From the Swordsman to the Imperial Master of the Ming Dynasty

Why can't I understand this? As a high-ranking member of a party, with a large army in hand, a few Jianghu people could be wiped out with just a raise of their hands. How dare Shaolin Wudang do this? The demon sect is dedicated to rebellion, and it is understandable that the government is against them. What do these Shaolin Wudang beggars and others count? Just kill them directly. What qualifications do these Jianghu people have to talk to a frontier official?

Translate the introduction: Took Zuo Lengchan's hand and fought with Dongfang Bubai.

I gave up after reading Chapter 90. The author's choice of words and sentences are all good, but the whole story becomes more and more incomprehensible as I read it, especially since the protagonist is young and has low martial arts skills, but everything happens around him. This is understandable, after all, he is the protagonist, but he is still the central point. Even the prince, Jin Yiwei Baihu, Qianhu, etc. All discuss with him in an amiable manner, so it is incomprehensible. I just want to ask: Why should he? I really don't understand the logic here. I feel that in his current state, he should not have the strength to become the core and decider of the story. The story can happen around him, but now he should be more of a bystander or a limited participant, rather than the absolute core. There may be a more detailed story background later on, but from what I've seen so far, I just feel that the story is getting more and more complicated. The key is that it's complicated and unorganized, and I really can't read it anymore. I feel that after Song Ye left and King Zhongshun appeared, the story began to become more confusing. The above are just my personal opinions. Maybe my understanding is limited, so I have to say goodbye.

I really can't stand it after reading the latest two chapters. How should I put it, this calligraphy is good, but there are two problems that are particularly annoying. First, the role of martial arts in political struggles is over-exaggerated. I probably understand the author's intention, but it is an exaggeration to think that martial arts masters are already on the same level as nuclear weapons. First of all, assassination cannot solve the problem in the struggle. The grass on the grave of a certain transportation team captain who did this is already unknown. Secondly, the martial arts skills are not up to the description in the novel of how to take the head of an admiral out of ten thousand troops, just like searching for an object. No matter how high your martial arts skills are, you can shoot a volley of bows and arrows. Besides, both sides have top-notch martial arts. Although the protagonist's side is slightly inferior, they can definitely eradicate the princes and grandsons. In this regard, it should be the people in power who are more afraid of this kind of desperate assassination. Second, let's not talk about whether the protagonist's revolution can succeed under the social conditions of the mid-Ming Dynasty. This trend of change is already digging into the roots of those in power. No revolution is bloodless, but the protagonist is still looking forward and backward, trying to compromise with the "reactionary" ruling class. This will not succeed. Moreover, as a leader, he would go out of the control area and wander around pointlessly without any problem. This is not only irresponsible for his own safety but also irresponsible for his career. It's just baffling. In general, the author's writing skills are okay, but his approach to dealing with things is unsatisfactory. If he only wrote about martial arts, it would never make people feel so entangled. This book really made me feel the same feeling that Cao Cao said when he quit Hanzhong, "it's useless". Just give it up, and the writing will still be successful. Read on, the plot inside is really painful. I'd better raise it first

I'm a little speechless, but I can watch it, but the more I watch it, the more irritated I am! It's not that it's poisonous, it just feels wrong!

It's a bit annoying. The emperor doesn't care much, he has tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of troops at his disposal, and there are several first-class masters at home? . Every day, gangsters from this or that gang come to make trouble.

Begin the transition from fairy grass to poisonous weed. . (Like the Dragon Boat Festival and the bright moon in the Mid-Autumn Festival!)

The writing is not bad, but you have been writing about children for too long. There are more than 150 chapters, and they are still as old as 8.9 Years old. They are not even older at all. Even Jin Yong did not dare to write like this.

To be honest, even those who are not emperors in Hunchaotang will end up badly.

The more I write, the less I understand! And the writing is getting more and more verbose! You said that when you write about political struggles, you write about struggles, but why do you end up with compromises everywhere? It's easy to say that you have received guidance from a teacher! ?

1. If you want to write about martial arts, then write about martial arts. If you want to write about fighting for world supremacy, don't just practice internal skills and hang out in the world. You might as well leave this kind of thing to the supporting characters. As an author, when you make an outline, you feel it is quite harmonious. As a reader, it may be slightly confusing. Technology and internal strength and martial arts are different from the differences between Eastern and Western civilizations in terms of underlying philosophy and are incompatible. The advantage of time travel in historical literature is to set up a real world that has existed as objectively as possible. In this way, it is meaningful for modern people to travel through it. 2. There is too much emphasis on the battle of wits and using long dialogues to supplement logic, which is actually very unpleasant. 3. If you, the author, blindly attach importance to the interests of family and country in emotional processing because the protagonist's living conditions are dangerous and he does not trust anyone, then this will feel very hollow. If you are interested, you can read "Silver Fox". This novel basically makes up for your shortcomings.

Why does this character need to practice martial arts? Just read the Four Books and Five Classics!

Everyday detoxification still relies on the support of peers

This book is like being hungry and finding a restaurant to order twice-cooked pork with rice, but the boss is still preparing to go out to buy meat.

It's like watching a Japanese movie. At the beginning, there are all kinds of tricks with hands, mouth, etc., But in the end, it only lasts one and a half minutes, and it becomes completely useless.

This book is really good, good luck to the author. Normal transformation stories are not so exciting. The protagonist transformed into a girl and came to the City of Night. He met his half-sister on the Siguo Cliff. After secretly falling in love, they went to Ashina to find Genichiro to break the engagement. He is currently participating in the Holy Grail War in Fuyuki City in the chaotic sea of ​​stars.

The writing was too procrastinating, so it's normal to have poor grades.

Many people can't stand this book, and subjectively, readers are generally impatient. The objective reason is that the theme of this book is not actually martial arts, and the narrative is scattered and complicated, the description of the weak stage is too detailed, and too many tricks are involved.

Why do these novel writers always have trouble with "The Sunflower Collection"? Looks like another dead eunuch

An eight or nine-year-old child having an abortion? This genre is rare now.

What's the point of going crazy and raising the Dongfang Invincible😳

As strong as Guo Jing, Zhang Sanfeng had to stand up against hundreds of Mongolian heavy armored cavalry! Jiuyang Dacheng Zhang Wuji + Guangming Zuoshi + Dharma King + Five Elements Flag, facing the Eight Cavalry of Divine Arrows, they still have no confidence that they can escape. Only when you reach the high martial planes "Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty" and "Wind and Cloud" can you break this limit!

How can I reach chapter 8 or 900 and still be at level one? 240,000 People are all for nothing?

This recent paragraph is well written, but it's a pity that the Qidian monthly ticket has an upper limit

Some people really don't understand the military's suppression of martial arts masters. What kind of light work is that? . . That's funny. Guan Yu's martial arts is not high? And riding a red rabbit horse. . . I'm afraid none of these martial arts masters can beat Guan Yu! Guan Yu will be wounded by arrows. Don't talk about internal strength. You have to know that the strength of an ordinary strong bow is already more than two hundred pounds. With the shear head, the cutting force is increased ten times and the pressure is suppressed. Can your internal strength stop it? You might be able to block a stick weighing two hundred kilograms, but can you block a needle weighing twenty kilograms? Peerless masters are afraid of peacock feathers and pear blossom needles in heavy rain.

Damn it's so pretty, do you have a book club?

It can be regarded as a farming novel under the cloak of martial arts. The writing is good.

The latest chapter is very sensational, but not vulgar.

I read a comment saying that he slept with Princess Qin and Princess Ning? Ah, isn't it revealed between the lines at the beginning that there is a need for revolution? Why arrange this plot?

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