The Beginning Is the Immortal Dao Fruit

I write a little bit here and there, but I can't see the main line. It's very messy and has a bad look and feel.

Many people say this is a Taoist immortal... Me:? ? ?

Daily Poison Pushing is indeed well-deserved! Two chapters retreated

They have become immortals. Instead of going to the immortal world, they start looking for kindergartens to show off.

It's light, has a bit of flavor, it's pretty good

This. . . I was baffled by what I saw. The story is still in tune with my taste, but I feel like the writing is not clear. The story is also inconsistent and feels a bit jumpy. Nothing excessive.

It is clear that the monks control the world, but Longhu Mountain still needs to be canonized by the imperial court.

I think I need to show the awesomeness of Tianxian, hahaha, it's very well written.

Less than two hundred chapters updated in six months? Are you a snail or a turtle?

The clear soup is watery and has no nutrition. It looks like it lacks something and is boring and boring.

The more I read this, the more I think what I am writing about?

It's extremely boring. The dynasty is at its peak and there are so many demons daring to cause trouble. I'm afraid you've forgotten the humane dragon spirit.

After reading ten chapters, I didn't see anything talking about the number "water". By chapter ten, I saw the main character appear in 100 words.

The protagonist's name appears too much. Don't you feel awkward when you read it yourself? There are many places where you don't need to write your name, which is completely inconsistent with human reading habits.

After reading the public chapter, I still don't understand what story the author wants to write, game world?

I haven't read it yet, so let me ask, is this immortal from Taoism or from the prehistoric suture monster?

Doesn't Pig's Feet have any goals to strive for? It's not like everyday literature.

Ahhhhhhhh, I hate you, why don't you continue updating?