1924: Inheriting a Haunted Legacy

This book is very good, and if anyone doesn't know whether to read it or not, I can tell you that it is worth reading.

Write about the points that I think are problematic 1. The characters are not distinctive. Taking the protagonist as an example, the author writes that he is grieving for the death of his adoptive father, but the background explains that he quarreled and left home (the reason is unknown). The other children all hate his adoptive father, and he writes that he noticed The brothers are jealous of each other, but they don't express their opinions, fight, or even pay attention. It is written that he gave alms to child laborers to help stranger drunks. It is written that he regrets being a copycat. It is written that the first time he went to a dark bar (still undercover), he dared to drink everything and dared to reveal the details to a strange magician. . . These details do not create a coherent character image, and they are not coordinated with each other. I did not leave any deep impression after watching the movie except for the mental instability of the protagonist. The plot connection is not smooth. Take the bright line of investigating the identity/cause of death of the adoptive father as an example. The protagonist first goes home to wake up and finds an abnormality and gets the dice. Then he goes to the university to follow the clues of the dice. Then he is assigned a task and is captured by a cult. He escapes from the cult and learns about the epidemic. Each part of this line has no foreshadowing or hint before. Each time, you meet a group of new people and open a new copy. In recent chapters, it is said that the epidemic has infected a large number of people, and even the adoptive father was previously infected. However, in the previous plot, except for the female reporter hinting that she knew the cause of the adoptive father's death, there is no plot to reflect the existence of such a large-scale epidemic.

It's just too niche. Please let me know if you know how to cut it. If you don't know how to be a eunuch, I'll go to the book club to help you promote it. In addition, since it is such a niche, you have to mark the elements and write an introduction to attract fans to the maximum extent. For example, you can add a line directly in front of the introduction: [COC] [Investigator] [Running Group], which is concise and clear. Don't add "Cthulhu" to the tag. If you read 1 out of 100 Cthulhu online articles, I will burn incense if I know COC... The narrative, rhythm, and characters are all fine (if any new readers ask Shennong, I can guarantee a good book). The only flaw is that Western names are difficult to remember. My suggestion is to try to use names that look like Chinese names for easy reading. Or use some familiar and highly recognizable names: Arthur, Clark, Hugo, Irene, Victor, etc.

Support the author who dares to write traditional Cthulhu text. The character creation is good, but it is not in line with the current market. Author: Be mentally prepared

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I took a look at Yangshu, but don't be fooled by me😭😭. It feels really good. There are very few books of the same type that have this kind of atmosphere but are also readable at the same time. Others are either too obscure or too out-of-the-box. This one is really comfortable to read, and the character of the protagonist is also well written The title of the book is a bit confusing (but after I read it, the title became more and more pleasing to my eyes...). It was also recommended by a group of friends at the time. If they hadn't recommended it together, I would have read it and the quality was quite good. I wouldn't necessarily read it. I can only say that it was fortunate that I was interested at the time I won't say it anymore, come on. (V＾＿＾)v

The overall tone is gloomy and obscure, but it is a good book with a well-completed story. It's completely different from fast food cool articles. You can read it and give it a try. Not everyone can read it.

Not bad, it's like reading a paper book. Compared with online literary books, the language feels more physical, and the writing already has a Luo flavor before the story is fully unfolded. It's a bit slow compared to online articles, but it's still a masterpiece if you write it at your own pace.

It's too messy. Although there are many characters, none of them stand up, even the protagonist. The plot is the same. I wrote a lot, but no one is impressive. . . .

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