Yin Tianzheng, the White-Browed Eagle King

The daily dose of poison lives up to its name (suitable for beginners, but for someone like me, it's truly a daily dose of poison. After all, I used to read Battle Through the Heavens with great enthusiasm, but now I can't even finish a single chapter).

The author's writing is fine, and their storytelling ability is good. The key is to have a clear niche. You need to find a genre that's easy to sell, has a broad audience, and is likely to be successful, such as unlimited storytelling (in my layman's opinion). The premise and plot are there; you just need to find an unusual subplot (avoid overused ones), a good angle, and positive values.

The protagonist is extremely contradictory; he is selfish, despicable, and cowardly, yet he also wants to appear virtuous and wise in front of others. The author has little experience and hasn't read many history books, so he can only indulge in wishful thinking. The book's historical sense is exaggerated and empty, lacking any sense of cultivation or martial arts, making it unreadable.

Please give me your support! I hope your writing gets better and better. If this one doesn't work, there's always another. What doesn't die, will eventually succeed. Don't give up halfway through something. Others will only praise you and belittle you. When you achieve something, they'll all flock to say good things about you.

It's well-written, but if you're going to write about Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber, then just write about Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber. But you had to add a Shushan world. To be honest, many young people haven't read Shushan. If you were writing it as an advanced world, that would be one thing, but the difference in martial arts between the two books is too great. You put them together in one book.

The premise was good, but the author completely ruined it. The protagonist is invincible from the start, the synchronization is terrible, and the Heaven Sword and Dragon Saber plot is haphazardly moved to the Shushan world. With Changmei around, what business is it of yours?

Can't you just focus on writing a proper book?! We've been in a reading slump for a year! After the old authors left, what kind of rubbish are these authors writing now? So erratic and mischievous!!! Stop writing novels, go write all sorts of funny anecdotes, you'd have a brighter future! Have you all watched too much domestic animation these past few years? Everything you write has that half-funny, half-nonsensical style of domestic animation!

Why do you guys like hodgepodge books so much? I've never seen a single hodgepodge book finish. Don't these authors have any self-awareness?

The protagonist's personality was written too erratically by the author; I didn't like it.

Honestly, this is getting things backwards. What are the clones for? They're there to do the "dirty work" and help the main body develop. Lately, they've been writing about clones all the time; it's ridiculous.