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Tsk, this writing style and the way of creating atmosphere don't look like a newcomer. I wonder which veteran author is the author?

😴😴😴 Let's wait until daytime to see it, the old corpse is a bit exciting...

I just discovered today that a certain setting in this book is very similar to a setting written by a big boss, and it's not as interesting as what he wrote! ! Ah! I'm going to die!

Is this woman the heroine? There seems to be this trend? The heroine of the vase? Keep crying? It's upsetting to watch! In this weird world, this kind of heroine is just a troublemaker and a troublemaker! The book is good, but the heroine is not. . .

The writing is good, but the heroine is not good. Weird novels with female protagonists are not good. Author, if you look at books of the same type, they either don't have female protagonists or the female protagonists are weird. What we look for in horror novels is excitement, not romance. To be honest, the heroine's role is not good-looking, and her style is completely wrong when she appears. And the male protagonist is a bit licky. This book might have done better if it didn't write about the heroine and only wrote about horror.

The writing is very good and the characters are well drawn. Have those who say the female protagonist is a failure have considered the male protagonist? Both parents are dead, and the male protagonist himself is weird. Even if he is mutated, he is still weird. In the story, the dark shadow has a tendency to assimilate the male protagonist, and his feelings will gradually be lost. Wouldn't it be nice to have someone to rely on? Looking at the mysterious resurgence next door, Yang Jian knows how to preserve his feelings as much as possible

How should I put it? The author created the atmosphere well, but the heroine's character and performance were not very likable.

Hurry up, I like this, the scarier the better, come on, come on, don't cherish me just because I'm a delicate flower, come over here!

The author always says that he is not a trumpet, but he is lying to me! I must have written a few novels and opened a small account here.

The writing is really good. I feel that as long as it is well written, it can be compared to the House of Horrors.

Author, tell me frankly, which god's vest is it?

After reading more than 30 chapters, I can't stand the incident involving the heroine's father. What's the use of dragging a classmate to do this kind of thing? You can just take a picture of the abnormality with your mobile phone and call the police. It has no logic and makes you cry. You are still a college student, so I can't stand it anymore.

Damn it, updated again 😰

Everything is fine, except for the heroine who persuades her to quit. A pig teammate in a horror movie is too cheating.

Stupid human being, I got your 888

Staring at you

Feel like the world view is too vague? Although the story is exciting, what about the power of the country? Does weirdness only appear around the protagonist? Just shut up the mouth of any police chief and captain, and then no one will spread the word outside? Normally it would spread within a few days, right?

The results came out and I was very helpless. But it doesn't matter. That's it. June 25, 2021 8:44 pm

There was a strange movement in the darkness, woo! Woo! Woo! Hiss! Hiss! Hiss! There was a biting cold wind of coldness, resentment, madness, and despair! It makes people tremble all over and suffer severe pain in the condyles! Goosebumps stood up all over my body! Suddenly! A pair of pale, delicate little hands reached out from the darkness and grabbed the short author! Tear! : Ah, "A burst of heart-rending screams came through. Suddenly there was no sound, and there was a delicate chewing sound in the darkness! It made people feel like their hearts were beating with fear! A sudden chill! The whole body was trembling. This short author is gone! The end of the play! "Pale Little Hands in the Dark"

When will the protagonist recover?

The atmosphere is created quite well, the heroine is too charming, and the description is also speechless.

Why did you stop updating 😭