Pirates' Voyages and Guns

List of fighting forms: (The picture is from the game and is for reference only)

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The writing is okay, but I'm a little confused about the setting. Pig's Knuckle knows part of the pirate story, knows about the Four Emperors, knows about the Kingdom of Goa, but doesn't know about Germa, the Celestial Dragons, or the Sky Gold? This setting is too far-fetched.

The fanfic must be enjoyable enough to read it

Guiqiu Zhuidu, Guiqiu Zhuidu, I hope everyone will not keep books. . . In these days, when newcomers and new books have no exposure, it is easy for their books to be neglected. Now the follow-up recommendations are determined by the number of follow-up readings. I hope you can follow up and read more. Thank you all! !

Except for the protagonist who insists on changing weapons and using a sword, everything else is pretty good. I don't think it's necessary at all. Can't an ax work? Mainly because I'm really tired of seeing people using swords.

This introduction made me think that the pirates in the title of the book refer to pirates in modern times in history. . . .

Why does it feel like it's so cruel to the mainstream? Surprises always happen when the protagonist wants to develop steadily.

I've seen more than 20 chapters about Pig's Feet and I don't even know the plot. Isn't he a time traveler?

I don't know why the plot doesn't include aborigines, it makes no difference.

At first, I didn't write very well when I met Pirates. How about a really funny command like Heihachi? How big is the deck of a ship that requires dedicated command? And it's even funnier later that Navigator almost sent it. I wonder if you are not in a game world, so you force yourself not to take action. Are you afraid that it is not dangerous enough and the manpower that dies is not important enough? Are you afraid that the ship will move?

I feel that the design of Philia Republic is very good. It should not be all original content. The author can diversify and create more countries and devil fruits.

How did I find out that one of these subordinates was going to rebel one after another? This is too outrageous. The protagonist has eaten fantasy beast species, and his subordinates can actually rebel. Isn't this equivalent to my boss being Jack Ma, and I feel that there is no future with him, so I go to join the richest man in the county...

It's too colloquial, One Piece is written like Liang Shanbo

The writing is actually pretty good, but since there aren't many fans in the fanfic, I feel like I might as well not write the same thing at all. Many people only read fanfics because of the popular characters, right?

What is a golden finger? Write clearly. There must be a fixed logic no matter what.

What you wrote doesn't sound like Pirates and Navigators have paid their weekly salary. .

I hope the author can change the height as much as possible. After all, he is also a phantom beast. It is reasonable for his body to grow to three meters again 1.8 Meters is acceptable for a superhuman type, but it is indeed a bit short for a phantom beast. Don't be like the original Luffy.

Am I too dirty? Every time I see the protagonist's name, I think of Durex and James Bond 😂

In fact, I saw the Straw Hats gathering in Shampoo Land to go to Fish-Man Island two years later, so I stopped watching it. I knew the plot entirely from reading fan fiction. The same goes for Conan. When I was a kid, I watched a few episodes with unreadables. I also knew the plot from reading the novel.