Jianghu Starts from Shushan

The creativity is very good, but the setting is too complicated and cumbersome. The Taixuan Jing of Kung Fu gives readers the feeling of being too dramatic. The multiple vests give readers a feeling of watery character count. The writing style is a bit childish (; 1_1). I feel it is more suitable for teenagers in the second grade of middle school. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it.

To be honest, the two of them were too awkward at the same time. If you only write about marriage, that's it. After all, the environment is ancient and not obtrusive. But you are a little uncomfortable with love. It was really awkward, so I asked him to leave...

The writing is unclear. I read five or six chapters and still don't know what kind of bullshit plot it is, so I gave it up.

I can't stand it anymore, bye!

When writing about the founding of Shushan, don't engage in any drama about seizing the direct descendant and becoming the emperor. I won't read it.

Very well written. Not enough to read. Please update.

Although Ye Erniang and Shi Zhixuan were in an affair, it would be better if they were beaten to death. If they did this, would they get twenty subscriptions now?

It's a hodgepodge of Jin Yong's Legend of Heroes and other different worldviews, plus some games and so on. Alas, seeing the Shushan sect, I can't hold on anymore.

Dazahui's martial arts games always have a flaw in the Jianghu background, and the main plot is difficult to grasp, and it seems to be hitting here and there.

That's too much to say. It's enough if you have an identity and system guidance. If you do so many messy things, it will be a show.

The setting of the martial arts game world is quite good, but the pace of starting a faction is a bit fast. After defeating Meng Shentong, you can stabilize it.

Why don't you show me how to make Yellow Turban Lux?

The writing is quite good, but the transition is too fast when it comes to writing, and the explanation is not clear enough, which is a bit sloppy. In short, there are no major flaws But if you want to be called a good book by old bookworms, you cannot lose the details.

And this blind date was also drunk.

Can the author put symbols such as [] and [] on the attribute panel and martial arts names, so that it will be easier to read when looking at the data?

I just think this Lu Wushuang is strange. It's interesting for you to have such a woman. What kind of martial arts is it if you are not free in the world?

Seriously, what are the differences between the masters, great masters, and heavenly beings written in the book? Especially the great master. Is it just a transitional stage in the middle, or is there a big gap? What a scam.

The writing is okay, but there is no system. There is no possibility that the protagonist can become a master. I don't think it's cheating. The main reason is that the protagonist behaves like an outsider. The realm of martial arts is messy. There are different levels, such as master, grand master, and heavenly being. The expression is a bit weak. The main performance is basically reflected in the martial arts, and there is basically no realm. I can understand some character settings. It hasn't reached its peak yet, but how can Murong Fu be on the same list as Li Ruohai, Li Tanhua and others. Zhuge Xiaohua is completely gone. It can be seen that the author wants to try his best to describe a river and lake, but he still pounces. Grandmaster, Heaven and Man are like background boards. The other writing is quite good. Generally speaking, the writing in Zongwu is pretty good. Of course, if I really clear up Ye Erniang, I will think it's my fart.

Is the author playing Jin Yong's Legend of Heroes?

Is Shushan the Shushan of Huanzhu Louzhu or the Shushan next door to the Qingcheng sect in Swordsman?

The writing is okay, you can take a look.

If Yang Guang can be killed, the whole situation will change drastically.

It's my first time to invest more money. Can you give me some tips?

By the way, is it Wild Ball Boxing or Xingyi Boxing?