The Southern Inspector of the Red Chamber

It's like asking if there is Qin Keqing. Don't get me wrong. I'm not a Cao thief 🤓😌. I just think that the most pitiable character in the whole story must be helped. You think so?

I originally planned to write it directly in the work-related section, but I was afraid that some people might not read it, so I wrote it directly in the book review circle. You are also welcome to come and discuss it. First, let me talk about my views on Lin Daiyu in the original work. In fact, there is nothing much to say in itself, or I dare not summarize her in any sentence or word. Because the original author clearly showed us a Lin Daiyu who was about 17 years old. My 17-year-old here is partly based on the ending of Cheng Gao Benlin, and partly based on the story Grandma Liu told Jia Mu. Judging from the past 80 episodes, Lin Daiyu was at least 16 years old at that time. As for whether she was a full year old or a full year old, we don't care for the moment. What I want to say next is based on this, and then talk about Lin Daiyu in my novel. I admit that my writing skills are limited, and I cannot write something similar to the ethereal spirit of Lin Daiyu in the original work. Of course, I am also afraid that my writing will make people laugh, or even really insult Lin Daiyu. Rather than this, it would be better not to write it. I believe that most of the book friends who can read this book have followed the previous work. What I want to show you is Lin Daiyu after she turned 17. Some people may wonder, is this still Lin Daiyu? My answer is yes. Some people can't accept the grown-up Lin Daiyu (becoming like Xue Baochai), so they can take a detour on their own. Why I said that it became like Baochai, because it is based on the combination of Chai and Dai. I can say with certainty that if Lin Ruhai had not died, and if Lin Daiyu had not gone to Rongguo Mansion, then she would eventually become Xue Baochai, or even surpass Xue Baochai. Xue Baochai here does not specifically refer to Xue Baochai, but to people similar to Xue Baochai who follow feudal ethics. However, this is what many people who are obsessed with Lin Daiyu cannot accept. The reason why Lin Daiyu becomes a fairy and disappears into smoke in the original work is a manifestation of the author's unwillingness to lose his original intention. Of course, it may also be in memory of something. But the development of things follows rules. One thing I have always emphasized in my own books is that we must abide by the rules in everything, just like we must abide by the law in today's society. There is a gap between ideal and reality. Daiyu is the ideal, Baochai is the reality. Can the two be separated? We are all adults and I believe we all understand the truth behind this. Speaking of this, it does have some preaching meaning, so stop it here to avoid adding more jokes. I still chose my ideal and forcibly left my ideal in the world, even at the expense of changing her and even the environment around her. I believe that the mature Lin Daiyu is the most perfect. Maturity here refers to maturity in all aspects. Such people are rare in reality, but they can be reflected in novels. Of course, everything I do is really for the protagonist (both male and female). If you are in your position, you will seek your own policies; if you are not in your position, you will not seek your policies. Now that Lin Daiyu has sat in that position, she should understand what she is carrying. This is what Jia Mu said, and she is a real lady from everyone. Instead of feeling dejected about your own destiny and treating the people or things around you with a pessimistic attitude. Changing one's destiny against the will of heaven is not about relying on any one person to save it, but more about self-redemption. And I think Lin Daiyu in the original work should have this ability, but the surrounding environment had a great impact on her, forcing her to retreat. Now that I have changed the surrounding environment for Lin Daiyu in my novel, if she still behaves as passively as in the original work, it will really disappoint me, and she will not be the first of the twelve beauties. That's why she changes. This change lies in the change in her outlook on life and worldview. I have also mentioned this in my previous work, so I won't go into details here. I made her mature, which also paved the way for the rest of the story, rather than eliminating her spirituality. Wang You is pursuing the way of inner saint and outer king, and Daiyu, the daughter of Lin Ruhai, should also pursue it. This inner sage and outer king is also a kind of combination of hairpin and dai!

I don't understand what the author of this book is writing about, so I try to read as much as possible about the first chapter of the work. It's not about the Jia family, but about the Wang family and the Zhen family. The protagonists are also the Wang family and the Zhen family. Can't we tell the priority? I really don't know how some people read books. The Jia family plays a role in connecting the Wang family and the Zhen family. In the eyes of the Wang family and the Zhen family, the Jia family, except Jia Mu, can basically withdraw from the poker table early. The Jiangnan Ocean Boat is a good proof. The Jia family supervised the construction of the Ocean Boat back then, so they could not fail to see the role of the Ocean Boat. But now, only the Wang and Zhen families can afford to support it. The 24 chapters are intended to illustrate this point. Some people fail to understand one thing, that is, the ending of this book is not a happy ending, but a new life in ruins. The author wants to break and then build. This is the tone of this book. If you write about the love between a man and a woman, you and I spend the whole day together, what does this mean? Don't start by saying that this and this are not like the original, and that and that are so different from the original. I don't like that. The author is not Cao Xueqin. Anyone who likes sweet pet stories or happy endings can withdraw first. The first 80 chapters of the original Dream of Red Mansions take Bao Dai's love as the main line, interspersed with some tragedies related to the events of other members of the Jia family. On the surface, it can be said that it is about the Jia family, which is a fake story. But what about Zhen Shi (the real thing)? Lin Daiyu hasn't left the cabinet yet, I really wish she could stay and fly with the protagonist! I wish the protagonist would go against the whole world for her, so what has she become? I see you are so anxious that you are jumping up and down.

This book is too dry and boring to read. I don't know why you praise it so much. It's just boring and not enjoyable.

I also have here a hand-drawn floor plan of Cang Yang Building when I was writing the previous work. In fact, there are only two rooms in total, and the partitions between the rooms inside are roughly like this. Later, I specially compared the scale of the Grand View Garden in the layout plan of Rongning Second Mansion, and found that if Cang Yang Building was built according to my design, at least half of the courtyard would be in the lotus pond. Ha ha. This is embarrassing. I don't know if you can understand it either.

The floor plan of Rongning's Second Mansion and the timeline of the original Dream of Red Mansions

I was so confused after reading it. The author's multi-line development was a bit confusing. Moreover, the male protagonist does not stand out at all, nor does his youthful temperament. And the male protagonist is too stupid. One moment he appears to be very smart, the next moment he is extremely stupid, and he even likes to have a harem himself. I'm really speechless

Forcibly arranging marriages to create conflicts was terrible. Anyway, I was put off by these plots. I can continue to read Dream of Red Mansions, because it seems contradictory but he doesn't want to feel like a shrew. However, the author's Jia Mu, Mrs. Wang, and even the civil and military officials of the emperor and marquis are written like shrews. All expressions are on the face and language. Also, Wang Xifeng is too far from the original work. She is not suitable for peaceful people, and no one can persuade her. And there is nothing wrong with Mrs. Wang and her sisters in my opinion. A four-big family that relies on marriage must have Lin Daiyu as his wife? Crazy? Moreover, a family like the protagonist's mother is actually optimistic about it. I laughed. The co-author traveled through time and his family's thoughts were also modernized? Are the only people in the Jia family clowns?

After reading the character information and book reviews, I was successfully persuaded to quit. I have no favorite protagonist and one of the most annoying plots.

The most lacking thing in the whole Red Mansion is the awe-inspiring righteousness. If someone can write about The Red Mansion with righteousness and awe-inspiringness, then they are writing in a fancy way. Oh, I'm not talking about this movie.