that he can resign. The author's arrangement of the protagonist can be understood as the protagonist is stupid In his previous life, he was a professional bodyguard in this life... It's unreasonable.