Cultivating Immortality in Uncle Jiu’s World

Author, you'd better change Uncle Jiu's ugly face, such as being unhappy or something like that. An ugly face is generally suitable for difficult situations, or when he's angry, and lasts a long time, and Uncle Jiu usually won't show it in front of people, but secretly retaliates later. Many times when the protagonist teases Uncle Jiu, he will write "ugly face", which feels like a small matter.

It's possible to cultivate immortality, but the world of Uncle Jiu's Zombie World is in the end of the Dharma era. How to get the resources to cultivate immortality? I don't have the resources to cultivate it well.

The protagonist's emotional intelligence is so low! When my uncle came here, he couldn't even say a word of flattery. He was kind enough to help you practice with ginseng without saying a single kind word.

There are always missing words and typos in the paragraphs, and what does the word "kill" mean? It's better to use the word "kill" than "kill"! The passage always mentions that Mr. Ren cannot be "killed" by zombies. Is this how the word is used? Shouldn't it be possible to be sucked by zombies?

Don't always use Lin Jiu and Lin Jiu, please use Uncle Jiu. They are all juniors. When I keep looking at Lin Jiu's title, I feel that there is a lack of respect for Uncle Jiu.

The name "Lu Yue" really has too much cause and effect! If this is the view of the world of classical immortals, then Lu Yue is the "Great Emperor Haotian Wenhuang", which is a supreme honor. In the view of classical immortals, he is the supreme great Luo, the emperor of the Shinto. The cause and effect are too great. Of course, it wouldn't matter if the author didn't write about classical immortals, but about cultivation novels.        ，，，， There is a loophole. As "Uncle Nine" is the "true successor" of Maoshan, will he not know the meaning of "Lu Yue"? At least Maoshan is the "Shangqing" inheritance, so it's not unknown. But this is fine, let the protagonist become the product of "Lv Yue, the Great Emperor of Wenhuang" who "does less and seeks emptiness". Let's learn from the setting of "The Lord of the World" and let the protagonist inherit all the cause and effect of "Lv Yue", just like Xiao Meng.

If you are not good at portraying characters, how can anyone agree to accept you as a disciple when you meet them! Moreover, Uncle Jiu's image is that he is a very cautious person and will not accept apprentices casually!

Please, the author, stop using Ren Tingting as the heroine. Nine of the 10 books about Uncle Jiu have Ren Tingting as the heroine. Can you change it? It really looks too samey. The writing is okay, but there are a lot of typos.

A half bowl of water illuminates the universe, and a talisman brings ghosts and gods to life. He steps on the Yin Yang Bagua steps and holds a wooden sword to kill the demon soul. The yellow sermon clothes cast a heroic spirit, and the whole life will be clear and upright. Holding the wine above his head, he shed tears sadly to respect the Taoist. The heroic spirit of Shenzhou Nine is still there, and there is no exorcist in the world. Shedding tears and spilling wine, the spirit of heroism will last forever in heaven and earth. The red string glutinous rice is still there today, but the ghost hunter from back then is nowhere to be found.

Two chapters a day is a bit too little, and the big blade is about to turn blindly.